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Posted: 11 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: SWA1992

thank god, i mean u, its just a prank. I imagined rd with cane as in dr.house !!!!!!i loved this update...sooo good.



i m glad u lykd it :).. thank uh so mch for ur views.. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32


thank you 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
Hey! Priya
Really really sry, sry dear 4 late rply
busy with the exam

Read both the part now
lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely,
lovely, lovely, lovely update dear😳😳
Lovely, nicely and beautifully written👏👏
love it to the core❤️
Very well you've described the scenario👏😳
Once I thought Randhir really get Paralysed😲😲
but it wasa prank played by sanyu😆😃
Ur an amazing, fantastic writer👏
Love ur work⭐️
keep it up👍🏼
Update soon
Thanks for pm
Love
Bushra

Edited by Param_love - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: Param_love

Hey! Priya

Really really sry, sry dear 4 late rply
busy with the exam

Read both the part now
lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely,
lovely, lovely, lovely update dear😳😳
Lovely, nicely and beautifully written👏👏
love it to the core❤️
Very well you've described the scenario👏😳
Once I thought Randhir really get Paralysed😲😲
but it wasa prank played by sanyu😆😃
Ur an amazing, fantastic writer👏
Love ur work⭐️
keep it up👍🏼
Update soon
Thanks for pm
Love
Bushra



Thank uh soo much dear for ur precious opinion really it means a lot... u hv read dat is more importnt.. thank uh for reading... if ne improvemnts r required do tell me... 😊 😊
n lastly Best of luck for ur xams... 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
PART 4 A


Hearing all d questions at once askd by sanyu.. The othr 3 ppl out dere got tensed

Arman sighed n said(in a serious tone):- Captain sanyukta ,Captain Randhir, Captain Jiginesh n Captain Ankit...ahmm Well! the committee has taken deir decision! n we r bound to obey dem!
(said looking straight at deir tensed faces)

before arman cud cmplt his sentence jiggi interrupt him.

Jiggi (worriedly n mostly scared) :- dat means we r suspended???? :0 :0

Dis mere statement made d rest 3 officers out dere more tensed... dey together in a sync looked at arman frst den looked towrds Jiggi wthout blinking dere eyes...

Arman (in a same serious tone) :- Capt.Jiggi frst thng dun intrpt me nxt tym wen m talkng sumthng very serious! ( to which all d officers blinked deir eyes togthr n got more worried abt d upcmng bad news as dey assumed d bad nly)

Arman (cntinued) :- n d secnd thing is... d committee has decided that ...(aftr a long pause.. he looked at evrybdy den he smiled) dat we all will get a Second Chance! :D
sayin dis he gave his charming smile... *_*
All d three togethr said :- phew...!!
n were tooo much happy...
jiggi(praying) :- babaji thank uh!
Randhir (annoyed n said to himslf ) :- today is not my day! all r making me tensed lyk hell.. 1st dis farzi (looking at sanyu) n now arman sir (lookng at arman)..
Sanyu (happily) :- thank uh sir for talkng to dem.. I knw its uh nly who made dem realise wat we did tody ws not wrng! thank uh sir... u r d best! (said lyk a baby who thanks his fathr wen he gets dem deir fav choclate)
Ankit was happy too much.. n aftr hearing sanyu saying d abv written thing he cudnt control himslf n out of excitement came forwrd n huggd Armaan!!
The othr ppl out dere got shockd.. n thought now Ankit is gone!
but to deir more shock Arman hugged him back happily with a broad smile.. seeing dis sanyu n jiggi also went to side hug him...
Seeing sanyu in Armaan's arm Randhir's smile vanished in a secnd.. n he felt unusual anger inside him dat he alwys felt wenever ne one touchd sanyu! Randhir's feeling cud be seen on his face..
Randhir(to himslf in a annoyed tone):- dis farzi doesnt hv ne manner also.. see how Shamelessly c is hugging our senior officer! huh!
n sumone surely noticed it n smirked n thought to himslf ( love is going to be in air soon)
yes it was none other den Armaan! :p

soon d group hug got a brk wen out of nowhr... a lady of near about deir age entered d room! on seeing Randhir she cried n shouted :- Randhir!!!!!!!!!!

Evryone was shockd!!!!! evryone was looking at her!

The lady ran towrds Randhir... n hugged him tightly... n now was cryng bitterly !!!
Randhir smiled n hugged her back closing his eyes n soothing her back!
Evry one was lookng at dem wth a "huge question mark " type expression.. whereas jiggi was smiling lookng at d duo bfr him...

