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Superb...
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CHAPTER-10 (A)

It was evening 5.00...they decided to live in present and forget about past and future in this..one and half days. So as decided...Rey said

R- Jao na Taani ready ho jao...its already 5.30...time hi nahii hai...

T-Rey ap pagal ho gayee ho? Its just 5.30 PM purii shaam pari hai...( REY made a cute angry face)...Ok I am getting ready..aab ap sakal maat banao.

REY's POV

Taani went to get ready..I was happy , we will spend time together...but a part of me was really shattered ,I couldn't even imagine Taani will leave me day after tomorrow and go but I decided to make this one and half day the best day of our married life...I decided ...to give all possible happiness to Taani in this last 36 hrs before she leaves me...coz how much it hurts... I will accept her punishment so that may be some day she will return to me...moreover she said that every weekends she will spend with me. By this thought...I got ready..I took special care for myself...I was consious...with my looks.. for the first time cause technically today we are going out for the first time...I wanted to make it a date for Taani.

Rey's Dress...




He was ready and waiting for Taani and was busy in making some Ph calls related for the surprice he wanted to plan for Taani...then Taani came getting ready...and called Rey.

T- Rey I am ready see it took just half an hour.

Taani's Dress...





Rey was dumpstruck seeing Taani looking , so much sexy and lively in the short off shoulder Pink dress she was wearing. He has never seen Taani like this and niether has Taani ever dressed in front of Rey like this cause they never shared such a relation and today Taani also took care in her looks cause in her heart she knew what ever Rey says he is taking Taani to a date...He was watching her open mouth..Taani became consious and asked Rey

T-Rey kya dekh rahe hai aap?...achhii nahi lag rahii hu kya?

Rey became consious...and then...

R-Taani...you are looking gorgeous...but ...but.

T-But???

R-But Change your dress...pleaseee.

T-Kya ? Kiu? Agar gorgeous lag rahii hu then why will I change?

R-Taani..please na change...sab dakhengee tumhe...tumhari...legs ko, aur off shoulder bhi hai...samjho na jaan...Pls (with a cute poute)....and tum laut ane ke baad pehen na mera samne...bardast nahi hoga koi aur tumhe us najar se dekhee...understand na pls pls...aur kya tum cahatii ho mai kisi ka murder kar du...waise bhi bohot jyada garbar ho jayega...pls pls.

(Taani was bit irritated with Rey's behaviour...and she turned to go and change...but then she felt a tug in her wrist..she turned...Rey made her sit in the sofa and himself sat near her legs on his knees holding her hand...and said ...)

R- gussa ho...?? Mai thora sa possessive hu...but u know I love u...koi agar tumhe aysa dekhe and say something I just can't toler cause tum sirf aur sirf meri..ho and please ha quarter mai yea sab dresses leke maat jana...weekends jab hum time spend karengee tub pehen na...Please I am just worried..akelii rahogii...so I just don't want...

T- Its ok Rey I understand your feelings...and even I am happy that app etne possessive ho...mere liya..just that I have never seen u possessiveor me so much ...honestly telling Rey...I am really happy , ok now give me 10 mins I will change and come...

R- Taani maine trip mai tumharee liya kuch kharida tha...so..actually everything changed then and I couldn't...

T- Rey baas no more past (and she ruffled his hair and said)...even today you are looking hot and handsome...aur jab mai nahi rahungii...to aap bhi etna handsome and hot nahi dikhengee..etna dress up nahi karenge..samjhee??..and now where is the dress...my first dress which my hubby brought for me..(and then Taani pulled Rey's nose)

R-...in my wardrobe.Go....( She started going...and then Rey said...)...bohot hot lag rahii ho es dress mai...esiliya nahi cahata hu koi dekhe tumhe aysee...

