New FF (COLLAB): Me & My ASR ~ Season 2 ~ Part 3 (01/12)

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Neelam/Nilu

@-Mannat

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#131

Nice Prologue
Continue soon
Thanks for the pm! 😃

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..ri..

@..ri..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#132

fabulous..

waiting for next update..

thanks for the pm..

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moonlight2630

@moonlight2630

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Posted: 11 years ago

#133

Wow interesting start

Dark and dashing entry of ASR aane ke saath hi poor khushi ko jhaar pika di.

Lucky plant and poor khushi.

Thanks for pm

Plz update soon.

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deepa

@deeswarna

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#134

welcome back harith and it was a very nice surprise to see that you started a new ff with tintin.

im already in love with the story just by reading the prologue. im sure its going to be a rocking

all the best to both of u:)

eagerly waiting for the next part

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priya

@priasweet

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#135

welcome back harith di
wow nice prologue and interesting

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arnavini

@arnavini

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#136

Ok first of all apologies for being so late to comment...

I recently started reading Tintin-Ruble's stories and i became her fan in such short span that i read most of her stories and sme are still due that i guess i will read as soon as i finish up my works...

So i guess this story is also going to be a superb work from u .

Now about harhem NKA Harith.. dii..first of all welcome back... u mst not remember bt i ma big big fan of urs since i read me and my asr...

This was my very first FF that i read and cried for long days... that is always my fav. and close to me... literally it took me days to gt myself back after reading it.. that was ur magic.that i gt so into the story...

and ur other stories are no less... every piece has its different charm.. bt i will say me and my asr is my first fav.
and i am extremely happy to read that here comes the second season of my fav. ff..

i am happy that very two fav. writers of mine are doing this in collab... so i guess more of emotions and tears.. and love and romance.. fingers crossed.

Best of luck for ur new journey..

Now about the prologue .. it really scared me to read the angry ASR... he is really a volcano of anger .. poor Khushi...
M all curious to read the next .. hope u come with the first part soon.

Edited by arnavini - 11 years ago

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IFrozenl

@IFrozenl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#137

Me and my ASR is one of my fav FF and am glad that we are having a second season..and the best thing is harith25 and you are doing..~!

Eager for the updates..!

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neha2013g

@neha2013g

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#138

interesting prologue... eagerly waiting for the first chapter 😊

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tintin_ruble

@tintin_ruble

Voyager

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#139

Sneak Peak of Part 1

Anjali: Khushi first Iron my Saree. I forgot to give it to Laundry yesterday. And then make Dal Kichdi for Nani.

Khushi: Jee Di.

ASR's Buaji came out of the huge Puja room of Sheesh Mahal. She seemed to be little frustrated. This wasnt surprising. Every morning till she finishes the puja and eats, she is always like this.

Buaji:Haaye re Nandakishore. What happened to the servants of this house? All have become so lazy. There are no flowers plucked for the Puja yet.

Khushi: Buaji, I will pluck them now and get it for you.

Buaji: Nahi. Bilkul nahi. You go and make the Paratha ready. I am very hungry. Once the Puja is done, I will eat my breakfast.

Arnav Singh Raizada was watching all this from the staircase. He was just out of his Gym, finishing his Push ups. He hated when his family gave so much work to this girl. More work from them means she giving less time to him. He had always seen Khushi running around the house to fulfil everyone's demands but she can do that when he is out for his business trips. When he is back, he needs her. All the time.

Arnav: Khushi.

He screamed at the top of his voice gathering everyone's attention. Khushi too looked around and saw him standing just in the track pants while his body sweating. She lowered his gaze because thats what every servant of this house did when he was standing before them. They feared him too much.

Arnav: Come in my room Khushi.

Khushi: Uhh. ASR.. Just 2 minutes, I will finish this and

Arnav: Didnt you hear? I said come in my room. Now.

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