Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS #3 OS 7 (7~31) Link to #4 Pg 1

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DDC1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#351

Cant wait for more. Love our little firebrand!

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Arshix144

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Posted: 10 years ago

#352

Stalking pays off big time...! 🥳

I experienced all kinds of emotions reading these latest two updates. Firstly I was all the way there with Khushi, cheering her on for telling the Laad governor off once and for all while feeling for her too. Arnav's marriage proposal kind of made me laugh, ASR can be very Ajeeb ..the girl in question just finished telling him how she would prefer death over sharing any kind of physical relationship with him and he asks her to marry him.😲 Khushi's bafflement was priceless because I experienced the same emotion. I suppose it was Arnav's way of giving her the respect that he quite conveniently snatched from her by asking her to sell her body to him rather than Shyam. I guess in more ways than one it was his own realisation of the depth of his feelings for her too.

Love, love, loved Khushi's response to him in the end! Can't wait for Arnavji to realise that a measly sorry or a sudden marriage proposal ain't gonna cut it, forgiveness needs to be earned! :D

Thank you for the speedy updates ladies, as you know I am always greedy for more!😳

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just4this

@just4this

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Posted: 10 years ago

#353

good one both kushi's outburst and asr's proposal amazing

i must applaud arnav's dare to propose marriage

loved it

thank u

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sonal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#354

Awesome update...simply saying sorry is not going to work Arnav will have to earn her forgiveness...

Marriage Proposal is Arnav kidding????

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Param

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Posted: 10 years ago

#355

simply awesome!! arnav proposed and khushi disposed.. loved the update..

thanks for mail 😊

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incarnadine

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Posted: 10 years ago

#356

Great update Smita!

I just love the way Khushi says Saale and then saheb. 😆

I loved the way she maintained her strong ground and made him say sorry for every single thing, though it won't suffice.

So he has eventually proposed to her. Sounded more like a statement than asking for her hand 😛
Loved it ! Looking forward to the next update :)

Thanks for the email Rashmi :) x

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chaitali

@chaitali12

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Posted: 10 years ago

#357

I love khushi's attitude n confidence yaar..
loved it..
continue soon. .

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nishu_shorna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#358

Loving the way the story is progressing... Beautifully written...

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devishree

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Posted: 10 years ago

#359

i take gr8 honour in applauding our smita di 👏⭐️

thats the spirit girl!!!😃 u make us proud we women who work for our family and die before they become shame to the family 👍🏼

i loved the payback and reply given by Khushi to ASR's stature and pride 😃

how dare he say all the horrible and worst things and label her as low lying dirt and propose her marriage😡 this is the face palm moment for his morality and ego

now prove urself worthy of ur morality and khushi and then ask for her hand MR.Raizada😉

loved the update thoroughly very good update 👏

thank u rashmi for the mail

love u di and rashmi❤️