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Posted: 11 years ago
Friends are so great. It was so touching to see Ana noticing Khushi's sullen mood behind that smiling mask. Friends see through a lot of things. And how Ana let her go for a while. It just put a smile on my face.
The conversation that followed was heart breaking. It wasn't easy for any of them. They both were pushing each other to give up. Khushi wanted Arnav to give up his attitude of hiding, not speaking & Arnav wanted Khushi to give up her push to open up. They were hurting and they hurt each other. But giving up isn't that easy, is it?
The moment between Aman & Arnav was sweet too. Typically guys type. I always wondered if Aman will ever verbally let Arnav know that he always feared his reaction regarding Ana & him being together. I'm glad that he did.
I must say I was expecting Khushi to not fly without talking to Arnav. In my heart I expected her to talk to him. have to tell you this whole airport part reminded me of the airport episode in show. I'm glad here you fulfilled my expectations of Khushi not leaving. (Yeah I had hoped about that in the show too, but MAMR If I had been privy to spoilers at that time it would have hurt less, chalo chhoddo...)
From the time Arnav was looking for her at the beach and dialing her number I was thinking he should check in his suite.
I loved the outburst, their minds clearing up and deciding they won't give up ever.
Arnav trying to talk and lighten the situation with Garima showed that he may be confused but he doesn't want to hurt anyone. It will take time but hopefully they will get to know each other better. It's not a easy situation to be in.
Right now I'm wondering what Arnav had talked with Anjali. Has he told her the truth or is it completely different. You've kept that completely in wraps. I'm waiting for you to unveil.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sorry I could not read it earlier ...once again you wrote a wonderful chapter in this wonderful story...for one moment I could not breath when Arnav said we were not meant for each others...surprisingly I did not cried while reading it today,but as I said I could not breath and I only started to breath again when I read Arnav and garima's conversation ...because Arnav and khushi has suffer so much, may be Arnav more than khushi ...now I can breath easily at last Arnav did not let go or I would say this time khushi did not let go and Arnav held on...awesome ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing ,they are definitely made for each other, with what they have been through
and they are here now. Mind blowing update ,waiting to read more 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
Fabulous chapter
you were right in taking down the chapter.. we needed to read both parts together..
all ends well... happy for that

Garima-arnav convo was penned beautifully

so well we almost at the end of this an i feel a bit sad :(

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update as usual Sandhya!!! Loved it 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update, I got scared in the first half that arnav will do the same mistake of pushing khushi away and he would have really lost her if she didn't came at his place and chooses to be the wise among both
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Posted: 11 years ago
Such an emotional roller coaster ride...awesome update. The wait was worth it
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Posted: 11 years ago
DND emotional updates leaves me in a puddle...
This one was no different...

1. When Arnav refused to share his grief, I wanted to smash his stubborn head...that was the first thing I wanted to do if he was somewhere near me now..

2. Anya's bidai was touching...and Anya as a bride through Aman's POV was stunning...breathtaking...I loved how you described Anya...That part was really touching and lovely like Anya.."It was time for Anya, the unsure little girl, the naughty teenager, the strong willed young woman and the impressive individual to reset her priorities. She wasn't just her own person, a daughter, a sister or a friend. She was all that and more. She was a wife, a daughter-in-law and a mother someday.

3. Aman -Arnav talk was sweet and NK-Arnav talk was double cute..there was a slight awkwardness but it was nice...


4. Payal -Arnav interactions are always a pleasure once they reconciled.


5. Garima-Arnav conversation teared me up...it was excellently scripted...


6. Arnav-Khushi conversation during that Haldi...I felt it was bit prolonged and there was a slight drag - maybe because I knew he was going to hurt her with his stubborness..


7. I guess Arnav spoke whole truth to Anjali...well she has to know...she was his solid support when everyone else was against him...


8. I loved certain frames of Aliya - leg hug she gave Khushi, the way she cuddled to Shyam in sleep.



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Posted: 11 years ago

This is such a beaitiful chapter. How life changes within a blink of an eyelid. You made us go through a roller coaster of emotions with just this chapter. The joy of a wedding, the bittersweet moments of bidaai, the uncertainity and heartbreak wheb life as you know it spins out of its axis. And then the happiness. That Khushu hadn't left after all. That she stayed back. Because Arnav and Khushi are meant to be. The same way that Shashi and Garima were meant to be. Inspite of tge cruelties of this world. I wish you had written a little more on Shashi and Garima- they remind me of the song "we found love in a hopeless place".
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Posted: 11 years ago
that was a splendid update!
kudos to you for envisioning such a endearing characters inspite of all the horrible things they faced it helped them to be what they are today in a mostpoigant manner!
looking fwd to read more

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