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Posted: 10 years ago
#41
Amazing concept.
Loved it.
Update soon. 😊
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#42
I love the concept and awesome CS
Wonderful starting, Taani is so unhappy yet she care enough to take care of Rey
It's heart breaking that Taani has to suffered at Rey hands for something she didnot do
I can't wait to read more
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43

so sorry for late comment

coming to the update

i just love this concept

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pls pls update soon n pm me

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#44
Awesome concept :)
Great start :)
Loved it :)
Continue soon :)
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#45
awsome concept...
love the cs and first chap...
rey is torturing her from 1 yr and she is all tired of his hatred and became emotionless...
plzz continue soon and pm me plzz...
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awsm cnspt and lvly start. Taarey married cnspts r always my fav. D aggressions and intensity of such strys will b really high. And when its frm 2 talentd writers d expetatns will also increase. Update soon
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awesome concept & cs
loved the 1st chapter
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nice concept...update next chapter soon..;-):-):-):-):-):-)
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#49
Another short CS

Arnav Singh Raizyada and Khushi Singh Raizyada - Taani's elder brother and bhabhi


Neelam SInghania - Rey's elder sister


Scroll down and read the chapter for further clarifications...


Please check page 1 for banner...
Edited by hima_taarey - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Recap-Rey's accident,
Taani taking care of Rey
Rey's anger towards Taani
Taani completely ignoring Rey


Chapter-2

That night Rey slept..due to the effect of medicines...early morning or say late night near about 1.40 Pm, he woke up. .. there was no one in his room, Taani used to sleep in a different room after there marriage as instructed by Rey...his leg was still paining and his shoulders too..and he stared towards the window pane blankly thinking about his life...from past one and half years...he tried to question himself once again why did he marry Taani?

Instantly the answer that his brain gave him was REVENGE'...but from whom? Yes it was from his once upon a time his friend-philosopher-guide, truly speaking Arnav Singh Raizyada.. was Rey's frd but he was elder as he was actually Rey's elder sister Neelam's frd.

History dates back to few years...Raizyada and Shinghanias were family friends staying in Mumbai but the kid of the Singhania family Reyansh Singhania was in Europe from a younger age of 10 with his uncle studying there. Then once Singhania family Mr and Mrs Singhania meet with an car accident and died...from then Singhania's elder daughter Neelam Singhania used to stay most of the time in Raizyada house. She and Raizyada's elder son Arnav were frds from school days.. and Mr and Mrs Raizyada treated her as their own daughter..it was almost evident that Arnav and Neelam will get married later on...Neelam too loved him but Arnav considered Neelam as his bff . In the mean time Reyansh returned from Europe after his twelfth and Raizyada's liitle princes Arnav's dearest sister. and Neelam's cutest princess ever Taani Raizyada went to Delhi for her Medical studies. In a short span of time Arnav and Reyansh became like frds and brothers...and he was also like a guide to Rey in college matters in projects .in hang outs..and this gave Neelam more hopes about their future...as Neelam was in her own dream world ...there she knew she will marry Arnav and she will get her dashing younger bro Reyansh..married with Taani...she was dreaming a perfect family...but as it says all dreams doesen't come true...the same happened Arnav fell in love with his secretary Khusii...and decided to get married...Neelam getting the news acted normal..but she was shattered from inside...for her Arnav was her world from school days.

