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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Yagyaseni

I will take that as a compliment.Then my 'Leadership Course' can go wherever it wants to, at this point!! I say being won ' the Best Leader' three times consecutively, that after being in a position where you make the rules and you don't have to do anything, even a minute mistake become magnified! As simple as leaving your hair open after physically taxing job, was told to the Head, that Yagya is setting up a wrong example for us!! Not Being a ruthless kin as I have proven just now, is equal to being unjust!! Did discriminate people on the basis of the caste? No. Why? Take the example of Karna! And Bhishma, every single version of Mahabharat, points out that he was one of the main reasons of Mahabharat! He knew Dharm but chose to limit it! Underestimated it would have been a right word! And to say that Dhritrashatra was not a good king, for he always put his family's safety ahead of his people's safety, breaking the Dharma of Kind according to Manu Samhita! DId Duryodhan make the rules of Dyut Sabha! I believe it was the elders who did that! Was really asking for his fathers right so wrong? I believe not! He chose the wrong way, infact the very wrong one, but the fact remains, he misunderstood the whole thing! No person is perfect, nor me, nor you, nor Arjun, nor Draupadi, nor Krishna nor Duryodhan!! And promoting a wrong message, definitely doesn't make you unjust! I used punishments several times, but when it was required, but others may interpret it as misuse of power or they can take it as fulfilling responsibility! People may do wrong things but it is upto us if we take a lesson from it or take it as an encouragement!!It was proper guidance that he lacked, as he had a blind father and voluntarily blinded mother! And this again says, why Bhishma stopped Dhrit from being the king! When a blind father couldn't stop the misguidance his son was getting, how would he deal with a whole society when he was blind! People don't see the ends, Angela they see means sometimes! A good deed with a wrong means, can destroy its essence, as you can see in Pandavs case! If they didn't do Adharm in Kuruksetra, I would definitely got less points to support Duryodhan today!!

See dear, what you said about being chosen as the 'Best Leader' and the consequences - that was the way they represented your action. You opened your hair. There was nothing wrong in that. But! They way they (whoever they were) presented your action, it was looked as a wrong action. Just like some people say that Duryodhan was wrong to use the rules. But he was not! Right. He broke no rule but he used the rules in a way which they benefitted him. Mso his means were not wrong. Hence blaming the means makes no sense. So even if people see means first rather than the complete action in this case, it makes no sense entirely. And in my FF too you should better look at the end because everyone knows what will happen but the ending of this track is still under the sheets of fog. Then I never said Duryodhan discriminated on the basis of Cates for creed. In fact I consider him better than Pandavs in this case. As of you said that promoting a wrong message in the society doesn't make you unjust, why doesn't it! It does make you unjust. Because you support the wrong with will lead to injustice. Right or not? All of them who were present in Dyut Sabha were unjust. Why? Because they never spoke against never spoke against the injustice Draupadi had to go through. So they were unjust because they never spoke out in favour justice and promoted a wrong message. And Dharma can never be bound to some text or Many Samhita. Because Krishna himself said that Dharma changes with time a d is different in every situation. So how can you decide that someone was just or unjust on the basis that he followed Manu Samhita's laws. Though I agree here that Dhritrashtra was unjust. Like I said a good administrator can be unjust. Dhritrashtra was unjust when he put his family ahead his subjects but he was a good administrator. Punishment and revenge are to faces of the same coin. Some may call punishment revenge but it cannot be called wrong. In EHT too they call punishment revenge. They showed revenge as a form of punishment. Just like I am presenting in my FF. And I do completely agree that Pandavs were no followers of Dharma, wholly. Because whatever great deeds Yudhishtir did in his life, he will always be called faulty for his silence in Dyut Sabha and his wrong decisions he made in Dyut Sabha will always be criticised and the same rests for the other four.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update Angie 👏
Truly speaking... I m stunned reading this part.
Panchi cleverly persuades Shakuni & Duryodhan to stake their belongings...& the stakes are rolling exactly as it did in Dwapar Yuga but here the opponent is in the lossing stand.

& now the big question will Duryodhan stake his brother & Will Shakuni able to win back the stakes he had lost earlier ??

Hats Off to u Angie for bringing this amaxing chappy... very well done 👍🏼 M sure the next two parts of this chappy will be ming blowing 😉
Will be waiting for your update tonight 😛

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Posted: 10 years ago
Sorry Angiee! I don't have internet abhi and even my mobile data isn't working properly! I have to write a lot! But in sometime pakka!
So reserved till then!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome concept Angela 👏 but will you tell me one thing, how is Panchi so confident about her numbers? Just asking out of curiosity 😊
I loved how Shakuni is feeling fear 😡 karmaphal 👍🏼 will Panchi not feel soothed to think that same pain Shakuni gave to her Yudhi, now she is taking revenge on behalf of her lord of previous birth 😊 & Yudhi must feel compassion even to these enemies, he is Ajaatshatru na now interested to see which brother will come as stake, Dushi the great? 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: LiveYourDream

Wow looks like a great debate going on here...have enjoyed reading it.

Great update Angela
So Panchi has set her plan in motion and Shakuni is feeling the heat...
curious to read how this culminates...obviously we cannot have another VH😆
Looking forward to the next installment

Thanks a lot dear. Oh yes. I love to debate.😆 I have planned something different for the finale, hope that you'll like it.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Hemangi

Awesome update Angie 👏
Truly speaking... I m stunned reading this part.
Panchi cleverly persuades Shakuni & Duryodhan to stake their belongings...& the stakes are rolling exactly as it did in Dwapar Yuga but here the opponent is in the lossing stand.

