ARSHI FF- An evening with U-Part-13 updtd Jan pg.4

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I've always seen you from a distance...

I've always yearned for a glimpse...of U...

Do you even know I exist?

...do you care at all?

Unknown to you, my eyes seek you...

Unknown to you, my heart flutters at your sight!

I do not know if I could ever be with you...

But I know this much that...

Everyone has a right to live it up...Just once!

...and its ok if you just do it!

...as long as its no harm...

But do we really live our dreams at all?

How many have the will...

How many the guts...

and most importantly...

How many can pull through a facade just to see eye to eye with their wildest of dreams?

But here I go with my dreams on my eyelashes, living a lifetime...

in

An Evening With U

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Part-4

Part-13


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Bhaggu! Divya ji Padhariye!

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PART-1

She stood at the counter and he breezed in, smiled at none in particular and ...raised his hands at the counter and said"Hi"

As usual he had a wad of business journals and dailies as well as news articles and some folders tucked in his premium leather briefcase!

Khushi Marwah looked at him from behind the sandwich and pastry display stand...He went and sat at his usual place by the window... Table-4.He looked at the busy street outside for a minute or so and as usual got lost in his files as Deepa pushed her saying "...here!... go and serve him..."

Jasmine the new recruit said scrunching her nose," But... but he did not order for anything!"

"One vegetable sandwhich with protein base! One dark coffee with a green salad!"Saira, Mona and Sheetal along with Aunt Jo said in unision and so loudly that Akhil Marwah shouted..."...shhh to shush them!

"Common girls cool it! He is just there and its audible! After all the Great Arnav Sain Wadera frequents our joint not only for the food but also for the ambience and quiet we provide our customers with!"He barked.

Deepa who was Akhil's fiance made a face saying," Oh! Yeah! Its just that he was your school buddy by coincidence! We all thought he was supporting you!" Which made all the girls including Khushi and Aunt Jo to giggle!

"Shall we do some work?" He asked them caustically peeved at Deepa's jibe! They all scrunched their noses and set to work!

Jasmine who was watching him gooey eyed said rolling her eyeballs "Let me take table 4."

"Nope!" Deepa hissed! "Khushi always takes it!"

"But she is overworked today!" Jaz houled in her squeeky voice!

"No problem! But he does not like anyone fixing it!Not even Gangs!" Deepa said pushing Khushi to the counter

"Why?" Jaz could not take a hint when it was aimed at her!Why did he not like their Master cheff Gangadhar Pakheija fixing it!

"Dunno!" Deepa shrugged! "Cofee and the sandwich and the salad exactly to his taste- tada fixed only by Ms.Marwah.K" She said with a flourish!

Khushi smiled and lowered her eyes!

"Arey! Common yaar finish it. You know he gets angry if you won't serve on time." Deepa said.

Khushi walked gingerly to the counter and started fxing his tray! She tucked errant strands behind her ears!


She was too tierd!She looked very... ordinary! No matter what!... There was no way she would even match to his level!

She must be looking grubby and ...


"Here Khsuhi let that brew!Just go and wash your face and come." Deepa suggested taking over! "Quick!" She said when he saw Khushi still rooted to the spot!

"Nai... Deepu!" She said trembling all over!

"Arey common!" Deepa said to her childhood friend! "As far as I know he is your first and only crush right from school days yaar! Bantha hain yaar ithna tho! Let me count... about 5 plus years now..."She giggled...

"Hush!" Khushi closed her mouth with her palm, and a few customers looked at them oddly! The Den was such an elite joint, where food of multiple cusisines and genres,was supplied ranging fom fast to health..Greek chineese to desi and where you could chill with a taste!

Akhil Marwah had taken over a small joint when he graduated and lost both of his parents! He then redesigned the entire place to make it into a wonderul experience of eats and treats! It was Arnav Wadera who barged in and helped him saying it was his duty for a friend and extended family, that was like a second home to him!

Akhil graciously accepted on one condition that he would pay back and also that Arnav must be his brand embassador! So it was fixed!

Arnav soon took to Harward and when he was back. The DEN had developed into a cosmopolitan hub and it was Arnav who made it big by making it a habit to hang in there every evening as per his promise from five to six as the Wadera house his office was stark opposite the place and his presence in the last six months had made it a P3 joint! No advertisement no expense!