Present

Rey was staring at the window pane and was remembering the worst day of his life...the way he was connected to his elder sister ..he was not so much connected to his parents...it was 16 th September 2012...everybody was busy in..Raizyada house ,it was the marriage of the elder son of Raizyada...Arnav with khusi...his love of his life...even Singhania house was decorated..as instructed by Neelam..she took all initiative and care..she was busy helping Rukmini aunty ( Mrs Raizyada)...and Reyansh the MBA graduate was too anxious to meet Taani Raizyada ...the younger daughter of Raizyada's who was coming to Mumbai after 5 yrs, becoming a Docter completing her medical.(they were separated..when rey was 10 and taani was 7..they have not seen each other since then ) ..she was just a intern..and his Neelam dii always said him about this girl...It was time for the barat to go and suddenly Neelam went missing...after few minutes Neelam called Rey asking him to go with the barat and she will join later...Rey at that time was so busy adoring the stunning beauty in front of him...Taani- the intelligent, cute chulbulii Doctor...that the coldness and difference in Neelam's voice went un noticed by him...all were enjoying , the marriage was over..but still no one noticed that Neelam was missing...then came the alarming Ph call...tring tring tring...

R- Hello , Neelam di kaha ho?

N-Rey tum bohot ache bhai ho hamesha khush rehena...kabhi kissi ka dil maat torna...dil tutne se bohot dard hota hai...promise me kisi ka dil nahi toroge na????

R- Dii kya bol rahi ho? Hua kya hai?

N- bhai kisine mera dil tora hai...bohot dard ho raha hai...ab dard bohot baar chukaa hai...nahi saha jata...mai ja rahi hu bhai...

R: di, please meri baat suno! Please kuch mat karo di! Aap akeli ho mere liye. Aap please uss loser ke liye apni jaan pe mat khelo! Di!!! Diii!!! Hello!!!

*Beep Beep Beep*

After this Rey drived like a maniac to his house...but by that time everything ended and Neelam cut her wrist and committed suicide...all came back Mr and Mrs Raizyada...the newlywed couple Arnav and Khusii...and came the Docter Taani...her first diagnosis...her first patient...her Neelam diii who knew her all secrets...and she announced her dead...her first case ever...

All rituals were over...and then when the funeral ceremony was going on Arnav broke down...though he didn't love Neelam as a lover...but obviously he loved as her best frd...he broke down ...he admitted that Neelam loved him ,he made her understood that they were frd and all was ok ...but he was unaware about the fact that Neelam will take such a drastic step...but for Rey Arnav was a cheater...whom he considered as a elder bro became a looser and a cheater...and he wanted revenge...he kept quite for few days...joined business...Taani came closer to Rey...as a frd and supporter...but Rey was busy in master planning...for him his sister died ..because of Arnav Raizyada...so ...Arnav has to pay by seeing the worst condition of his sister...and in the whole plan Taani became the guinea pig...After this incident Arnav couldn't bear the pain of his frd's death ..he and Khusi along with Mr and Mrs Raizyda went forever and settled abroad...after Taani's marriage.

Rey married Taani within 6 months ...she became Taani Reyansh Singhania...only to see the worst phase of life...Rey was thinking all this...it was early dawn..the clock struck...3.00 AM...but he never understood the reason why Taani never protested...and took all his torture...without a single word of complain...Why?...even he is clueless...that whenever he tortures Taani severely...why doesn't he feel happy?...why does he feel more miserable...why does he feel that he is committing a sin...with all this thoughts...he again slept ...

He was in deep sleep...and he saw once again another bitter incident of his life...it was an office party...rather it was an success party..coz RS industries cracked a hard nut tender Taani was happy on Rey's achievements...she was getting ready for the party...humming a old song "sajna hai mujhe sajna ke liya'...and her smiling face angered Rey , his blood boiled...she has no right to smile...she has to suffer coz of her brother..his sister died...so how can she smile...but the fact was how much Rey tortures her ..but still she take cares of Rey, smiles at Rey...and it angers more Rey...and that day...it angered him so much that all of a sudden he slapped Taani...so hard...that blood started flowing from her ears...she became senseless...all of a sudden dreaming..this incident..he jerk up, his sleep opened...he was shattered...he sat on the bed all sweating...furiously...remembering that day if he wouldn't take Taani to doctor in the right time she would die...he was sweating more thinking that after Taani gained conscious she said to the doctor that she fell down...He starts weeping he so wanted to see Taani...but couldn't as he even couldn't walk , legs fractured...he clutched the pillow tight to his heart laid down on the bed weeping his heart out...he was feeling miserable...and was praying to God as at that particular time he wanted to see Taani's face for once...and almost at that same time the door clicked open...Rey understood Taani was in...but acted sleeping...Taani felt bad seeing Rey sleeping in a vulnerable condition, she sat on the bed and started caressing..Rey's forehead and his hair...unaware of the fact that Rey was awake...after sometime Taani woke up the already awake Rey...asking him to take his medicine...in a professional tone...he was happy from inside that still Taani cares for him and while giving medicine...to Rey both were captured in a long eyelock...it was broken by the ring in Taani's phone...it was from Sanjeevani..Hospital...asking about Taani's arrival as she was running late...but she informed that she will be on leave for one month...coz of her husband's health...later looking at Rey..she said its just that until his nurse arrives she will take care...as Rey said earlier that he will arrange a nurse for himself...

