Tumse Milke - an AR SS - #Thread 2 - Page 36

Originally posted by: little_angle

yupp di im surely gona read the complete parts wenever i get time...!!!
😊 😃

Originally posted by: gaurikajen

tabyat thek hai na ab aapki

finally kitna wait ke baad TM ka update mila

kab se wait kar ahi th main

part to was as usual awesome

super romantic hehe

loved AR scenes their romance, talks and everything

bechari riddhma kaha shamless logo ke bich fas gayi hehe

i love karan and ridz part

and then second part of their honeymoon awesome

pm part was super hot

i had goosebumps in my stomach hehe

oh god m going to miss this ss damn so much aapko pata hai m is ss k boht close hun

par everything have to come to an end ni

ab baki ke updates bhi dena jaldi jaldi

love u lotsss

Originally posted by: Aayu-loveKaJen-

like i said it to u earlier...

the part was osome blossome...

i loved the part where ridhima was asking armaan for phone and he tease her and then clicked some photo himself and then when he was giving ridhima phone to click the pic she got shy know the pic armaan have taken of them... i luv that part sooo much and specially ridhima pouting pic hahahahha

arey i can imagine the pic ye maat bolna mein ne dekhi kahan ... hahahhah

and then in the last where the romantic last days of honeymoon... in the yard... i totally loved it sisooo...

u know by chance apka and mera yard was scene same ho gaye hain Always with u ke part se.. which i m writing and saving with me soo last few parts mein dubara break na lage...

i need to change it now.. hayeee... koi nahi i wil change it for better.. ahhaaha

anyway...

luv u hawt and sexy update...

full of passionate pyaar...

PS... - see no essence of ur writing is lost... it was just the stressed out mind of urs that wasn't letting u work...

Originally posted by: megha_kajen

pehle toh bohot bohot shukriya...

ke aapne hume part diya... 😉

ab aate hain part pe.. 😊

AR Honeymoon(pvt Island)

kya romantic part tha...

bhai shaab...

mazza aa gaya...

AR ka romance...

was too awsume...

armaan ne breakfast banaya for riddhiam

that was such a cute moment...

dill aa gaya mera

is part pe...

uske baad beach pe AR ki masti...

that was too fabulous...

m telling you...

maza aa gaya...

aur please...yaar aise parts dete raha karo...

kabhie...kabhie... 😊

aur jab armaan ne riddhima ke liye...

woods mein surprise plan kiya...

that was so cute... 😉

AR ki selfie section was

such cute...haaye...😛

aur phir AR ki romantic night...

jisme they again become one...

adult part was too hawtt...and sexy...

haayeee 😳 ☺️

it was so romantic 😳 😳

aur phir jab AR return to MM

jab karan only greeeted riddhima not armaan

and cute bickering of karan n armaan on who loves

riddhima more.

hahahahhaa 😆 😆

aur phir gang masti..

that was too awsume n cute...

loved it whole... 😃 😛

aur phir yatch trip of AR in malaysuiya...

that was too romantic...

loved it

P.S.

overall part was super romantic and full of passion... 😳 😛

loved it...

and yaa you have not lost ur essence of writing...

so keep writing aur update dete raho..

bye

tc

love u loads

muahhh :* <3

Originally posted by: tv05

Awesome part...

Thnx fr pm...

Luvd it...

Originally posted by: Ruppkotha

Starting...ws superb as usual
Beautifully described
Phir armaan aur khana banana...wel that's miracle
phir woh breakfast
Wow...
Then water fight...
I ws like...

Aaj blue hai paani
Paani pani paani paani paani
Aur din bhi sunny
Sunny sunny sunny sunny sunny
Aajaao on the beach yaar
Photo meri kheench, phooti kismat hogi teri
Gar tune ye baat na maani

& u know..For the romantic moment
oops not now I'll tell about it at the end of the comment

Then another surprise...
WOWWW
Its a swing...
U know i love swing

Selfie...!!!!!!!!
Actualy its not selfie it is duetfie...😛
u know i've crazy experiences about selfie aur say groupfie...
Kabhi aur batayenge woh baat

Then about rommance baad me batati hoon

Then bck time...
Inka honeymoon khatam nhi hogi kya...??????????
inka eagerness dekh ke mujhe yaad ayi...

Aayeeye Aapka Intazaar Tha
Der Lagi Aane Mein Tumako Shukrr Hain Phir Bhi Aaye Toh
Aas Ne Dil Ka Saath Na Chhoda Vaise Hum Ghabaraayen Toh
Aayeeye Aapka Intazaar Tha

bahu k liye itna pyar..
Are are bechara armaan...tch tch tch
thn their teasing...
Yeh muskaan ko to jara bhi sharam nhi ati na...
i ws like hitting my head with hand when muskaan answered ridz's question
Yeh sochke that kise kya puch liya
then armaan koi mouka nhi chodte na riddhima se romance karne ka

then finally their honymoon over...
U know mujhe bas ek hi gana yaad a rhi thi aj
So isiliye maine aur koi gana yaad hi nhi kar payi..
& when i read the romantic parts na wohi gana rorate kar karke a rhi thi..
kyun ki aj pata nhi kitni bar i just listen this one song..
U might be guessed but i think thodi nhi puri keh deti hoon

Is tara se kudse aa mujko jod tu

Toda bi mujme na mujko chod tu
Na yaad teri tujko
Na yad muje hoon main
Aa mujko pehan le thu
Aa tujko od loon main
Katra katra main giroon
Jism pe tere teharun
Katra katra mein girun
Tuj mein hi kahi reh lun
Khud se kaali ho jaoon
Aaja tujse bar jaaoon
Tinka tinka jal jaaun
Aise jala do ho
Taroon mein tan pe terey
Tehrun ankon pe terey
Gehari jo kawahish teri
Unmey duba do
Na yad teri tujko
Na yaad muje hoon main
Aa mujko pehan le tu
Aa tujko od loon main
Katra katra main giroon
Jism pe tere teharon
Katra katra mein giru
Tuj mein hi kahi reh loon

& na pm part ki bare me mujhe ek aur baat kehni hai but i'll tell that in WA
so yeh gayi meri comments end with aj ki most hearing song😉😆
love u also lots lots lots...
Tc

Originally posted by: Jess2014

Hi,

I read the whole story at once.

I really liked it, ❤️ the concept was superb and the all the parts were just mindblowing.👏👏

Waiting for the epilogue and Thanks for the PM. 😊

wow so much romance loved this part so many ar cute little moments. their romance. nd armaan surprises.
loved the scene where karan only welcome ridhima nd armaan was shocked nd then they both armaan nd karan bickering over ridhima.
then the scene was cute when ar show gang the pics of them nd then the girls in room teasing ridhima with their shameless comments that was funny .
the whole part was beautiful yaar i just loved it full of ar sweet moments. thanks for giving me the pm part its was too hot nd romantic.
so sad i feel like crying.
eagerly waiting for the epilogue plz update it soon

aweeesome di...love it soo much