Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS #2 OS 7 Link to #3 in Pg 1

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Varsha Dutt

@varsha2KD

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Posted: 11 years ago

#501

whoa... lovely updates...

Arnav told the whole truth and Khushi is still with him...

can't wait for the next updates 😊

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siamesecat

@siamesecat

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Posted: 11 years ago

#502

Arnav explained in simple short sentences. Well written.

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surrazdan

@surrazdan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#503

wow... i am speechless...

i love this arnav.. wow..

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MDTharun

@MDTharun

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#504

Arnav has told his past and the reason for his aloofness to khushi . We can force a person to marry but we cannot make them live on our terms . Here khushi was patient and waiting for her husband to open up to her . With Arnav's revelation about forced marriage and his changed opinion about marriage after khushi's entry , the misunderstanding has been cleared . This is one of your best creations on arranged / forced marriage .

Well written Smitar

loved it

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-Roshini-

@-Roshini-

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#505

Aww lovely updates
waiting for more

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incarnadine

@incarnadine

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Posted: 11 years ago

#506

Awesome parts Smita!

Thankfully, the misunderstandings have been cleared now. I applaud Arnav for maintaining and bringing so much balance in their married life. He's flawed but has his brains in the right place. Not getting close to Khushi when she didn't know the truth is something really worthy of applause.

But if Khushi didn't eavesdrop on the Nani-Mami-Di conversation, how would have Arnav dealt with this? Would he still be distant from her?

So I'm glad that Khushi heard what she did, for it pushed Arnav to confide in her about everything. Loved their conversation.

I love Arnav.

Loved it! Looking forward to the next update! Coorg time 😛

Thanks for the email Rashmi! :) x