"Ohho! C'mmon!" She said and Khushi rushed to the ladies! She looked at herself in the mirror and groaned loudly!

"I know love its tough in one of those days!" An elderly woman said coming out of one of the bathrooms!

Khushi smiled shyly but she knew why she was absolutely shattered!

She was not at all in his league!

She closed her eyes! Since the tenth grade, she was smitten by him and the whole school knew! But he never ever even happened to notice her, least of all acknowledged her!

After school Akhil became busy with the joint and Arnav always came to pick him up for their weekend outings!Khushi recollected with moist eyes, how her parents adored Arnav and how loving he was towards them! He always said he missed his parents and called her mom Chachi!

Graduation made him grow more handsome! He started working out and Khushi realsied her crush grew almost into an obsession!She used to dress up and stand at the counter only to be winked at very rarely or be ignored most of the time!

Then came the day when he came to say goodbye as he was leaving to Harward and gave a party to all his buddies and chose their joint just to give business to a sinking ship!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part-2

Thursday-It was five days since the day Arnav invited Akhil for his party and Deepa was busy deciding on a dress!

"Tell you what..."She said to Khushi!

"I will buy a new one!" Deepa said with a flourish!

Khushi rolled her eyes in sheer exasperation !They were in Deepa's room at her place and the floor and the bed were covered with dresses strewn all over!

"Seriously Deepu! Can't you... make up your mind?" Khushi ventured for the umpteenth time!

"Nope! Any other party is ok! But this is Arnav's... I mean the Wadera's party THE WADERAs yaar!" She said pursing her lips!

She then turned to Khushi and said "...please! Please! Lets go shopping! Please!"

Khushi could not deny her and she found herself in one of the popular Malls in the next hour!

"Deepu! Please yaar! See? That lilac dress is you" Khushi exclaimed admiring the dress!

"...and the cost is your brother!" Deepa said scrunching her nose in disdain at the price tag as she took a closer look at it!

Khushi went to the glass display window and gasped! "Yuk!" She sneered at the dress!

After a few more sitings finally Deepa settled for a muted muave three forth length halter neck shimmer dress with a woven wrap and Khushi was happy to see her friend who had recently lost her mother cheerful again!

"Accha! Now for you!" Deepa said, turning to her!

"For me?" Khushi squeeked!

"Yeah! For you! Don't think I forgot! Its your B'day on Saturday and you deserve a new dress" She said talking out money from her purse and stuffing it into Khsuhi's.

"No you won't... I... I couldn't!" Khushi said tucking back her errant tresses behind her ear!

"Of course I can!"Her friend replied and this is a bonus from our boss who asked me to buy a good dress for you as a gift from The Den.Its supposed to be on the house!" Deepa said!

"No Deepa!" He already had to pay for my evening classes and he needs..." Khushi tried to put the money back into Deepa's purse.

"Shut up!" Deepa said and dragged her across and found none!They stopped at a small cafe for some snack and coffee and thats where they saw Arnav's photo in a gossip magazine that they were flipping through!

Will He Won't He?

Said the heading as the photo was of him laughing at Lavanya adjusting her hat at the Wankhadey stadium as India played Srilanka in the finals! "Thats yesterday!" Khushi gasped!

"Even Akhil was supposed to go but he couldn't" She looked at the photo and he looked so handsome and very very dashing!

"Look at her!" Deepa said!

"That...^&*%!"She swore and Khushi looked around in panic!

"Deepa! How can you swear like that?" She chided her friend!

"You look at that ...scum bag and you would too!"... was the answer!

They read the article!It was about how Lavanya Datta has become a permanent ficture at the Wadera's for all their dos and speculated about Arnav tying the knot soon!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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beautiful start.
loved it.
fresh and romantic.
want to read more.
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Originally posted by: kritash

beautiful start.

loved it.
fresh and romantic.
want to read more.


Thanks hope to keep you entertained...its a limited edition series though! Lol! a short story!
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Part-3/1


"What?" Deepa was shocked and Khushi went pale! Her face crumpled! Tears rolled down her cheeks as she turned to Deepa with humiliation written on her face!

"I told you! I told you Deepu! I am... I am ... well.." She sobbed and said "I am unfit for all this!"

"Yes you are!" Neeta said sternly!

"Maasi!" Deepa wailed! "Don't!... as such it was so difficult to convince her!"