& now the big question will Duryodhan stake his brother & Will Shakuni able to win back the stakes he had lost earlier ??

Hats Off to u Angie for bringing this amaxing chappy... very well done 👍🏼 M sure the next two parts of this chappy will be ming blowing 😉
Will be waiting for your update tonight 😛

Thanks a lot lot lot lot dear ... 😃 I cannot promise anything but will surely try to give you my best in the upcoming updates.😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: 8520NK

Sorry Angiee! I don't have internet abhi and even my mobile data isn't working properly! I have to write a lot! But in sometime pakka!

So reserved till then!

No problem dear. Will be waiting for your reply eagerly.😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Urmila11

Awesome concept Angela 👏 but will you tell me one thing, how is Panchi so confident about her numbers? Just asking out of curiosity 😊
I loved how Shakuni is feeling fear 😡 karmaphal 👍🏼 will Panchi not feel soothed to think that same pain Shakuni gave to her Yudhi, now she is taking revenge on behalf of her lord of previous birth 😊 & Yudhi must feel compassion even to these enemies, he is Ajaatshatru na now interested to see which brother will come as stake, Dushi the great? 😉

Thanks Urmila! 😊 You will come to know that how is Panchi so confident about her number, very soon. 😉 You will soon co e to know all the intentions Pancho has by implementing this revenge idea. I hope you will enjoy the upcoming updates a lot. 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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CHAPTER 39
HISTORY REPEATS ITSELF : PART VI



"Have you gone nuts, Panchi!" shouted Yudhishtir. Panchi's sight turned into that direction instantly. So you finally spoke up! - thought Panchi. "No. I have not not gone nuts. This is a game. And there are rules to be followed. I did stay the first rule loudly, I guess. Why then this question?" She asked him. "Relations and people are not some thing which can be put on stake. How can you even think of something like that?" he asked her. "You obviously! I know that." she answered him ferociously. "So then, why? Do you even know the what great courage one needs to do that. I breaks your and the persons heart together." he explained her.

"And you have that courage. Right?" she asked him, looking straight into his eyes. Panchi's words cumulated into a tear out of Yudhishtir's eyes. "I... I... This is the rule of the game. He has all right to bet him of he wants to!" he said and backed out of the conversation. 'I know. How it feels! I know that. God forgive me for that.' - Panchi's thoughts apologised.

"So. Anyways... What did you decide, Duryodhan?" she asked him as she wiped a little tear with was peeping out of her eyes. "I will bet my brother. I bet Dushshasan." he told shamelessly. Shameless as ever! - Panchi thought. "Great then!" she said as she stood up from her chair. She went down the stage. "Oh. So you back out! Great. You invited us to play and you back out great Panchi! Kudos to you!" Duryodhan said with his claps echoing in the pin-drop silence of the hall.

Panchi stopped when she passed ahead Dhrishtradyumna. "Bhai..." she said affectionately. She turned to face him. With tears in her eyes and her lips weak to speak even a word, she asked him. "Never, I thought in my life I would ask you but, do I have any right to put you on stake?". "Panchi!..." he answered her. "... When did you lose right on me? I am always ready to help you when you need. You don't have to bet me." he said to her. Panchi was confused. "What do you mean, bhai?" she asked.

"I bet myself on behalf of Panchi!" roared Dhrishtradyumna.

A tear escaped her eyes. "I am heavenly bless to have a brother like you!" she told him. She turned back and walked up to the stage. "Choose your number." she told Shakuni loudly. "I choose 24." he said confidently. "I choose 12." she roared. "Spin it!". Shakuni was sure of his victory this time. The fear of losing his brother which was clearly visible on Panchi's face was confirming his victory.

"It is number... 12!" the controller announced.

Panchi's eyes set ablaze. Her soul was cooled but her eyes were blazing with the fire. "I win." she said with confidence. "You ... What!" Shakuni looked with his eyes popping out. "You ... What!" he could not believed his ears. "I win!" she said it louder than the last time. "Bet next, Duryodhan!" she said confidently. "I bet Bhanumati!" Duryodhan said loudly.

"Have you officially lost it, Duryodhan!" shouted Bhanumati from behind. "Oh Shut up!" Duryodhan replied carelessly. "I am no big idiot like Dushshasan who would see you bet him without and problem. You have no right to bet me." she told him. "Oh. Please! Will you please shut that duck-mouth up!" he told her.

Bhanumati went up on the stage. "Stand up. Stand up Duryodhan." she shouted. He stood up to face her. With her eyes burning in anger, she slapped him tight enough to print her fingers on his cheeks. "You think of me to be some object which you can stake in your stupid game. Well, you know what! I am not one!" she told him looking straight into his eyes. "You go and born in hell or dance on the road. I don't just give a damn about your stupid game." saying that Bhanumati turned and walked down the level. But her steps didn't stop there. She proceeded ahead and left the hall.

'You have no idea Bhanumati how grateful I am to you. I will probably thank you for life to open his eyes.' - Panchi applauded Bhanumati's deeds in thoughts.

"So Duryodhan. Who now?" she asked him.

"I bet myself." Duryodhan replied to her with out any hesitation.



TBC
Hope you liked it. We are reaching the finale now. Get ready for tomorrow.
Edited by Angela_Grokes - 10 years ago

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