TAANI's POV

Rey did not allow me to wear the dress, first I was angry...but now I am feeling happy , he is possessive about me first time I saw his possessiveness and now this dress its so pretty ...pagal hai ..it is also off shoulder...jo bhi ho his first gift...I am feeling to cry, he loves me so much and even I love him...but he looses his trust...I don't know maine jo decision liya I am wrong or not...but even Can I stay without him...I really don't know...I hope may jo decision lu humharee...liya achha hi ho ..mai unhe dukhii nahi dak saktii niether I can hurt my self...Lets see...Now let me get ready he is eagar to go..and whom am I kidding even I am eagar to go and spend time with him...Our first date.

Rey was happy Taani understood him and more over her small touches ruffling his hair pulling his nose...was giving him peace... a bit of positivity...She came down changing in a pretty off shoulder light blue dress...Rey was waiting outside near the car and handed Choottuu to malii kaka( Gardener)...and then he saw his princess coming down ...she came down wearing

Taani's Dress





...and Rey opened the door of the car..she got inside and then when ...REY settled in the driver sit .

T- Apne kuch kaha nayiii...

R-kya??

T- mai kaysii lag rahii hu...??

R-Ak princess ko kahene ki jarurat hai that you are looking like a princess...tum batao dress pasand ayiii?

T- Hmm bohot khub surat hai..its really pretty...but Rey it is off shoulder too...agar koi comment kiya to?

R- I will handle...so lets go to Opera Mall first for your birthday dress...waise film dekhogii ??

T- Its all your choice...mujhe baas app ke saath...I mean..

R-Its ok Taani...mujhe bhi bas tumhare sath rehena hai...time spend karna hai...(and then looking towards her)...jindegii bhar.

They drove to Opera mall...Rey took Taani to desiner section...there he and Taani was choosing dresess and Rey ko kuch bhi pasand nahii a raha then at last ...he choose a beautiful traditional Indian Dress for Taani...It was red in colour...and Rey said

R-Taani you know Red is the colour of Love and passion...tum bohot pretty lago gii red mai...now lets go and buy something else.

T-aur kuch nahi Rey..aapne kiya na buy.etna payara outfit..abb ap caliya mujhe aap ke liya kuch lena hai...

R-But its your birthday?

T-So?..aap ke birthday humne kaha celebrate kiya tha?..

R-I know Taani , tumne cake banaya...and I hitted you with my bel...t

(Taani immediately turned around and put his soft fingers on Rey's lips...and then cupped his face and nodded her head indicating...nothing to speak...and then kissed his cheeks)

Rey was shocked by her act but felt good that she at least forgave him for his previous acts..and then after giving a mild laugh...

R-Taani we are in public place.

T-So what ? aap mera husband ho

Rey pulled Taani to wards himself by holding her waist and gave a side hug and then they entered the men's section...Taani saw hundred of shirts...making the salesman mad and then brought 5 shirts for Rey...and a blazer and for Rey he didn't speak anything he was enjoying the fact her argument with salesman and quite often her words saying...".mera patii ko ish colour mai handsome lage ga who dikhhayee...nahi yeah colour mera patii ko dull dikhega"...a typical talk of a typical loving wife...Rey somewhere was feeling guilty...that how much she loves him but he never reciprocated her love for him...but now when he realized...time is running away...and he thought he will not think more and just enjoy the time with his LOVE...His Princess...His wife...His thought broke when Taani was paying the bills...Rey took all the shopping bags from her hand and handed his credit card to TAANI...saying that he knows Taani earns, she is a reputed Docter but at present..she has come with her hubby so the pleasure his all his...taani smiled and took the credit card.

They came out of the store and Taani pouted in front of Rey saying coffee...Rey was too happy with her behaviour her cute pouts...and then he said.

R- so meri princess thak gayii hai.?...ok lets have coffee and your favourite paneer pakora...yeah don't be surprised I know your likes ...Purvii and Sharon said to me.

