New Sandhir FF-THAT ONE CRASH part 17 updated - Page 15

Created

Last reply

Replies

752

Views

135.4k

Users

65

Likes

1.2k

Frequent Posters

pari1995 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: TheKanwalKaur

I think sanyu will be rd's assisstant... and i m eagerly waiting for their meeting..


They will meet soon
pari1995 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: andy1245

hey its just awesome dear plz cont soon 😊 i think sanyu randhir ki assistant banegi


Thanx dear
Will update soon
pari1995 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: holysoul

nice concept dear<font color="#CC3333"> update sooon👏</font>


Thanx dear
Will update soon
pari1995 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anu_anya

awesome update
thanx for pm
continue asap :))


Thank u dear
Will update soon
pari1995 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: LuvSanjana

nic update dr..

update nxt part asap..😊


Thanx dear
Will update soon
pari1995 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MDKRM

Interesting very intresting i just read all prt thnx for sharing ur story nd updt nxt prt asap


Thank u soo much dear
Will update soon
pari1995 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: samridhigoodiez

wow..

atleast i can read this..
amazing yar,,
loved it
thanks for pm..
will definitely read this..


Thank u soo much di
pari1995 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago

Part 3

Mumbai

Randhir,parth and arpita were having dinner and some jolly talks,thats when

They hear a voice which was not so clear

Voice-randhir,my boy aa gaya tu

Hearing that rd stops eating and his expression changes whereas arpita

And parth were also tensed now

Parth[interrupts]-amm dad app gaye,chaliye mein apko room tak chod deta hoon

Harsh-offo parth beta mein apne hero se to mil loon,pata hai kitne saal

Ho gae

Arpita-dad,woh aap baad mein mil lena na abhi aap jae aram kijiye

Harsh releases himself from parth and staggers towards rd

Harsh-nooo,mein to apne bete se aaj hi mil kar jaoonga

He reaches where rd was sitting and rd stands up with a jerk

Harsh-hey rd tu kaha jaa raha hai,apne dad se baat nahi karega

Rd[smirks,a sad one]-huh,dad do u even know the meaning of that word,

Pls mr.harsh i m not interested today,arpi i m going

Take care

With that he moves towards the main door as he reaches the door

Harsh-kyu sirf apni maa se baat karega kya

Rd stops then and there,parth facepalms and arpita murmers

"oh god not again"

Harsh-uss aurat ke liye to apne baap se baat tak nahi kar raha,

Tu bhool gaya kya ki uss aurat ne tum dono ko

Before he could complete rd raises his hand as if signalling him to stop

Rd-stop it mr.harsh

Harsh-u r asking me to stop,uss aurat ne jo tum dono ko 12 saal pehle

Choda tha usmein meri kya galti thi

Rd[shouting]-yeah right usmein app ki koi galti nahi thi,apki yeh galti

Bhi nahi thi ki app roz raat ko pee ke ate the,yeh bhi nahi

Thi ki app ghar aa kar uss aurat ko jo badkismati sa meri

Maa thi usse marte the,yeh bhi nahi thi ki appne Nashe ki halat mein

Arpi ko bhare hue bath tub mein chod kar bhool

Gaye jab woh sirf 2 saal ki thi,woh mar jati agar mein nahi hota

Aur woh aurat apni parties mein busy thi,huh[he claps],wow

Apki koi galti nahi,u r absalutly right

Parth-rd shant ho jaa

Rd-shant ho jao,isse liye mein yaha nahi aata,kya tum dono ko mera chain

Se jeena pasand nahi hai

Harsh-arrey rd,mein manta hoon mujhse aise choti galtiyaan hoo gayi thi

Lekin uss aurat ne bhi to

Rd-just shut up,mujhe app dono ke bare mein sochne se bhi ghinn aati hai

App dono ne jo hum dono ke saath kia uske liye nahi mein appko nahi uss

Aurat ko maaf kar sakta hoon,

Arpita-bhai,shant ho jao,papa pls app upar jae na

Harsh-arrey meri bacchi,mujhe apne bete se baat to karne de

Rd[shouting]-listen to me very carefully mr.harsh na hi mein aapka beta hoon

Aur na hi app mere dad

Harsh-arrey tere kehne se kya hota hai

At this time arpita signals parth to take harsh to his room

Parth-dad chaliye,he literally drags harsh to his room

Arpita[crying and hugs rd]-i m sorry bhai mujhe maaf kardo pls

Rd[hugging her back]-arrey sorry ki kya baat hai,yeh to routine ban gaya hai

Aur tu rona band kar,mujhe mera champ apne dad ki tarah

rondhu nahi apne mama ki tarah confident chahiye

Parth-i heard that

They laugh as if nothing happened but the reality was that arpita and parth were guilty