"I can see where you are coming from!" Neeta said regarding Khushi keenly!

"I told her I am not the right choice for the Sexy Siren look she has in her mind" Khushi said and said," I am sorry!"

"What for? What is it to me!" Neeta said getting up and said "...now don't waste my time and yours!"

Deepa was so furious that she said "I am sorry too that I depended on you! I just wanted to... to make her live her dream for an evening!" She blabbered and before Khushi could stop her she told Neeta about her crush and everything that was there to the situation!

Neeta smiled and looked at Khushi!

"Good! I was waiting for that as I knew you both were only telling me half the truth!"

"What do you mean?" Deepa demanded!

"I mean...its good you suggested what you did! But She does not fit the bill" Neeta said rudely!

"Awe Maasi! How could you?" Deepa confronted her when Khushi silently cried at Neeta Maasi's comments!

"I am telling you,... she does not fit the bill to be a sexy siren!

But she will do one better!

She is a natural beauty and a charmer! I can style her to be a Diva!" Neeta said as there was absolute silence in the room!

"What?" Deepa was the first to react! "What are you saying!"

"I am saying what I know very well! This woman here has oodles of charm and that freshness in her which can naurally be transformed into a sensation with minimum make over! She is not %^$&#y like that Lavanya! She is very very poised and classy! She can never be a siren!" Neeta said with her chin up!

Deepa looked at Khushi as if she were from Mars and Khushi herself was astounded and raised her eyebrow at Deepa!

"But..." Khsuhi still had inhibitions...

"No buts... I need a tailor I need some material! The rest of the stuff I have in my store room! I need a helper to dust it out and remove stuff that would be useful!

Most importantly! I need her to go and take an appointment with a certain beautician and get certain things done..."Neeta was going on... as Khushi and Deepa stared at each other!

"What?" Neeta asked stopping abruptly!

"We...er... I don't have that kind of budget!" Khushi said and turned to Deepa and said " Deepu forget it babe! She is just trying to you know make up for what she said earlier I know where I stand..."

"CCCRRRARAAASSSHHH..."

The ceramic ash tray went flying on to the floor breaking into tiny peaces!

"You are saying that to me Neeta Abaaya? Who made stars out of ordinary looking people? Who made a Sikandar Bhora out of a street hawker or who made the famous Tennis star the lead in many Bollywood movies...?" Neeta was out of her wits with anger!

"Nai nai Maasi! This girl is so low on self esteem" Deepa said crushing Khushi's hand so tight in warning that Khushi winced!

"Thats what I saw! If I had the assets she has, I would have been contesting for the Miss World competition!" Neeta said still furious!

Khushi opened her mouth and closed it!

It cannot be possible! But she did not want to cause trouble again and embarrass Deepa before her aunt!

"Whats that look you have on your face child? Why?... are you not believing what I say?" Neeta now asked Khushi directly!

"I...I..."Khushi looked at Deepa and said," ...er...its not like I don't believe you..."

"Then?" Neeta demanded...

"If I were so...I mean ..er...good... then why didn't he... I mean... you know... people never noticed me all through the years?" There she asked it!

"Thats coz you are like that diamond which is uncut,... Only a true expert could see through! Once its cut then everyone would know the worth of the diamond! You get me?" Neeta asked and Khushi shook her head in the negative!

"AAARRRGGGHHH! Ok look at this!" She held the baggy tee shirt Khushi was sporting on her faded jeans!

"Well... who would look at a girl who wears gunny bags for clothes that are taste less and twice her size and what colour is this ?" She scrunched her nose..."...such a drab one!"

"She has good colour sense Maasi" Deepa defended her friend!

"May be but that does not show in her dressing!" Neeta said.

"But.. I do not have that kind of money to..." Khushi tried to defend her insecurities...

"It does not need money! It needs a little smartness and aslo some industriousness on your part!" Neeta said!

"You need not wear expensive clothes! You can make your own or select ordinary stuff that you can accentuate with accessories!" She added thoughtfully.

"Deepa I need a tailor... "She insisted!

"Where can I get one at such a short notice Deepa said looking at Khushi and then both of them squeeked "AUNT JO!"

