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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

What a beautiful piece of writing, Ridzy!

Loved it to bits.

Loved this take on the Diwali scene.

And I absolutely loved the positive turn in the story after that.

Arnav had to work hard to convince Khushi that he loved her.

Loved that bit.

Hope and wish you'll continue writing such lovely stories.

Thanks, Ruchi, for the heads up!

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pixiegirl

@pixiegirl

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

That was just beautiful... That is exactly how the Diwali scene should have taken place & not what we got... Loved this to bits... 👏

P..S. Thanks Charu for the heads up, Ruchi mujhe bhool gayi... 😭

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stg1

@stg1

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

wow, this is so beautiful, i love the way u took a significant bittersweet moment in their life and turned it around into something amazing ❤️

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vks11

@vks11

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Loved it . A beautiful OS.

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Thanks Mirchi ji for sending me this link ...

Loved this new take on the Diwali night ...

Thanks Ridz ...

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Heavens_Flower

@Heavens_Flower

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Ridzy, beautiful... 👏

Your 'Touch' is so sensual and heartwarming...

Simply loved it...

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FeistyDewdrop

@FeistyDewdrop

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

oh dear!! This was amazingly beautiful.. No words.. The feeling after reading this was pure immense n immeasurable joy...

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Cherylann

@tvpal007

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Awesome 🤗
M tinks u wandered outside the gutter to write this above the neck action 😳

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Hot_Chocolate

@Hot_Chocolate

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

The ever so touching Almost Kiss diwali night scene but with a Modification. Well, I like this version more. I would have loved to see khushi doing something like this and ASR on his knees, practicality begging her forgiveness, her love.

well done Ridzy you refreshed some memories. :)

p.s this one is dedicated to 'Bees'.? ye Bees kya hai?

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shree10

@shree10

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

What a beutiful OS to erase a sad memory!

Thanks Charu for sharing the link!

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