And rd was totally shattered from inside

Rd-ok arpi mein ab chalta hoon,bye

Parth-oey itni raat ko tu drive

Rd-its better to drive than to stay here,chal bye

Parth-ok

They hug and rd moves to his car,he had send his driver home as the driver

Said that there was a emergency as his daughter is suffering from high

Fever

Rd sits in the driver's seat and he finds a beer bottle and starts drinking

Here in mumbai bus stop

Sanyukta steps out of the bus along with her luggage thinking how

She ended up coming to mumbai today as she planned to come

Tomorrow only

Flashback

She comes out of her room after packing all her stuff

Sanyu-dad,ajj ap kya kahoge

Shekhar-beta jake ready ho jaa, tu aaj hi jaa rahi hai aur mene

khana bana liya hai

Sanyu[shocked]-what?par kyu dad

Shekhar-beta kal yaha strike hai aur mein nahi chahta ki tu

Apne sapne tak pohocne ke liye ek din der se pohoche

Sanyu had tears in her eyes,she runs and hugs him

Sanyu-thank u soo much dad

Shekhar-u r welcome beta,but don't forget ur promise ok

Sanyu-ok dad

With that they had their food and sanyu gets ready to go

She hugs her dad and she goes and sits in the bus

Flashback ends

Sanyukta's thought

Arrey yaar mein yaha aa to gayi lekin ab kya karun,mein to yaha kisi ko bhi nahi

Janti hoon,dad se jhoot to bol diya ki meri friend hai lekin abb kya karunn

Chalo koi baat nahi apne dream city to pohoch hi gayi baki sab bhi god hi help

Karenge,but sanyu u have just 2 months to prove urself

She moves from the bus stand dragging her suitcase,a travelling bag on her

Shoulder and a sling bad hanging across her shoulder

Here rd was driving his car harshly on a lonely dark road and his beer bottle

was almost finished

Tears making their way through his eyes and his childhood memories haunting

Him

Rd's thought

How can they call themself our mom and dad,how can i forget that day when

Both of them refused to even spare a min for us when arpi was suffering

From high fever,she could have died that day if ramu kaka was not there

That day

A small boy of around 11 years was shouting over the phone

Rd-mom,arpi is shivering due to fever mom,where the hell r u

Renuka-rd beta she will be fine i'll call the doctor

Rd-mom.when will u come mom

Renuka-beta,i'll get late today,srry

Rd-but mo...

Befor he could complete the line went dead

He waited for around 1 hour but neither the doctor nor his dad came

Here arpita became unconscious,he again calls his mom

Rd-mom,where is the doctor

Renuka-oh,i m soo srry rd beta mein bhool gayi,abhi karti hoon

Rd-what?ok fine u don't have to

With that he cuts the call and runs to servants quarters and calls ramu kaka

Thn only ramu kaka came called the doctor and arpita was taken to the

Hospital

He comes back to reality when his car hits something or should i say someone

He stops the car and comes out only to find a girl laying on the ground unconscious

Her forehead slightly bleeding as it was a dark road he was not able to see her face

properly

Rd-oh shit,yeh meine kya kar diya,abb kya karoon

He strolls to that girl and checks if she is alive or not and was relived to fine that she was

Still breathing,he moves back to his car

Rd[to himself]-abbey kya kar raha hai,kahi yeh yahi padi padi na mar jae

Isee utha aur ghar le jaa

With that he lifts her in his arms and puts her on back seat,thn keeps her

Luggage in the dickey and he himself sits on the drivers seat and drives

To his studio,thats what he calls his big house

Well they might not be knowing but this one crash is gonna change their

Life,whether in a constructive or a destructive way,no one knows,lets see

How it unfolds


i hope u guys liked it,if yes then pls hit the like button and drop down ur comments

and yeah one more thing this is my last update of this week,now i will be able to update only after 18th as my in-sem exams r about to start,i hope u guys will support me

love

pari

Edited by pari1995 - 11 years ago
StarBull thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
WOW!!! it's damn awsome...
superb updt...
love it...
Nitra thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
Jab first meeting aisi hai to pata nai aage kya hoga but seriously ye crash superb hai and thanks for the pmpm waiting for the next part dear...

Related Topics

Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: zajedno · 3 months ago

new morning, new day. what does the new day bring us. what will the morning be like after the storm that rages in my heart all night. What is...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: sakshi5050 · 11 months ago

Ranveer's unsaid feelings #14 updated Episode 1019 page no 29

Welcome to the new thread of Ranveer's unsaid feelings. Keep enjoying the world of Ishveer. Their unconditional Love, their friendship, their...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: sakshi5050 · 3 years ago

Welcome you all to the new thread of RANVEER'S UNSAID FEELINGS #13 Keep Travelling in the world of ISHVEER LOVE Warm Regards sakshi ❤️ Index...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: Rizz-ington · 1 years ago

A N A R H I F F ---- Iss Darr Ko Kya Naam Doon Summary: Khushi is an internet famous 27 year old fashion designer from Lucknow. She has a chirpy...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: abavi · 4 years ago

From the author's desk : Welcome to thread 6! I started to write this story years ago when the show was live and now when I look back on what...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".