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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dhruvi_parsh

Hey dear
Loved it
Amazing update
Awsome concept..
Thnks for pm
Do update soon
Love
Dhruvi


thanks yar...will update within 2hr...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank u soo much for such lovely comments guyz.
And Sush, hope u r doing well. Miss u sooo much my friend.
Here is the last part of yellow. It's small. But don't worry there is some surprise.
I hope, all of u will njoy.

YELLOW PART3

My days with Rd part2 came to an end, and our classes started.
After some days, our exams started. We all r busy in preparing for the exam.
I didn't get enough time to talk with Rd. yes, after vacation, we r in talking terms. But he is still the MCP, arrogant one. But, my sadu.
WHAT??? My sadu?? Have u lost it Sanyukta? U better concentrate on ur studies.

I studied and studied to keep aside the thoughts abt him.

During our final exam, model exams of our seniors are going on. Their board exam will be on next month.

On the last day of our exam, came an important announcement. Farewell party for our seniors will be held on next week. And we, the juniors r meant to organize that.

Oh God, that means we have to be here, in school, for another week.

And we started the preparations. I was the head for art dept. can u believe it??? Me, the head for arts. And that Rd decided it.
I will kill him. That boy, didn't lose a single chance to irritate me. And above that I have to participate in a group dance.
My performance- it's a theme dance. Abt a princess, who loves a common man. But the king, was against it. He kills that man. Bcz of that, princess loss her memories.

I'm supposed to perform the princess' role, parth as princess' lover and rahul as the king.

I was least interested in dancing with that stupid Rahul. But kausthu, arpu, jiggy made me. What to do?? After all, I can't deny my buddies request.

The rehearsal went good. The song is---- beegi beegi si hai

Rd is in the decoration committee. He usually comes during our rehearsal time, to give me his signature smile. He once told me to back out from the dance, otherwise I will screw up on the stage. I ignored that!!! I know what he is upto. Just to irritate me...silly boy!!!
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Farewell party

I was hell nervous. I have to perform a dance, above that, I have to coordinate the entire on stage events. What to do??? Oh God, plz give me strength.

The program started. Just then arpu called me and asked me to get ready for my performance. I went to greening room. Changed into a black frock, curled my hair, put some make up- some kohl and lip stick. Went to the back stage. I saw the performances. After some time, I heard the announcement for our performance.

Jiggy and some other boys did the settings for our dance. I entered the stage. Closed my eyes, and prayed. Then looked around me, and saw the boys who r dancing with me. All of them have a black mask on their face. And in black pants, white shirt. I searched parth. He is also in mask. But in red shirt.
Where is the villain of the story??? I mean Rahul!!! Then saw the funny thing. He dressed like Alexander the great. But to me, it's sooo funny. I laughed. And he passed me an angry glare.


Then the dance started. There were steps in which I was lifted and floats in the air for some time. And in another step, I have to keep my arms around parth's shoulder and we should have an eye lock.
During that step, I felt...weird.
this is not Parth.
It's not his eyes.
I dance freely with Parth. But this time...it's something else.

Wait, I know this touch. May be I know him. I really felt, I know this person who is dancing with me right now. As if I know him for ages.
I danced with him as if, I was in a spell. Soo freely (may be not) my heart is floating in the air.

After the performance, everybody came to congratulate me. I said thanks to all. But I have to find out the person who danced in the place of Parth. Better I search Parth.

I ran towards greening room for boys. But to my surprise, parth stood there and he is in the costume of our dance.

Me:" Parth, may I ask u one thing?"

P:" ha Sanyu."

Me:" was.. that u?"

P:" me... what?"

Me:" the one who danced with me in the stage."

P:" of crse Sanyu. What happened yar??"

Me:" nothing."

With that, I ran to my hostel room.
What just happened?? I'm damn sure that wasn't Parth. Then y did he lied to me??

And that mysterious guy!!! I know him well.

His touch, his eyes, his breath, his holds---I know all these.

My heart beat become faster. I closed my eyes and revised the entire dance. That boy...
RANDHIR. I whispered.

OMG!!!! How is that possible? Am I g one mad??
Ahhh , better I find the truth.
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I changed the dress and worn a black long sleeveless dress. Put up my hair, worn a white long ear ring.

Went to the party. All program went well.
Then the DJ started. Everybody started dancing.
How can I find Rd from here? I searched every in of the auditorium. But Rd found missing.



Arpu asked me to join the dance. We started dancing on the song behke behke..' from Ayisha. We danced in pair. All pair get exchanged after doing some steps together. 1st, I danced with Sahil. Then with Jiggy and with Parth.

I looked into his eyes. Those r black. But that mysterious boy has brown iris. I'm damn sure abt that.

And Parth, what is he doing? He didn't allow me to go, neither he exchanged his partner, that is me.
I danced with him till the 2nd stanza of that song. Then suddenly, I shrugged his hands from mine and exchanged me with Vids to Parth. And danced with the boy with whom Vids was dancing. Doing so, I smashed on that boy's chest.

Suddenly I felt a familiar grip on my waist.

I looked up. That was Rd. we danced till the song ended.

I checked the color of his iris.

Those are BROWN.

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Posted: 11 years ago
Le me dance 1st
Yaaay moi 1st again
Ok so that mysterious boy was rd but why he did that n why did he asked her to back out
Oh hod itna suspense now my head is aching
UPDAISHHH SOOONISHHH
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pritha072angel

Le me dance 1st
Yaaay moi 1st again
Ok so that mysterious boy was rd but why he did that n why did he asked her to back out
Oh hod itna suspense now my head is aching
UPDAISHHH SOOONISHHH


thank u sooo much yar...ab thoda aur wait karo...orange chapter ke bad red hi hai. sab patha chalega...
thumare liye medicines prescribe karoo kya???? hee hee...
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Posted: 11 years ago
awww. randhir danced instead of pArth.. nice... next part soon!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
They danced together
I think Parth helping rd
Rd is ignoring Sanyu
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
RES😳
UNRES

Hey! Swa
Lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely,
lovely, lovely update dear😳😳
Lovely, nicely and beautifully written👏👏
love it to the core

Very well you've described the scenario⭐️⭐️
The suspense is awesome😃
I love suspense..😉
SanDhir dance...😳
Sanyu know him very well😳😃
Ur story is going interesting very interesting😉

Keep it up
Update soon
Eagerly waiting
Thanks for pm
Love
Bushra
Edited by Param_love - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: samyukthakrish

awww. randhir danced instead of pArth.. nice... next part soon!!!


thank u dear...will update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: don girls

Awesome update
They danced together
I think Parth helping rd
Rd is ignoring Sanyu
Update soon


thanks yar...
kon kiska help kartha hai, vo baad meim patha chalega...
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Posted: 11 years ago
ohhh myyy goddd
its sooo cuteee part swa
really changung the equation is interesting ver interesting
i cant w8 for further yaar
plzzz next part sooonnn
thanks for pm
lots of love
sakshi

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