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Originally posted by: RisingPhoenix

Hey it was stunning

I really loved the way you expressed those dance moves

Will comment later from my lappy

This cell is so irritating

Continue soon

Originally posted by: BornAries

Oh wow!! it was stunning...

lovely ...

going to read it again 😉

Originally posted by: Burn_the_Ashes

Left me handing dry as a desert.
Ah. Ah.
I was supposed to be studying.
And then. After reading this I couldn't help but comment from my cell.
Yup.
This is from my cell cuZ I like it.
Firstly, I knew from the basketball reference that this is Parthu.
It better be huh!
And dance... I was like... Vidu!! Hellz yeah.
By the way
The way yiu have described her moves... Woah Woah.
And his... Suffering 😆 was indeed. You had me at the last line.
You had me pitying parth!!
Accomplishment.
This. Is. Amazing
I can't comment inline today cuz I'll be going out now won't be able to use my laptop.
So. Yeah. Took the pains to type it on cell.
Considering the fact that I did, I think you should update quick.
Or I slit ristz

Ps: updated Underprotection.. Angst.

THE UPDATE WAS☺️☺️☺️, AFTER READING YOUR UPDATE I AM FEELING THAT THE TEMPERATURE OF MY ROOM HAS RAISED VIGOROUSLY...😆,DO CONTINUE AND DON'T MAKE IT 18+😳, I AM FINE WITH A 16+😉

Originally posted by: dewcute

THE UPDATE WAS☺️☺️☺️, AFTER READING YOUR UPDATE I AM FEELING THAT THE TEMPERATURE OF MY ROOM HAS RAISED VIGOROUSLY...😆,DO CONTINUE AND DON'T MAKE IT 18+😳, I AM FINE WITH A 16+😉

NUMB.
You got me numb mann! :*
This was beautiful Ananya! <3

I was blushing at the first part itself where Randhir was in the wash having a bath! :D
Her sexy moves!
Those were beautiful! :*
You sure are a dancer, aren't you? You descibed it wonderfully. :*

Imma gonna kill you if you do not continue it! :/
Continue soon!

Forever & Always,
Vanii ^_^

Update soon
I can not wait anymore

Wow
Amazing beautifully written
Do continue
And PM

I know m busy but could not stop myself from commenting

wow it was superb

First of all u left me hanging there with the last part n awestruck with ur writing...I wish you could write more eventhough I understand u have studies n assignments n all but yaar u r killing me with suspense even though I was kinda guessing n hoping the boy is Parth n girl is Vidushi but only one complaint I wish there was more so update soon before I cyber stalk u😆