MB FF : On the Quest || Pg. 144 - Ch.50 & Note || - Page 91

Next seven read! What an entry by the bad guys, I thought it was the Atlantis boys. Bheem is so nice and I'm glad vasusen and vrushali will finally marry though he does need to sort out his relationship with his mom. It's interesting how you twisted the characters slightly and I got your k3g reference. Too bad the bad guys probably won't stay in the hall either.

lovely chap di, truely emotional 😭

what an update...
Panchi and Uloopi still at it...why cant uloopi leave Panchi alone?!
And a rift between brothers...sad
Loved your well laid out arguments from Panchi when she talks to Paarth
I guess he will have to come up with some good answers to win her back!

Originally posted by: ...Hemangi

That was full of an emotional update...

Relationships took a wrong turn here... be it Vasusen-Paarth's bro relationship or Paarth-Panchi's love relationship 😭

Update ur next part soon 😊

Thanks a lot Hemangi.😊 I guess I am quite late to update but will update tomorrow.😳

Originally posted by: Sonatia

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awesome updt.i hope after dat a
Kaju bromance vil com!

Thanks dear😃

Originally posted by: Maverick_me

Beautifully written Angela , liked your ff 😊

Thank you😳

Originally posted by: AryaDrayCoByrne

Hello,

So I decided finally to start reading your story chronologically from the beginning. 7 chapters down so far but definitely intrigued by this quest. Each of the characters seem really interesting and I am loving the incorporation of gadgets. I am also thinking that if I read seven chapters a day I should be able to catch up within a week. I hope you don't mind me being late but I'm going to try my best and then I can finally understand the story.

I have one question though and as I have little knowledge of epithets and other names for the characters of MB I was going to ask if vasusen was karna. I mean he is with vrushali so I guess it is him. am I right? 😳

Next my favourite line from the seven chapters I have read so far is:

"Why are you holding that big book in you hand bahiya?", asked Yudhishtir. "Good! Now you take this book and find out the meaning of the word 'privacy' from it. If you are able to find the meaning, do whatever you want to but don't you dare knock on this door again",

I also do not understand why paarth left the scroll like that - ready for anyone to steal and why the door was open so that he could get into the house between the dense trees. of course I found out in the next update that is was just a dream 😆

the only thing I found difficult to follow and I hope you don't mind is the dialogue. sometimes I have to read it twice to figure out who is saying what as they are incorporated into the same paragraph but that is easily worked out.

will read the next seven tomorrow hopefully and return with more detailed comments.

I don't have a favourite character so far but I like the personalities that all the characters do have. 😊

Yes dear Vasusen is Karna. And hopefully you'all like my FF.

Originally posted by: Radhikerani

Aww, So Ulupi And Panchi Are Confronting Each Other ! And The Family Split Up !! Hope This Sorts Out Soon !!

Thanks dear.😳

Finally, I am able to post here!

Originally posted by: sania_58

nice update Angela.

Thank you.😊