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Posted: 10 years ago
Arre Angela finally update kiya!
Awesome it was! Loved it! Everything was amazing. Even I hope that Panchi is able to control everything and I know she will!
I am really starting to hate Bhanumati with every passing update🤢🤢
What is the Iravan-Ulupi mystery? Jaldiii kholo!😃
Edited by 8520NK - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome Update, Angela!! Loved it!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Angela it was great!!!...U r creating suspense day by day!!šŸ˜›
Bhanumati!!!!😔🤢
Whats up with this Uloopi and Iravan!!!😲
Intersting...continue soon dear!!!😃
Edited by Sanjana_JA - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update Angie 😊
The mention of mythical bird Phoenix reminded me of many stories I read related to it. The grp in Japan has to give many tough tests. They will defo.. passed out all the tests 😊
Oh.. so now there is tensed situation between the fantastics. Dhri giving warnings to others 😲
Shakuni & Bhanu... planning to divide them & rule
Now what treasure Uloopi & Iravan holding on to. šŸ˜•
Will be waiting for ur next update tmrw as u promised šŸ˜›

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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice thinking, Angela šŸ‘ I loved Panchi's compassion to a dying creature 😊 but some mysteries are still not clear šŸ˜• what does Ulupi want to do actually?
Edited by Urmila11 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
What a super fabulous chapter Angela!!šŸ‘
loved the action and the description of Panchi and the Phoenix!!
Dhris is such a good brother šŸ‘
And what is Uloopi upto?
Glad we are going to get daily updates
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Posted: 10 years ago
This is awesome.
But two could have tamed the fire- one Panchi and the other is ... Parth?
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Posted: 10 years ago
CHAPTER 34 : TIED IN A MAZE

"Finally" exclaimed Shubhi. "Which way should we take?" Paarth asked, perplexed. "Govind" Panchi looked at Govind, desperately. "We should think of what the mirror told. It said that the truth is hidden in the power to destroy. Maybe if we destroy our group, I mean if we diverge in to individuals and each one of us takes one of these four entrances into the maze, maybe this is what it meant." Govind answered. "Bhai how can you be that sure?" Shubhi asked. " I guess Govind is right, Shubhi. If we all take a separate path into this maze, it would probably take less time to get out of it." Panchi'a words rose in agreement with Govind's. Finally they diverged to enter the maze through four separate paths.


"What happened?" Bhanumati asked in shock. "I don't just get it! It is like their chips died out. I cannot trace their way!" Shakuni told in great fear. "You mean..." Bhanumati's eyes popped out. "Yes! We have no idea about their wandering!" confirmed Shakuni. "Great! Both of them are great idiot. Duryodhan is mad and Dushasan, brainless. So we are sure to lose the disc to them." Bhanumati banged her head on the wall. "Wait a second, demoness! Let me see if i can do something!" Shakuni made a last try. "We need to trace them anyhow! We cannot leave those idiot on themselves. Try! Try! Try!" Bhanumati said madly. "If we loose them, we will surely be doomed for eternity! Trace them anyhow!" she added. Shakuni adjusted the hardware a bit and tackles a little with system settings. "No use bhanumati! he cried. "We lost them!" he added to his wails.


"Crystal ball, ready! We need the perfect sunray to free the terror of the hell!" Iravan smirked. "Wait for a second, Iravan. Think again. Are we doing good? What if they betray is?" Ulupi asked in great fear. Iravan picked up one of the crystal balls from their diamond casement and said, "The terror? They won't! They will betray anyone but Iravan! Because, I saved them from the ultimate destruction. The spirits of these terrors are since then, indebt to me till the end of time!". Iravan said with such confidence that Ulupi was impressed by his words, she said,"It doesn't take time to forget debts, Iravan! And if, it happens our life will be in great danger!" Iravan gave a sharp look at her and said,"I have said earlier too but I repeat - Earth for other, victory for me!".


"I cannot trace them anymore!" Vrushali said, worriedly. "What?" Vasusen exclaimed. "Yes! I mean a mintue ago I could! But suddenly, all gone!" She said in great despair. "How is it possible?" Dhrishtrayumna said in shock. "Do something!" Bheem cried. "I have tried my best. No result. I am left clueless about anything! I just wish everything's fine!" Vrushali prayed. "Vrushali bhabhi you are an expert! Try something! There will be some way out!" Yudhishtir pleaded. "Yudhishtir, I am helpless. Things ran out of my hands. Now the only hope we have is the chips I secretly installed in their bags. If they aren't working, I have no way!" She said. "Then try it out, now!" Nakul said. "Let me check!" She said with a wish of great possibility. "Its there!" Vrushali shout excitedly. But as she observed the traces for a minute, all her hopes collapsed. "The chips are not showing any movement!" She said with great fear.


TBC...
Edited by Angela_Grokes - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
i will read all chappies n will unres this post!!

kasam se!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
awsome update,loved it.šŸ‘ā­ļø
this story getting interesting day by day
great going.
waiting for the next part.

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