Now it was Sanyu's turn to get jealous.. she was furious n curious at d same tym .. ;p
Sanyu (annoyed n thought) :- How dare c hugged him lyk dat!!!! who d hell is she!! (Den looking towrds Randhir n thought) n see dat sadu how shamelssly he is hugging her back bfr us! huh! he doesnt hv dis much manners also dat his senior is also prsnt here! But d question is WHO IS SHE?? WHAT RELATION DOES C HAVE WTH MY SADU??? :'(
Her chain of questions got a brk when c heard d lady sayin to Randhir in a broken voice ...
lady (still sobbing n in a broken voice):- Baby! u ok???? u knw i was so scared wen jiggi infrmd me dat u got shot!!!! i cudnt cntrol myslf n took d first flight to mumbai n came to see uh... how r u my baby??? is it paining tooo much???
(said cupping Randhir's face..)
lady (cntinued) :- dun wrry sweetheart now m here na! nothng will happen to uh.. sayin so she kissed his forehead den his both cheeks...!!

on d othr side sumone's heart was cryng!!!! It was Sanyu whose heart was broken earlier only wen d lady called randhir BABY... now Sanyu was sure dis lady has sum spcl relation wth Randhir.. n her heart brain stopped c cudn't hear nethng more... c was standing dere was just watchng evrythng happng bfr her... d lady kissing her sadu was enough for her eyes to get moist.. She was felling helpless..
Sanyu (to hrslf):- Randhir had a gf n he nvr told me??? (feeling defeated) but y is dis even bothering me??? (questioned herslf) y does it matters also??? He was alwys an enemy for me n nothng more den it.. den Why?? Why??? Why??? is it bothrng me?? ( her thought wr interrupted by randhir's voice)
she looked towrds randhir who was now had tears in hus eyes which clearly showd how much he luvd dat lady.. dis thought md sanyu more helpless...

Randhir (cupping d lady's face) :- Sorry Jaan ! for mkng u sooo much worried!! (said making a puppy face)
d lady smiled at his expression..
Then Randhir kissed Her forehead..

Sanyu cudnt stand dere nemore.. she felt her heart paining badly.. n d worst resn was c dint knew d resn.. C quitely left d room n went away frm dere...

Meanwhile Randhir saw Sanyu leavng d room n he cud make out dat Sanyu was not happy n suddenly c became sad.. bt Randhir had no idea abt wat hpnd to her... n also ryt now he didnt wnted to thnk abt sanyu.. as his all attention was required by d beautiful lady sitting wth him n sobbing holdng his hand...

to be cntinued...

thank uh so much my guys who appreciated my work... :') it really means alot.. its my frst fiction evr.. gettng ur supprt means evrythng to me.. thank u so mch evryone who took out tym to cmnt n lyk n encouraged my work.. thank uh so much to all my silent readers who took out tym to read my stry... :')
its a kind request to evry silent readerss plzz share ur views also.. ur simple cmnt cn tell weathr m goin on a right track regardng d stry or not... plz do let me knw ur views... thank u :)

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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
Awesome...loved it...
read till part 4A in a go...
plzz pm me plz plz...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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yaar pls tell me yeh beautiful 'jaan' rd's sister hain kya??? oh god, pehle se hi ithni tension main hoon sadda haq promo dekhkar ab tu bhi meri bp badathe... kya yaar tum sab aisa kyu ho???? ha ha anyways it was an awesome update dear...really loved it...especially the the jealousy session... eagerly waiting for next update...pls update asap dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
RES😳
UNRES

Hey! Priya
Lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely,
lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely,
lovely, lovely update dear😳😳
Lovely, nicely and beautifully written👏👏
love it to the core❤️


Very well you've described the scenario⭐️⭐️
Gang's restlessness was awesomely described👏🤣
Armaan is a cute officer😊
Awww Jealous Randhir...😆
Jaan may b his frnd or sis😕
Sanyukta hell jealous😉🤣

Keep it up
Update soon
Eagerly waiting
Thanks for pm
Love
Bushra
Edited by Param_love - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: MeherS

Awesome...loved it...
read till part 4A in a go...
plzz pm me plz plz...



thank uh so much... :')
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: archakan

yaar pls tell me yeh beautiful 'jaan' rd's sister hain kya??? oh god, pehle se hi ithni tension main hoon sadda haq promo dekhkar ab tu bhi meri bp badathe... kya yaar tum sab aisa kyu ho???? ha ha anyways it was an awesome update dear...really loved it...especially the the jealousy session... eagerly waiting for next update...pls update asap dear...



heheheh 😛 .. fr my stry plz wait till tom i will update it! 😊
n for Sadda Haq lets wait till friday.. its really freakng scary.. hope randhir doesnt go backbto his devdas modd again 😭

btwn thank uh soo mch for ur precious cmnt... 😃

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