An Evening with U

"Had it not been for the one month off that I wanted, I wouldn't have been..doing...er...this... "Aunt Jo ranted as Khushi and Deepa chuckled and as Neeta walked in saying "Jo can you make a dress out of this...?"She was holding a sheer bronze coloured sari with some zari self work on it!

"HA! Jo ranted! I will! Deepa had twisted my arm for the one month leave I need in December to go visit my grand son in Singapore! I can even make a dress out of an orange peel!" She ranted.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely update.
liked it.
now waiting to see the result.
how kushi gets noticed by arnav.
what arnav feels for kushi.
lovely story.
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Originally posted by: kritash

lovely update.

liked it.
now waiting to see the result.
how kushi gets noticed by arnav.
what arnav feels for kushi.
lovely story.


Thank you... hope you are able to read it completely! without a hitch!
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Part-3/2


He saw her walking in! Arnav was handing out a drink to one of his father's lady guests when something caught the corner of his eye!

He turned and he saw her!She stepped in and looked around without noticing anything! She was bored plain! She just flashed a smile at none in particular and walked in! But as her eyes searched the huge hall for someone, he felt something in his gut!!

The same feeling that persisted when some big deal was being clinched by him!

She was petite! Her skin was so exquisite that even from such distance he could make out that she did not have much of a make up on her!

She looked very delicate but her stance told him that it was to fool the world! She sure was a tough woman!

She wore a wonderful creation in bronze!The sheer fabric with a satin inner made her look very very enticing! It was an off shoulder evening dress which gathered just below her breasts and flared down her knee stopping exactly short of her ankles! But when she moved he realised her dress was not secured waist below! It was actually a maze of loose drapes in satin and gossamer silk interspersed so much so that when she moved they just clung to her frame and legs showing a little leg here and a little satin there!Leaving a lot to one's imagination!

He ran his eyes down her slender frame!

Her neck was perfect, her breasts pert...and so were her waist and thighs! Her legs were shapely and her feet he gasped! Oh my god! What were those! Tiny things ensconed in bronze transparent slip ons with a lace on the toes!He gulped hard when he saw a single stranded alloy anklet dangling on her left ankle!It had a chime attached to it!

She was wearing nothing around her neck-it was bare! Arnav felt it made her look sexy and she wore a single dangler on to her right ear which was actually a damaged coin hung to a copper wire! It made her look reckless yet strangely connected!

Her hair hung loose and long cut in a very odd array of steps and it cascaded in the front giving her a very girlish charm!

She moved her hands and he held his breath as her shoulders were absolutely sexy and she had a non challance about her that spoke of money fame and something else he could not decipher!

A waiter drifted towards her and he asked her something and she just shook her hands and her head and it was so simple yet looked so adorable and Arnav slowly walked towards her! Who was she?

As he took two steps he was greeted by Lavanya's friend Nitin who came with his girlfriend Zeena and by the time Arnav finished with them, he could not find her anywhere! He walked to Akhil and Deepa who were chilling out with his other school friend and the only invitee apart from their school buddies, Rahul Mehrothra who came with his wife Anaya!

"Arnav! Its really very nice and I have never come to such a party!" Deepa gushed!

"Hey C'mmon!" Arnav gave her a hug saying "Akhil feel free man!My parents are a lil busy but they said they will join you shortly" He said winking at Rahul!

"Cool! Accha tell me who is the best dressed lady here Arnav?" Deepa asked holding him by his arm!

"Ummm..."He rolled his eyes and asked "Deepu!...e.r.. tell me why women ask this question but I never heard a man comparing himself with the others?" He asked looking at Akhil who rolled his eyes!

"Oh! C'mmon! Tell me!" Deepa said slyly!

The picture of the young woman he just saw swam before Arnav's eyes just then but he smiled and said this is tough!

"Of course not! Your childhood buddy won't mind if you tell her the truth that I am the hottest in this gathering!" Lavanya declared her presence by blowing out the words sultrily and holding on to the other arm of Arnav!

OMG! La Datta happened... Deepa messaged to base camp!

That was what was the code for Neeta Abaya!

"Get her out of the scene! "Neeta pinged!
"How?"Deepa pinged back!

"Dunno!... use your non-existent brains! She won't let Arnav meet M or else !"...came the reply!

Deepa looked at Akhil who was oblivious of everything that was going on behind his back! She looked at Arnav who was talking to Anaya and La who was butting in with her odd quips!


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