Daddy's Hands #2: Chapter 24 on Page 80 (April 28th 2016)

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anuja78

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Posted: 10 years ago

#241

you just go on updating yaaar...
its superb

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Sonali Shivkumar

@ChasingLiberty

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Posted: 10 years ago

#242

HIII !!!!

I am late again as usual !!

So sorry !!!

but you won't be mad at me after reading my comment pakka

this comment is for chapter 14 as well as 15

it is 2.30 am here.. it is just me , my laptop , darkness and this fabulous story !!!!

i read these back to back .. and i am speechless !!!!!

like literally speechless..

i have never read a more realistic piece of work..

first toh like an idiot i read your spoilers.. and in that you wrote Sandhir sleep together .,. and i was like .. This is what i have missed.. i need to know what happened.. and i rushed to read...

Saffi yaa !!! forget the other chapters that i have used this dialogue for

"This is the best chapter ever" .. honestly ..14 and 15

i mean it is sooo real !!!

i mean i can totally relate to it yaa.. it is just incredible

i like how you have portrayed Sanyu's character.. she is thinking about Randhir for a change.. she is thinking about her love.. about herself for change.. and not her family.. like she does on the show .. and this is one reason i just wanna give you a round of applause..truly !! i really wanted to see her like this .. wanting to giver her love a chance.. and here randhir being the mature one... like on the show he is so aggressive and careless.. here i adore this side of him !!

i would also like to appreciate what parth has been doing for Sanyu !

him keeping his calm through all this is simply remarkable ...

i was reading.. and the part na where Sanyu calls Randhir up to meet her.. i just sat up !! OMG .. the way the FF took off from there shit ... it was amazing !!

their conversation.. her wanting more of him,,.himm wanting more of her but not showing it.. just perfect..

how she dressed up for him yaa !! <3333333 i can so relate .. i don't know how to explain..i was just smiling throughout the whole thing.. her mannerisms ,.. her dialogues.. just perfect !!! She totally stole the show .. even though she is wrong when she ditches parth and feels like she should be with randhir.. i still support Sanyu..and that is hats off to you and your writing which has made me favor something that is morally incorrect !!!!

i loved how he laced his fingers with hers while coming out of the restaurant.. i can imagine what Sanyu must be feeling..

and the parking lot scene.. the dialogues.. what she told Randhir .. impeccably written.. Sanyu acting immature.. yes ! but then after spending that night with Randhir .. her love has resurfaced .. like how they were in college .. she is bound to act like that.. like a college romantic has been reawakened in her if you get what i mean ..

and when randhir asked a room for two.. i was like EEEKSSS

and their convo in the room.. Sanyu just hell bent on having him and Randhir trying to make her understand .. awww

but eventually fails !!

and the way he lifts her and places her on his lap..i am just going to faint !

SO SAFFI !!!!!

UPDATEEE ~!!!!!!!!!!

i honestly love you for this chapter yaaa... i saved it for the perfect time to read ... i still cant get my mind off it !!!

i think this comment is longer than my usual FF updates also,,, LOL

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Samarpita

@SamC

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Posted: 10 years ago

#243

Saffi the story is just so beautifully going!!
Oh my god now this is so full of conflicts.. The best part is no one is wrong.. Nd abt prediction i dont know whom to support Randhir or Parth!!

Imma just loving it a lot.. Read all 4 parts in a go! Its was bliss!!
Love you!!

Lots of love,
Sam!

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peacenfun

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Posted: 10 years ago

#244

awsum updt

thnx 4 d spoilers

all d bst 4 ur xams

tkcr n updt as soon as u can

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Karishma Sewani

@AnIndianWriter

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Posted: 10 years ago

#245

OMG! The spoilers were awesome, saffi! Loved the new twists! I am very excited for the next chapter! Continue pretty soon,
Love,
Karishma. <3 :*

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anuja78

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Posted: 10 years ago

#246

I think wedding se pehle pata chal jayega ki test report parth aur vidushi ne milkar badle the... 😉

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CaramelCritters

@CaramelCritters

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Posted: 10 years ago

#247

complicated relationship...mera dimag kuch kam nahi kar raha hai... but shraddha don't want to talk to randhir it's heart wrenching... & arghhh this parth😡...i just can't stand this saint like behavior... & vidushi's appearance...ufff kuch samajh nahi araha hai... i just want my sandhir together & shraddha forgiving randhir...