(They went to food court and had there snacks...latter on Rey said that he knows her favourite author is Chetan Bhagat...so lets go and watch Two States...and he also said that he remembered she was saying Neha that she wants to see Two States...so today she can fulfill her wish...Taani was too happy when she saw Rey taking so much care about her small small wishes...when she enquired about tickets...Rey informed that he has already booked)

They went to Inox It was a show from..8.30...they started watching hand in hand later during an intimate scene Taani looked down Rey saw it and put his hand on her shoulders and pulled her near him and whispered...in her ears.

R- Etnii sharam a rahii hai...achha...mujhe to laga meri biwwi bohot straight forward hai smart dress pehentii hai...etnii sharmatii hai ak kiss dakh kar...pata nahi...agar mai tumhe...es taraha...

T-Rey??

R-Kya Rey?

T-Hmnnn

R- ok baba concious nahi karungaa...dekho film...my princess.

After this they started watching and Rey's phone started buzzing...he went outside...and then after taking the call when he came back it was intermission...Taani enquired about it and then Rey said sorry to Taani stating that it was bit urgent , he has not gone office for long two months so its urgent that just now he have to go once and give his signature to his secretary...or else one assignment can not be despatched...Taani understood that but was feeling sad so Rey said her to watch the next half of the film by that time he will come back...and pick her up. Rey went away and Taani was feeling lonely she lost interest in the film she was missing the cozzy warmth of Rey which she was getting sitting near Rey... And it compelled her to think about her future when they will be seperated...in the mean time Rey did a little more shopping and went home...he was feeling sorry to live her alone...but then if he hadn't lied to her then...how could he arrange her surprise?

The film ended...Taani saw it ..but she couldn't register anything as she was involved deeply in her thoughts...and her most disappointment was when...she saw instead of Rey his driver came with a information that Rey is held up in office...so they have to cancel the dinner...and Rey asked her to go home and take dinner..he will be late...tears wailed up her eyes with the fact that Rey cancelled their first date...then didn't even call her to inform...instead send his driver with the information...she thought once again just when she tried to think once again about her decision...again the circumstances changed. She went home but driver stopped the car before entering the gate of the mansion when Taani enquired he said...if Taani gets down here it will be easy for him as he have to return office to bring Rey back...Taani was in no mood to argue...so she stepped down , opened the gate but as soon as she did so, she was awestruck..the whole path from mansion gate through the garden till the house get was covered with rose petals...










When she entered the house she saw a note on the Door knob reading...

"Princess close the door follow the rose petals ...its your way and come to the teracce.."...Come Soon your Rey is waiting"

Her eyes filled with tears she understood that it was the reason...he came out of the film and this time she misunderstood her...she entered the house every where was rose petals and lighted candles...her heart was filled with joy and love for her husband...for her Rey.

Roses scattered every where






The stairs to the terrace decorated with roses and candles.




As soon as he opened the teraace door rose petals scattered on her...there was a shower of roses on her she was overwelmed and tears started flowing from her eyes and in the middle of the terrace was a beautifully decorated...Dinner table...with candles lighting everywhere...and rey standind with a Black pant and a pink shirt with a black blazer and a black tie which she brought for him few hours ago. Rey came towards her and said...





R- Sorry princess left u alone in the theatre.

T- Rey aapne etna kiya mera liya...Rey its beautiful ...kisine kabhi mera liya aysa kuch nah kiya hai.

R- Kisse ne nahi kiya hai tumhare liya ? Hmmm coz koi bhi kabhi bhi tumhe mera jaysa payaar nahi kiya hai...I Love You Taani...Come want to show you something

( and then he took her to a partcular portion of The Terrace and there Taani show written with rose petals-)














She saw it and started crying...and then Rey cupped her face in his hand and said,,,,

R-Taani live the momment...no more tears..

T-But Rey jab maine...driver ko dekha I thought Ki aapne ...

