SANDHIR FF - TA RA RUM PUM ( UPDATED PART 12 ' NEW ' PAGE 64 ) - Page 22

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: karishmagsewani

OMG! They are so lovely! And way princess is narrating the story, I am in awe with her cuteness! Loved it yaar! Their second meeting was great!
Hahahahahaha, randhir ran off his landlord through window! Waah!
I am excited about the next chappy the way princess described it!
Wholly I loved this chapter to the core of my heart!
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Thanks for pm'ing! (I am sorry I am late!) *puppy face*
Keep writing, continue asap,
Lots of love,
Karishma. :* <3


Yr u know what i just luv ur comments 😛 Jb bhi i post any part of my FFs i wait when will karisma commnt ..just luv u and ur comments ..thank thanq thanq thanq thanq thanq so much 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

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Aww really thank you so much😛Luv u😳



aww..love u too <3
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: MansiVatwani

Its amazing...loved it!!!


Thnxx 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
nyc what surprise are update soon you are right agar randhir sare paise party me uda. nhi deta toh sanyu se kaise milta
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: gracy27

nyc what surprise are update soon you are right agar randhir sare paise party me uda. nhi deta toh sanyu se kaise milta


Haha thnx 😛 Ya will try to updte soon 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update dear 😉 loved it very much 😳 pls continue asap
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Originally posted by: AnjaliAnand

Awesome update dear 😉 loved it very much 😳 pls continue asap


Thnx...thnx a ton 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Part 6

Rd ws getting ready fr d presentation he ws again n agin checking himself in d mirror

Y - are rd paji ap presentation dene jaa re ho model bn ne nahi .,waise b grease se kapde kharab hi hone h

R - waise yoyo ek baat bta aggarwal automobiles ki sri deals mai aisa ni kyu hota h ki hume on d spot machine bna i hoti h

Y - Are yehi to is company ki khasiyat h

R - hmm tbi to ye meri dream thi ...puri duniya k samne apna talent showcase krne ko milta h

Y - oji wo puri duniya ko dikhakr kya krna

R - tu wo sb chod umm ek baat bta sanyukta aayi h kyaa

Y - kon wo ipod ...

R - umm haan wohi ..dekh plz Tammeez se yr ..

Y - oh srry ...chlo ji bahar chle dekhte h

R - hmmm

R - oh god yoyo itne sre logo k samne car ka prototype kaise thik krunga

Y - are wo to tum asani se krloge

R - hey wo rhi sanyu...sanyu ( waving at sanyu who ws sitting )

K - are sanyu dekh rd hume hi bol rha h

S - tuje badi chinta ho rhi h ...mai to bs apne 10000 lene aayi hu

R - dekh yoyo sanyu ...ab to mai pkka jeet hi jaunga ..meri lucky charm

Y - oji uspr hi mt sra dhyan rkhna ..gadi thik krni h

R - tu tension mt le ..chl hug de . ( dey both hug )

Y - hmm chl jaa strt hone wala h nd haan yd rkhna hume hi sbse pehle krna h wrna contract haath se chla jayega ...nd haan mai tuje guide krta rahunga ..earphone lgaye rkhna

R - hmm ok

All d representatives wr on dre positions ...d deal strts

S - Rd rd rd rd

K - are sanyu tuje ekdum se kya hua

S - chup kr kaustu dekhne de ..hez such a gud engineer ...i just luv him

K - kya

S - kuch ni just cheer RD ! Rd ! RD !

K - sanyu thoda dhire hum kisi match mai nhi presentation mai aaye h

S - so what ...just let me cheer my randy

K - sanyu. R u drunk

S - uff just shut up

Rd ws going very fst

Y - gud going rd gud going bs ( he takes some name of prt ) lgate hue dhyan rkhna

R - hmmm okk ...don't worry ..I'll be fine

After some time

R - yoyo mai final prt lgana ja rha hu pray fr me ..

Dre sanyu ws also tensed nd ws continuously praying

Rd put d prt nd ...(are obvio chl gyi gari )

S - yayyy ...randy randy she ws continuously jumping out of happiness

K - yayyy rd jeet gaya sanyu

S - hey don't call me sanyu

K - pr kyu

S - wo kisi ke lie reserved hai ...( looking at rd nd blushing )
All d employees wr celebrating nd rejoicing ..kishore came nd hugged yoyo

K - yoyo kamaal ho gya ..hum jeet gye ...

Y - oji maine to pehle hi kaha tha

K - acha yoyo ab deal to hum jeet hi gye ..muje zra kuch kam h islie rd ko bol dena deal sign kr lega

Y - ji ap tension mt lo ..bs nacho

All were very hppy ..specially sanyu...when suddenly rd gets into d cr ..all were shocked

Rd ws going towards d grass side ...nd suddenly he strted writing something on d grass with d cr ..when he ws done ..he came out ...sanyu ws continuously trying to see what rd ws upto

Nd when she saw it she ws hell shocked to see wt rd hd written



A/N - any guesses ki rd ne kya likha hoga ?? Chlo dat ull get to know in next part !! But plz leave ur feedbacks !! Ur liking my work na ?? Plz guys plz its my request 1 comment to kr diya kro

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Posted: 10 years ago
Res
unres

Yippee I'm firsssttt
loved the update to the core
penned down so beautifully
what has Randhir written??
update soon

Khushi
Edited by -whitepearl- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
this is awesome...plzz post nxt part asap
Love,
~Mansi~

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