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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: RihooHaws


Hehehe hayye, thank god tujhe pata hai...
Arey, tum kuch kahe aur main na maanun :P aisa kabhi ho sakta hai...
Main toh jitna ho sake utna meri readers and friends koh khush rakhne ki koshish karti hoon apni writing se...
Toh itna toh banta haina hehehe...

Pasand aaya???
lolzzz wrong question na hahaha...
I know I know bohot zyada aagayi... I m happy u like... oppps love it :D

Nehi nehi, teri comment kaha emotional hogayi...
Yes its a family moment... Yeh moment toh har ladki ki life main aate hai right...

Hahaha, I know tu emotional kam funny bana enge :P
Yeh toh tu just mujhe hasane se pehle tohda mood shood bana rahi ti na hehehe...

Hahahaha really...
Tujhe itna accha laga tu part ke andar gusne ki soch rahi ti hehee...
Wah behena wah, kiya idea hai hehehe...

Hahaha... Shayad yeh baat tumne pehle bhi kaha hai...
Aur kissi ne mujhe kaha hai meri POV ki wajahse meri stories aur khubsurat hote hai...
Ab yeh kisne kaha main nehi bataungi... :P lolzzz...
But jab tumne aaj yeh baat kahi na, mujhe uski yeh baat yaad aagayi...
Aur mujhe bhi lag raha hai aisa hi hota hai hehehhe...

Main kyun bataun mujhe yeh sab idea kaha se aate hai...
Lekin meri dhimag main aate hai yeh toh pakki baat hai hah heheheh...
Ayye hayye...
Goosebumps and all hah :P
Love u Ji love u, itna accha laga tumhe ;)
Lolz, ek na ek din toh sab kuch khatam hote hai... Phir bhi yeh toh sirf ek SS hai hehehe...

Jaldi??? :O
Hailaaa Aur kitna jaldi karun main :P
Sure Sure wait karo... Woh kehte haina...
inthizaar ki phal meeta hota hai hehehe...
Muwaaahh <3
Love u too infinity...
Hayye hayye, yeh toh dusri gift haina heheeh...
Dekho maine teen teen gift diya tujhe :D
bas khush raho ab okey...
take care <3


agar aap aise hi mera kahaa maaano toh mazaa na aa jaye... 😛 😉
aapki writing se sab khush hote hain...
aap likhte itna achha ho 😉 😆 🤣
yup i don't like it...i loved it...infact adored it 😉 😛
mat batao main apne aap pata laga lungi kahan se aate hain aapko aise ideas 😛 😉
ab kya karun aapne part hi aisa likha tha
k mann kiya part keandar chali jaun...par afssos jaa ni sakti
par its okay i can feel it

ab jaldi next dena
wait ni karaana zyaada 😛
bye...
muahhh :*
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: megha_kajen


agar aap aise hi mera kahaa maaano toh mazaa na aa jaye... 😛 😉
aapki writing se sab khush hote hain...
aap likhte itna achha ho 😉 😆 🤣
yup i don't like it...i loved it...infact adored it 😉 😛
mat batao main apne aap pata laga lungi kahan se aate hain aapko aise ideas 😛 😉
ab kya karun aapne part hi aisa likha tha
k mann kiya part keandar chali jaun...par afssos jaa ni sakti
par its okay i can feel it

ab jaldi next dena
wait ni karaana zyaada 😛
bye...
muahhh :*


Lolzzz, main sabke baat maan ne lagi toh phir toh hogayi meri stories mast...
No more villain, more bad things and just only happiness and joy hehehe...
Hayye, itna accha accha compliment...
Main toh hawa main ud jaungi ab hehhe...

Hayye, u adore...
Wah wah pehli baar suna koi adore my writing...
Ab kyun na ho, after all part toh tere liyeh hi dedicate ki na hehehe..
I know I know, its not the reason...
Aur yeh bhi pata hai u all love my writing style :P and ideas...

