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LiveYourDream

@LiveYourDream

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#371

Superb update...and any song from the movies of the king of romance himself are always apt.
I loved the stammering and stuttering Paarth...Panchi has him totally spell bound 😊
And Paarth showing his muscles to make the guy shut up was hilarious!

Edited by LiveYourDream - 10 years ago

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MsChanadlerBong

@MsChanadlerBong

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+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#372

Lol looks like parth is gonna be jealous everywhere where else panchali will get all the attention thanks for the pm and update soon and plz bring them together fast

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xxserenaxx

@xxserenaxx

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#373

have to read from start 😛 thanks for pm i dont have idea about this ff ... gone read all story 😃

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...Hemangi

@...Hemangi

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#374

Wow Gr8 update Angela. 😊

I liked the nok-jhok between Panchi & Paarth and also his stammering while speaking to Panchi 😆

Paarth interrupted graceful comments with his muscle comments. That was really funny 🤣

Paarth could not help but got mesmerized by Panchi's graceful moves 😳 Paarth should better pull up his socks and give a takkar wala performance to girls team otherwise do 24 hrs seva for the girls 😆

Very nice dear... post ur next part asap 😊

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Mala_TM

@Mala_TM

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#375

Awesome update!!!! Loving it!!! ❤️❤️❤️

Paarth desperate to see Panchi but after seeing her stammering while speaking was cute!!😳 😆😆

Loved Subhi the Cupid too!!❤️

Great song choice I love this song😳

The muscle comment of Paarth was seriously hilarious!!🤣

Finally at the end Paarth in his dreamland!😳😆

Just loved this update a lot!!! Update soon!!😃

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8520NK

@8520NK

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#376

I so wish there was a love button here!😳

Awesomee update there! The chemistry was sizzling😊Can't wait anymore, pleasee update soon!😃

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Angela Grokes

@Angela_Grokes

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#377

Originally posted by: Yagyaseni
Awesome, Angela!!! Loved it!! Better be ware Paarth!!! Kyonki Panchi jo naach rahi hai!!! Aur jealousy aapki saza hai!!!

Thank You!😳 Now now now... there is a whole lot to come in the updates to arrive!☺️

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Angela Grokes

@Angela_Grokes

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#378

Originally posted by: AikaSheikh
OMG!!! What a nice update, Angela! 👏👏👏
Thank you for update it! And I'm happy for Panchi. Oh, Naughty Paarth! But he's so adorable

And for Subhi, I wish she will find someone special too 😉

Wait for the next update! The wedding of Vasu and Vrushali, rite? 😆😆

Update soon, Dear!

Thank you very much dear!!!!😃 It Awww... I am happy that you are liking PP! That is a really happyify-ing thing for me!😳

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Angela Grokes

@Angela_Grokes

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#379

Originally posted by: Sha-Ja-Fanatic
The audience could not control smiling of her grace. "what elegance! What grace.", a young man said. "And what muscles!", Paarth said to the man pointing at his muscles. ~ Bwahahahahhaha!!! This was the best part! You know the song which I suggested, now suits their scenario...Am I smelling NaBhi here? It was an awesome part! I loved it! Please continue ASAP! Thanks for the pm!

😆 I am happy that you liked that Sam!😳 Now now! NaBhi!😲 You gave me something to think upon!😳

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Angela Grokes

@Angela_Grokes

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#380

Originally posted by: AikaSheikh
Awww~ What a lovely update, Angela. I'm totally looovve it!👏👏👏
Thank you for make it fast, Dear!!!! 😉

Oh, Parth you make Fun of yourself. I cant stop laughing for him. Especially this part

With the beautiful steps and graceful works of her dress the stage was becoming enlightened. The audience could not control smiling of her grace. "what elegance! What grace.", a young man said. "And what muscles!", Paarth said to the man pointing at his muscles. The man understood that it was a warning to quieten up now.

🤣🤣🤣

I found he's jealoussy are so cuteee!!!

Waiting for the next update 😉

Was that Paarth line really that good!!!😲 Again loved you for your beautiful feedback!😳