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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: kondhili
Charu and Shailaja yeh tum dono ne kya kar diya...between the two of you, you managed to take away 5 spots from the update page 😆

I reserved from my phone, Liz.

And it was tough reserving.

So galti se mistake ho gaya.

Sowwwy! 🤗

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#102

Ok will wait - thx sandhya

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kondhili

@kondhili

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: 1chilly

I reserved from my phone, Liz.

And it was tough reserving.

So galti se mistake ho gaya.

Sowwwy! 🤗

Arrey why sorry jaaneman, chalta hain...badi badi desho main jaldi jaldi main aesa aksar ho jata hain. 😳

Waise Mujhse toh first page main spot mil gaya tha 😆

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sheena29

@sheena29

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#104

Hain??? What was this??? Where did this come from?? After an emotional, traumatic, cathartic, "sensual" night where they spoke to each other verbally and non-verbally, they reduce their love to this??? I can understand Khushi's fear of him shutting her out again, his stubbornness in keeping it all to himself, they are bound by their insecurities and characteristics. But right now I felt they both devalued their love and maybe trivialized that emotion. Khushi was needlessly insistent and he needlessly clammed up.

Edited..

Update 1 ended with harsh words and harsher actions and update 2 with promises to let their love guide them despite their frailties. They both did wrong last night and corrected their wrongs the next day and most importantly realized their wrongs which is a big step forward in building their relationship. Though love is in abundance here but the sagacity to nurture that love will come slowly and you put it across beautifully Sandhya. Like in every update where something touches my heart deeply, this time it broke for Khushi when she voiced her hurt for that one line that he had said so callously.

P.S. Second time in the story I felt bollywood calling... 😆 * I love Bollywood* . The moment he stepped into the airport, the mad dash and then the plane flying over his head, I felt Khushi waiting for him somewhere.. was just waiting for her to pop up somewhere 😃. You have truly written a blockbuster story Sandhya.. 😃

Edited by sheena29 - 11 years ago

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sman

@sman

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: AquaSandhya
Res for chap-53...

I'm sorry to have taken it down...But I think this chapter needs to be posted together...This is not about choosing sides. The chapter will come up when it is ready.

Sorry for the inconvenience folks :)

Sorry Sandhya. control nahin hua..hence I commented so much..will read tomorrow :-)

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sheena29

@sheena29

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#106

Hain again?? 😆 Had gone back to like the update as I had forgotten to do so and poof the update's gone!! Will now read it together as you intend it to be and then the questions will be answered...

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zooni

@zooni.blue

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#107

Update has been taken down!
Damn
How will I wait

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swtsam

@swtsam

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#108

take ur tym...m waiting. ..

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Lovelyday

@Lovelyday

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#109

Took down the update???? Why oh why?? I saw that it was uploaded and I was at a store . I come back home and see so many scary comments and no update ... I feel like I m standing out side a candy store .. I desperately want to eat the candy and there's a glass wall in between !!!! No fair !! No fair at all ...

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Archna

@archnahardik123

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#110

I come to find update and didn't find it. Then saw. So many people commenting about update, I was like what the what happen to update, it's vanished from the page.😆

It's ok now I found your note. Now I will read both of them together.