Sandhir FF : Falling In Love With You (Part 14 Updated Page 58) - Page 14

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Posted: 11 years ago
Read all the parts in one go... awesome story... Beautifully penned... loved it. It's a perfect blend of drama, romance, thrill and mystery...
P.S. I hv send u the buddy request plzz PM me whenever u update...
Edited by TheKanwalKaur - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey really sorry for late comment lil busy u know and awesome update atlast sab clear up ho gaye and now i'm thinnk randhir will b happy s well as guilty plz jaldi update karo cant wait to read
love - andy :-)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SanDhiraddict


</div>Found this today and read all at once.
<div>You are brave dear...its your first effort at writing and that too an ff and not only that you are dealing with mystery-romance-drama-action all at once. Kudos.

Loved the way you are plotting the story and placing it. I'll be glad if you write in normal English rather than sms English...it will connect me more to the story. But its ok if you continue the way it is...after all what matters most is story and you are awesome at that.

I hope to get the next part soon. Please PM me when you update.



thank uh so much for precious reviews.. 😊
n i assure u to escape sms language as much as i can.. u r ryt i should write in a normal english... thank u so mch for the suggestion.. n i will update soon 😊 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: TheKanwalKaur

Read all the parts in one go... awesome story... Beautifully penned... loved it. It's a perfect blend of drama, romance, thrill and mystery...
P.S. I hv send u the buddy request plzz PM me whenever u update...



thank uh soo much dear for lykng my story... m glad dat u lykd it.. 😊
will update soon... 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: andy1245

hey really sorry for late comment lil busy u know and awesome update atlast sab clear up ho gaye and now i'm thinnk randhir will b happy s well as guilty plz jaldi update karo cant wait to read
love - andy :-)



i was waiting for ur cmnt... thank god u dint forget atleast.. thank uh soo mch dear for ur cntinous support 😊 😊 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
PART 7

After the truth was revealed by sanyu, Randhir was shocked at first place! He was listening to her silently like an innocent child who was getting scold from his mother!

Sanyu (still angry n with tears in eyes continued) :- U know what Randhir? Till now i was regretting that i was not there with you in the hospital when i was supposed to be there.. But, now u know what?? I don't regret it anymore!
Because a guy like u don't deserve LOVE at all...
For a Moment I thought u have changed! But u see Once a MCP is always a MCP!!!
You thought i need Armaan's help thats why i am having an affair wth him ??? (now she was holding his coller with anger n her eyes conveyed how much she was hurt )
How could you??? huh???
How can you think me so cheap Randhir? (now her sobs increased n her hold on his collar loosened)
Arman is my cousin! n nobody know about it! you know why??
Because i didnt wanted any kind of unnecessary attention due to his position!
But you cheap Head!!

Meanwhile Randhir was standing there just listening to her.. His eyes were also filled with tears by now..
He just wanted to hug her and tell her whatever he said was just his frustration and he can never think like that about her..
He moved towards her to hug her.. But Sanyu took a step back and
said (pointing finger towards him):- Don't even u dare to touch me! you have crossed ur limit today Randhir. Now onwards i will make sure Captain Randhir Singh Sekhawat That we don't come across each other! Because i don't want to see your face ever in my life...

Saying so she left from there.. Randhir was watching her go ... He asked her to stop.. Then he Ran after her but he was late sanyu had already left in her Car...

Randhir was feeling very guilty.. He was cursing himself for talking so cheap about her and hurting her like that..
Randhir(annoyed with his own deeds, talking to himslef):- Farzi is right ! you are jerk! How could you say such things about her! Don't you Remember how hard she worked to reach here.. (now he was remembering about their training days )

FLASHBACK: AT NATIONAL DEFENCE ACADEMY

Incidence 1(First Year) :-

All the cadets of Sandhir's batch were assembled on the field where they were supposed to improve n practise their shooting skills by using AK 47.. It was not their first time .. They had already done that earlier also but they used revolvers den and this time it was AK47.. All the cadets were doing great job! But Sanyu Failed to do so! Somehow sanyu missed to hold the gun properly on her shoulder as a reasult due to improper balance her shoulder got dislocated !!
She shouted in pain! N she was taken to medical room where doc treated her n asked her to rest properly..
But that day Her confidence went down.. as their senior incharge of the training scolded her very badly!
He said Girls can't do this jobs then why they join army??? can't they simply sit at their respective homes! Not only her senior Randhir also commented that Army Is Not Her Cup Of a Tea!!!!
She felt very low but she gained back her Focus n she decided c will do it at any cost as her mission to join army is much more important den these injuries n dese MCP(s) around her!
Then aftr two days when her shoulder had juat recovered she started practising shooting with different kind of guns day n night wenever she got free time...
N she did it .. Infact she won The title of best Shooter during a competition held within the Academy!

AT PRESENT

Randhir still thinking about the past incident exclaimed proudly "Farzi has always been a fighter n hard working officer"
He was still cursing himself for saying such things to her..
Finally he came out of his "cursing himself" session n decided :- I wont let my Farzi stay away from me any more.. I miss her.. i have been missing our tom n jerry fights a lot.. But not anymore..Farzi m comming to make uh forgive me! N i will assure u that you see my face everytime even if u don't want!!!
(thought with a smirk)

Saying so randhir drove his car... N stopped before Sanyu's quarter..

Randhir(thinking):- Ok then when i have come here i will not leave her place untill unless she forgives me n talks to me normally..
but should i go inside at dis tym..?? i mean isn't it too late to go somebody's place??? ( asked d saint randhir inside him)
You know what just chuck it Randhir.. you r not the same randhir anymore who never used to think twice before doing anythng when it concerned Your Farzi!! (said the devil randhir inside him n den cntinued) Don't think much just go inside she needs you.. you know na how senti she becomes sometime.. i am sure she must be crying badly now.. go inside u can't wait till tommorrow!!!!

Randhir finally decided to go inside.. He stood outside the quarter! N rang the door bell!! but c didn't open!!!
he rang again n again but she didn't open.. It made randhir more restless n worried.. he was hell tensed now.. He called her but it came switched off.. then he called on landline no. but it was continously ringing n she didn't responded!!! Infact he cud hear the landline ring from outside also... He was hell tensed now .. he was getting worst ideas about her..
Finally he decided to enter her bedroom through balcony.. Her flat was on second floor.. Randhir climbed from the pipe.. n sumhow managed to reach her balcony! the balcony was attached to her bedroom n he knew it as he came there many times during special occasions..

Randhir reached there n Got A Shock Of His Life!! He stood at his place n was lookng inside the room!!!

to be continued...

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I know u guys will kill me for ending the part here even aftr updating aftr 1 day long... but guys thoda to susense banta h na... :p
But dun worry guys i will update d next part by night only.. :) as i cant see my readers wait tooo much... :')
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Edited by priya2701 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wat a cliff hanger...
Plz update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update...
soo beautifuly narrated...
is sanyu in trouble????
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Posted: 11 years ago
again an awesome update plzzz dear next part aaj hi ;-):-)
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Posted: 11 years ago
😲 y?? y?? y?? Did u leave a cliffhanger 😭

But i jus loved it ...

If possible pls. make it longer ...

And update soon please please please ...

Pretty please ... 😳

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