Accha ji, toh tik hai...
Main bhi dekhun tu khud pata kaise laga te hai hehehe..
Kyunki mujhe aaj tak yeh nehi pata chala mujhe aise idea's aati kaha se :P hahaha

Yeah, its sad ki tum andar toh nehi ja sakte part ke...
Lekin jab teri shaadi fixed hote toh teri hone wala unko aise hint de dena okey :P
phir tu live woh sab jee sakti hai hehehe...
Haina mast idea ;) lolzzz...

Jaldi????
Can't promise kyunki mujhe doh din se headache ho raha hai...
Pata nehi kyun yeh headache phirse shuru huva hai...
I know zyada wait nehi hoga, I will try my best...
take care muwaahhh :*
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Posted: 10 years ago
sorryyy late ho gayi
awesome part finally AR ki marriage ho gayi
ahan armaan riddhima sabse chupke gaye
pm part was tooo goooddd
hot
thank u par inni jaldi khatm bhi
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Posted: 10 years ago
have edited the comment on page 43..!!
:) :)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: gaurikajen

sorryyy late ho gayi

awesome part finally AR ki marriage ho gayi
ahan armaan riddhima sabse chupke gaye
pm part was tooo goooddd
hot
thank u par inni jaldi khatm bhi


No problem dear..
Kabhi kabhi hota hai ;) its okey...
Haan ab hogayi shaadi...
Aur chup chupke milna padega na... friends toh chodte nehi akele dono koh...
Glad u enjoy the whole part... even the pm part...
take care...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: desire_nikki

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pehle i am so sorry...for late comment..! Didn't get enough time to read and comment..!!
And di part was just superb..!! Finally the most awaited part...and special one... wedding day..! ! Each and everything u describe perfectly..!! Riddhima and Armaan's eagerness ...feeling of getting married the one u love..!!

Nikki and Muskaan's teasing...hahha...The way describe how riddhima was looking...admiring herself in mirror..!! Shashank, Padma and riddhima's convo was such a touching one..! !everyone gets emotional...loved it..!! then armaan abhi and rahul's teasing sessions...ahh...that was fun..!!

Riddhima and armaan's POV was superb...u describe their thoughts very well...about each and every ritual...and boys v/s girls fight..!! they even started here too..!! :P :P
And then Armaan and riddhima's moment when riddhima was getting ready...it was so romantic one..!! Muskaan and nikki again disturbing them...heheheh...and then teasing and shameless comments...it was fun reading it..:)

Finally the party...enjoyment everyone did...Armaan taking riddhima out ...no one knows...hehhhe..:P :P they have to still hide and run..even now they are married...Gang will not leave them..!! and Armaan's surprise was such a beautiful one..!! Only he can do such sweet things..!! Romantic lover boy...hehhehe..!! But the surprise ..u described about it so well...

Now about the PM part...so it was such a romantic one..!! Finally they are one..!! Yeah officially one..!! :P BUt the whole part was awsumm...and now waiting for a perfect epilogue giving a perfect ending to it..!! Do post epilogue soon,.!! will be waiting for it..!!
Take care..!!



Oh ho, Sorry bolke comment se pehle tumne meri dil tohdi na *Sob sob*
Arey koi baat nehi, hota hai kabhi bhi...Aur late kaise huvi...
Maine toh next part post nehi ki na abhi :D so u r not late...

Happy u love the whole part and u have been waiting for the part...
Thank you so much for the compliment and its all my pleasure...
Very happy that I was able to describe so well :)

Ab friends hai toh teasing hona toh banta haina...
Woh itni asaani se chodte kaha ho :P
Ek ladki ke liyeh apne parents koh chodke ke kissi aur ke ghar rehna padta hai...
Issiliyeh shaadi ke din emotional banna toh banta haina ;) hehehe...

Hehehe, thank u again... I m glad u like the POV part of AR...
Arey yeh dost hai AR ke, shuru hone ke liyeh tohdina jhaga dekhenge yeh log hehehe...
Ab romance toh banta haina...
Shaadi hogayi lekin dono koh akele chodte nehi yeh log...
Issiliyeh Armaan toh bas moka dhundte hai... Jab bhi miljate hai, bas chance maarte hai ;)
Aur AR romance kare aur undono koh disturb na karo, yeh bhi toh ho hi nehi sakte right???
Maza aaya na, bas... Main toh issiliyeh aise part likhti hoon :P taaki tum log koh maza aaye...

