Arshi FF: Hopes and Ambitions. Thread 5 - Page 56

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Posted: 10 years ago
Shweta ji...

Suhaanii Raat Dhal Chukee
Naa Jaane Tum Kab Aaoge

Jahaan Ki Rut Badal Chookee
Naa Jaane Tum Kab Aaoge


Nazare Apanee Mastiyaan
Dikhaa Dikhaa Ke So Gaye

Sitaare Apanee Roshanee Lootaa Lootaa Ke So Gaye

Har Yek Shammaa Jal Chookee
Naa Jaane Tum Kab Aaoge


Tadap Rahe Hain Hum Yahaa
Tumhaare Intezaar Me


Fizaa Kaa Rang Aa Chalaa Hain Mausama-Ye-Bahaar Me

Hawaa Bhee Rukh Badal Chookee
Naa Jaane Tum Kab Aaoge
Edited by pixiegirl - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome...
Loved it...
Khushi, she nailed it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Saari kudiyaan aayiaan
Shweta hamari naa aayi
O te kendi si
Main thursday aawangi
Friday bhi aa gaya
Shweta hamaari naa aayee
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Posted: 10 years ago
Shweta when I said that you will pull the rug under our feet or knock our breath away with the next update , I totally didn't expect it this way.
We were all focusing on Jhangid and what harm he can do to Khushi . Brainstorming how Arnav will save Khushi.
You my dear as usual came up with a shocker of an update again😲. Totally unexpected. As I was reading the update, I was jumping up and down that Jhangid was put away and we need not worry anymore . You then throw a curve ball 👏.

He pressed his lips together and smiled, yes he knew she was 5 months into pregnancy, he had attended their past two appointments and each time he was amazed at the life that was steadfastly growing inside Khushi's womb, " Will you tell me next time when that happens?"

Arnav tucked his one hand in his pocket and with the other he slipped Khushi's wayward strand behind her ear, "Have you thought about the room for the nursery? Which room, what colour?" he asked.


Khushi didn't know why she said, what she said next but the words spilled before the thought formed in her head, "Won't you kiss me goodbye?" She whispered earnestly.


Arnav's head jerked up, his eyes searched hers, when he saw the need to connect mirrored in hers, he sweetly cupped her face and his lips descended on hers, he was like a man parched finally finding his oasis, his lips rythemically moved over hers.






Arnav hesitated, he was nervous as hell, which was very rare for him, but in this moment he had this overwhelming desire to SAY IT, "Khushi, I ..."






Arnav struggled to get away as three men held him, he elbowed the man who was holding him from the back. He was swiftly dragged away down a unmarked path into the jungle, making it clear that they didn't intend to kill him but had abduct him!







Where are you Aman? Aman my man please save CMji once again ... You have the brains, contacts and insider information. As Anjali put it...
Someone needs to make him see this and that some has to be you.

He needs to see to it that Arnav let's Khushi know much he loves her and she was the only one he ever loved..






Sushil rest in peace😭. Our hearts go out to you. Salute to you.


Absolutely Mind Blowing .👏

Can't wait for the next update. This is torture.😭 Can you pleaseee update early next week.😉
Edited by vks11 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow what u did. CMji abducted 😭😭
u hve to give an early update pls
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing and gripping update. I have focused on what Janghid will do to Kushi but never imagined threat will be against Arnav. What a marvelous stroke you gave us. Is it naxals who kidnapped Arnav or is it still Janghid people under the disguise of naxals?. Enjoyed blushing and flushing conversation between Aman & Anjali and also enjoyed man to man talk between Arnav & Aman. Aman instigated Arnav to focus on what Kushi wants than to what importance does the three letter word really holds. Arnav is irrevocably in love with Kushi and like a simple family man securing Kushi and their child's welfare in case of any mishap to him. Kushi asking for Good-bye kiss is awesome 😳.

Time is precious and we have to express our feelings on right time otherwise we may not ever get that opportunity again. I guess next chapter will be full off action rescuing Netha ji and emotional re-union of first couple.
From Neta ji heart...


Edited by jduke - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
It wz a gr8 update... I loved the conversation Aman and Arnav hd... Finally he know how truely important khushi is n how much he loved hr... But the last part wz was lyk 'OMG... Arnav got abducted... Kyu?? I hope he will b good soon... All n all gr8 writing dear...thnkx fo pm...tc n plz continue soon:);)
Edited by sweety421 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
very well written update..really interesting...fingers crossed I really hope Arnav is ok...the story is progressing really well...keep up the good work going...please do continue soon...waiting for the next update eagerly...👍🏼
Edited by MysticRiver - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
i always thought that arnav will realised his love for khushi if something happened to her. but i never thought realisation will hit him when he was being kidnapped...and now it really seemed too late...i just hope that police will move quicker to find him than a normal person as he is CM...hope so.. other thing you touch upon is to make a will...every person should make a will because death does not see if you are young or old...one need to make sure that his/her loved one are looked after properly...awesome story ..just hope that khushi can take this incident bravely and her baby remain safe
Edited by ranogill - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Shweta, after this amazing update, aapka maafi kaisan naahin denge?!

I'm still reeling from that carnage! You sort of felt something was imminent but when it did happen, it was still a shock. The pace and ruthlessness of the attack was horrific. I like your attention to detail, like when you wrote of the driver leaving his window slightly open. Truly, due to such small lapses, lives are lost. Sushil is a hero, bas. Loyally served his CM till his last breath. And kudos to the CM who inspires such loyalty!

It was very interesting reading Aman's conversation with Anjali. Arnav's early years shorn of love, and then when he did feel it, he was left with being in love with the idea of love towards the end of his relationship with Lexie. A very sad end for both of them.

My favourite part of the chapter was Arnav watching Khushi pack. His whole being screamed 'mat jao'. And that desperate kiss was totally "parting is such sweet sorrow". Hoping the sweetness of meeting again is realised soon.

"I hope you realise that before it is too late."

I'm hoping Aman's words are not proved prophetic.
Edited by Arshi67 - 10 years ago

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