The day went on sometime Rey adamant with his ego...and sometimes with his guilt conscious..due to his behavior with Taani and he now so wanted to change things between them but still was not sure as what it was for Taani, his love? his care? or something else? but he was sure about one thing that he will never assault Taani as he did numerous times before , and with this the the day passed Taani's moving around doing things for Rey like feeding him helping him to take bath, healing his wounds changing bandage as a professional...and the night arrived...Rey wanted from his heart that at least today Taani sleeps with him in their own bed...but was clueless how to ask Taani?

Taani gave medicine to Rey...and was going out.. but she felt a slight pressure on her wrist...she turned back to see that Rey is holding her wrist..they had an intense eyelock...but Taani was the first to look away, she looked down and.

T-Kuch chahiya apko?

R-Nahii...actually..aj mere sath so jao...lets sleep together.

T-Yeah kamra aapka hai...U sleep...I have my own room.

R-But this is ours room , u are my wife Taani...u should stay with me..Don't u think so?

T- But it was u who wanted me to stay separate...it was u who asked me to be away from u ,it was u who said that we are husband wife for the rest of the world...but inside this house I am nothing more than a slaveee

( Rey immediately pulled her closer ...Taani was almost over him...He put a finger on her soft lips and did not let her complete her word...then)

R- Maine to bohot kuch kaha tha Taani...but tum suntii kaha ho...Maine to kaha tha mujhe touch maat karo, meri care maat karo, mere liya khana maat banao...mere liya raat ko dinner mai wait maat karo...mujhe tumharee sath khana pasand nahiii...fir bhi kya suntiii ho tum meri koi bhi baat??...then why do u listen when I say u to stay away from me in a seperate room...Pls aj yahii so jao plsss

T- Rey mujhe janna hai...aap so jayiyaa medicine ka asar nahi hoga...

( And by saying this she removed her hand from Rey's grip turned back and started moving...but Today Rey was adamant and he instantly came out with a plan...as she was moving out and closing the door ...Rey screamed in pain...)

Taani came running enqueuing about the pain, Rey said his shoulder was paining..Taani sat on the bed examining his shoulders, while Rey put his head on her lap sleeping on his chest, and hugged Taani tight around her waist...he snuggled in the warmth of Taani's lap...Taani was putting pain reliever spray on Rey's shoulder...but after that she realized he has dozed off to sleep on her lap...Taani laughed a little seeing Rey hugging her like a kid...and then putting his head properly on her lap..switching of the light ...herself went to deep slumber resting her head on the back rest of the bed...while.caressing his hair...

Was it a new beginning of a new relation?

Was it a new start of a Love saga? Or

Was it the realization of the love hidden inside both the hearts from a long time?

What was it will be answered by the new dawn ..after the black night...

As it says...Every dark cloud has a silver linning.



Precap
Gang's entry as given in CS
Arjun's Phone call
Please we want 80 likes and 8 pages of comment ...for the next update...

Edited by taani.priya1997 - 10 years ago

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