Surprise honeymoon place accha laga na :P
I knew it hehehe...
U r right, only Armaan the lover boy can do such things for Riddhima...
Glad u like the descriptions part of the island and cottage :)
Thank u again :D

Hahahaha, yes they are officially one now :P
Waise pehle bhi toh ek ho chuki hai but after marriage, yah its the first time they are officially one hehe...
Arey arey, epilogue toh abhi ek aur part ke baad milenge...
Issiliyeh pehle part20 ka wait karo, then epilogue okey...

Thank u so much for the lovely comment Nikki...
I m so glad that I had written to ur expectation...
Also its a pleasure to entertain u all with my writing :)
Hope u would be loving the coming part and epilogue...
Take care <3
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: RihooHaws


Oh ho, Sorry bolke comment se pehle tumne meri dil tohdi na *Sob sob*
Arey koi baat nehi, hota hai kabhi bhi...Aur late kaise huvi...
Maine toh next part post nehi ki na abhi :D so u r not late...

Happy u love the whole part and u have been waiting for the part...
Thank you so much for the compliment and its all my pleasure...
Very happy that I was able to describe so well :)

Ab friends hai toh teasing hona toh banta haina...
Woh itni asaani se chodte kaha ho :P
Ek ladki ke liyeh apne parents koh chodke ke kissi aur ke ghar rehna padta hai...
Issiliyeh shaadi ke din emotional banna toh banta haina ;) hehehe...

Hehehe, thank u again... I m glad u like the POV part of AR...
Arey yeh dost hai AR ke, shuru hone ke liyeh tohdina jhaga dekhenge yeh log hehehe...
Ab romance toh banta haina...
Shaadi hogayi lekin dono koh akele chodte nehi yeh log...
Issiliyeh Armaan toh bas moka dhundte hai... Jab bhi miljate hai, bas chance maarte hai ;)
Aur AR romance kare aur undono koh disturb na karo, yeh bhi toh ho hi nehi sakte right???
Maza aaya na, bas... Main toh issiliyeh aise part likhti hoon :P taaki tum log koh maza aaye...

Surprise honeymoon place accha laga na :P
I knew it hehehe...
U r right, only Armaan the lover boy can do such things for Riddhima...
Glad u like the descriptions part of the island and cottage :)
Thank u again :D

Hahahaha, yes they are officially one now :P
Waise pehle bhi toh ek ho chuki hai but after marriage, yah its the first time they are officially one hehe...
Arey arey, epilogue toh abhi ek aur part ke baad milenge...
Issiliyeh pehle part20 ka wait karo, then epilogue okey...

Thank u so much for the lovely comment Nikki...
I m so glad that I had written to ur expectation...
Also its a pleasure to entertain u all with my writing :)
Hope u would be loving the coming part and epilogue...
Take care <3


Aapne next part toh post nahi kiya..phir bhi mera commet last tha...that means i am thoda sa late..isliye sorry bola...but ab nahi bolungi..:P :P shyad..:p

Aur aapke parts mujhe hamesha achhe lagte hai..the way u present the situations...how u describe them.. it feels we are watching a real movie running infront of our eyes,,..:) :)
And really...sabse jyada fun cousins and friends ke saath hee hota hai...well teasing is the most important part..!! hehhehe//!! and yeah parents ko chodna bohot mushkil hota hai...:(
Aur aapne shai kaha...armaan ko jab mauka mille...wo jaane nahi deta..:D :D our lover boy is a perfect husband material...a romatic too...:P :D :D :D
And sorry...i think mai wo aapka aur sohu di ke fs ka part padh rahi thi...toh shyad mujhe yeh yaad reh gaya iss ka last part hai yeh..oopss///1! but mai toh double happy..ki abhi ek part aur bacha hai...yippee..!!
ab its gonna end soon..:( m gonna miss it very much..!! :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
again sorry for being late...I'm very busy these days...
finally got enough time to read this...
awesome part...
totally full of AR romance and masti...
marriage is so beautifully described...like it...
Armaan's surprise...totally love it...
AR romance...very hot...my screen is burning...

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