R-Ki maine fir se tumhara hath chor diya...yehi na??? (Taani nodded) dekha princess now I can even understand your unsaid words...its ok maine past mai aysahi ..kiya...ok leave and now lets have dinner... Dinner ke bina date complete kayse hogi...he hold her hands and brought her to the table...and lighted a particular candle which had a pic of Taani....


Taani kissed his cheeks once again and touched his cheeks to rub the lipstick mark but Rey took her hand and rested his cheeks on her hand for few minutes and kissed her hands saying...

R-I really Love you and I am really sorry for whatever I have done...and I I will wait for your decision till eternity Taani...So lets have dinner...all are your fav foods...all thanks to Purvii and Sharon.

They had their dinner feeding each other with cute talks and Taani's giggles. After Dinner Rey saw it was already 11.45...he then asked Taani to wear the dress he has brought for her saying that he has kept it in the bedroom...Taani went in the room and there was one more surprise waiting for her ...the floor of the room was covered by...rose petals and in the wall was hanging their post wedding pic and written I Love You...All framed neatly...hanging in the bedroom. Before that they never had any of their pics framed in their house...when once Neha asked to Taani about it she ignored saying they didn't get time smiling..she changed the topic...because previously Rey did not want such things as he hated her..Her eyes filled with tears of happiness as today Rey was making her feel so special..so loved..she once again caressed the pic and then




Taani took the dress and changed into the beautiful red anarkali suit...she wore matching earrings and when she was leaving the room she thought something and entered once again stood in front of the dressing table...took sindoor in her hand...Looked at the frame and then put it on her parted hair...Rey saw everything from the door and felt too good that what ever Taani decides but the fact remains same she loves him a lot.





Part 10 (b)...next post will be updated tomorrow .

Sorry guys it became too big my hands are paining...and as most of you know the condition of my eyes they are hail paining...pls have patience...

Precap---Birthday celebration ...Taani's decision...and The Gift Taani wants from Rey.

And regarding pics all are posted by Pooja...( Sunshine) thanks to her and the source of pics are long time search in googlebaba..so I don't know whose edits are all these...who ever has done thank u so much...and sorry for using couldn't take formal permission.

Coming to update if u like then hit like and comments..please thora lamba comment dena...don't know how it came out but I worked on it for one full day...so .please...

Hope hima its upto your expectations.


Edited by taani.priya1997 - 10 years ago
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CHAPTER-10 (B) is being updated on Pg 69...
Sorry for the inconvinience

Edited by taani.priya1997 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Resss
Awwq it was beautiful prt Luv all surprise
Of rey it was sooo cute rey possessive wah
I like it taarey did shopping & taani cute thing
For rey & kiss on check wre superb Luv all pics
Excited for nxt prt ... Continue Prt-B thanks for PM
Edited by raddhi - 10 years ago
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awesome chapter
waiting for partB
Edited by Mon_tr - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Really sorry for not commenting from long time.
Nd about story its really emotional nd also cute update tha didu.
Update next chapter soon.
Nd do pm me😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Res
Unres
Firstly Priyu Di I Love You..😳
Kitne din se aapse baat nahi hui..😭
Kese ho aap??
Hope ache hogey..😊
Coming to the update..
Cuteness ki dukaan lga di😳
Rey aur Taani shopping par gaye the but aapne Cute scenes ki shop open kardi..🤣
Amazing..
That salesman and Taani's talk was Awww..😳
Dresses was nyc..
Date was just lovely..
Every line said by Rey & Taani showed that how much they love each other.
Hope Taani change her decision..
She don't leave Rey..
If it will happen I'll be the happiest person on this world..
Update asap..
and take care of your eye..!!!
varna..😡 (you know me..)
Edited by -AnyDestiny- - 10 years ago
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res
unres
chapter 10A
was awasome
lovs possesive rey 😆
b shopping scene was too cute
hye rey suprise for tani was awasome
n pic r jst tooo awasome
thxkz for pm
plz.do uodate soon
Edited by Iman_taarey - 10 years ago

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