SwaRon FF Life Partners *note on pg 78* on 11/4/16* - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
#71
yeah first to comment...😊
nice update
but chotu sa tha
koi baat nahi
shortest is the sweetest
sharon trying to wake swayam
the way you wrote is really cute
swayam's drooling session
well written
update sooonnn
agali baar longer updates chahiye
warna spaming karungi...😉
juzzz kidding...

Edited by athi_vrushan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72
Cute update.
The way Swayam was drooling, Haaye.
U are just fabulous.
Loved it.
Par chota update not fair.
Chotu update chotu comment...
Mujhe bada update chahiye bas, warna baat mat karna.
So, please bada update...Promise
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73
Amazing update mansi..
Waking up him so nicely penned
Gng awesome..waiting to read futher more:)
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
Res
Unres

I was going to res tom bt after reading update i m doing today. See i m so fast i came 6th dis tym 😎 nt dat bad score 😉

K comming too update yeah it was short bt worthy for longer comments
Hahaha 🤣
🤣 sharan trying to wake swyam up but she lost in him n founding him cute ...n den achanak splash water on swayam 😆 first thought dat shran would stare at him n caress his hair lovingly bt tune pure romance ki band baja dali 🤣 🥺 bt i loved this splah of water too i was laughing like manic

Throwing water wala idea nt bad *my devil mind started wrking * i will definately try on u 😕

N most awaited my fav scene swayam shamelesly checking out sharan 😳
He can't get his eyes off n found her cute +hot both r equally attracted towards eachother . Its my fav in today's update

Grt job 👏 ⭐️ ⭐️

😉 i wanna throw my all jootas n chappals ...bt wait. 1 sec u will run away wid it 😭 🤢 so rotten tomatoes bhi throw kar liya so wats new ...hmm as u r my bff i will throw flowers on u, on update n u too 😃
update might look short bt its enjoyable too n im loving it!!

Chal bye
Love u my bff 🤗
Edited by nishu98 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75
Amazing.
But slightly short.
Anyways, loved every bit of the update.
Update soon. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
nice update Mansi...
tani is a saviour yr...
bt when tani asked about the pillow, I was like k ab sharon kya khegi...poor she...
bt she managed..

swayam ko uthana...my God...usne pani daal diya...haha..

what I loved the most is when swaron were admiring each other..

update soon..
thanks 4 d pm dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
short simple n sweet update , loved swayam 4 saying Sharon hot n cute n Sharon ooh!!!! good let's see next
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
mansion that was a superb update dear
loved it totally
gosh swayam was gwaking her n she to admiring him when he was sleeping
something is changing for sure
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79
it was an amazingg update mansi
the chapter was short
but i m expecting a lot more from next update
coming to the update mostly it was scene
whr tani comes to wake sharon up
i just feel tani's inquisition will make things
difficult for sharon but will bring both swayam
n sharon together
i also loved the the fact tat sharon was laughing
wen saw swayam hugging the pillow n sleeping
tat was very well penned
but the best was the last portion
both were embarased n cuden look at each other
all in all a very nice update
do update soon 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80
Firstly great update and thanks for the pm
It was really nice simple but yeah like others said short
The cover up from Tani to embarrassed swaron all was brilliant
Best part where Swayam was lost in her and Sharon too
Update soon

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