MB FF : On the Quest || Pg. 144 - Ch.50 & Note || - Page 39

Originally posted by: mothiaai

thank u so much for d pm!!

it was just mind blowing n amazing...just outstanding..

plz cont soon..

n can u plz pm me d update??

Thanks! I am happy as long as my readers are happy!😳

Originally posted by: LiveYourDream

Superb update...and any song from the movies of the king of romance himself are always apt.
I loved the stammering and stuttering Paarth...Panchi has him totally spell bound 😊
And Paarth showing his muscles to make the guy shut up was hilarious!

Thanks! "the king of romance" leaves me spellbound so you see! 😳 I chose one of his songs!😳 Ok I seriously cannot believe that the muscle thing was that hilarious!😆

Originally posted by: Texie

Lol looks like parth is gonna be jealous everywhere where else panchali will get all the attention thanks for the pm and update soon and plz bring them together fast

Sure dear you wish will get fulfilled soon!😉 Loved your reply!😳

Originally posted by: ritzs200

have to read from start 😛 thanks for pm i dont have idea about this ff ... gone read all story 😃

Sure dear!😉 Take your time!😃

Originally posted by: hpatgiri

Wow Gr8 update Angela. 😊

I liked the nok-jhok between Panchi & Paarth and also his stammering while speaking to Panchi 😆

Paarth interrupted graceful comments with his muscle comments. That was really funny 🤣

Paarth could not help but got mesmerized by Panchi's graceful moves 😳 Paarth should better pull up his socks and give a takkar wala performance to girls team otherwise do 24 hrs seva for the girls 😆

Very nice dear... post ur next part asap 😊

Thank you darling! Well you see the seva is a much to be enjoyed thing!😆 Now was that muscle thing really that hilarious!😲

Originally posted by: Mala_TM

Awesome update!!!! Loving it!!! ❤️❤️❤️

Paarth desperate to see Panchi but after seeing her stammering while speaking was cute!!😳 😆😆

Loved Subhi the Cupid too!!❤️

Great song choice I love this song😳

The muscle comment of Paarth was seriously hilarious!!🤣

Finally at the end Paarth in his dreamland!😳😆

Just loved this update a lot!!! Update soon!!😃

Thank you dear for such lovely feedback! There can be nothing more contenting than reading such great replies , when you are a writer. Once again I want to ask to was that muscle dialogue that hilarious!!😲

Originally posted by: 8520NK

I so wish there was a love button here!😳

Awesomee update there! The chemistry was sizzling😊Can't wait anymore, pleasee update soon!😃

You really liked it that much!😲 Well thank you very much dear!

"You really need to earn us a point here Nakul!", Bheem was urging. "I'll try my best! But what if I am not able to!", Nakul asked. "Then you will end up in ICU!", Paarth warned. "I really need to earn a point here! Or else!", Nakul thought with stars already flying around his head.

"And now we boys would like to call upon Nakul for his performance! Girls saved you hearts, he is really good at stealing them!", Yudhishtir announced.

The music began -

Girl you're my chammak challo.
Where you go girl I'm gonna follow,
What you want girl just let me know,
You can be my chammak chammak challo!

Many girls already lost their heart to the handsome man on the floor. With his eyes expressing his words, hands and step attractive enough to get any girl on knees, Nakul was sure to set every girl on fire.

Shawty I'm gonna getcha
You know I'm gonna getcha
You know I'll even letcha
Letcha be my chammak challo

Some girls even volunteered to be a partner of the guy but he had something else brewing up in head. He had to answer someone else.

Kaisa sharmaana aaja nachke dikha de
Don't be shy, show me your moves
Aa meri hole aaja parda gira de
Get close to me, let down your guard
Aa meri akhiyon se akhiyaan mila de
Lock eyes with me
Aa tu na nakhre dikha
C'mon, don't show me attitude
Wanna be my chammak challo? - 4

"Oh! We are so much gonna earn a point!", Sahdev shouted. "No! No! Remember the girls are not judges or we were sure to earn but unfortunately, they are not!", Yudhishtir told. "But chances seem to be fair!", Bheem called out. "Oh we'll see that!", Yudhishtir said. "Where is Paarth?", Bheem noticed.

Tu meri chammak challo
You're my chammak challo
Teri picture ka main hero
I'm your movie's hero
Give it to me girl mujhko dedo
You can be my chammak challo

Paarth had to confront someone, so he set out on mission to seek an audience with her. He travelled all the way to the other side of the hall to meet Panchi. Who was busy in planning things with Shubhi.

Shawty I'm gonna getcha (i.e. get you)
You know I'm gonna getcha
Maybe I'll even letcha
Be my chamak chamak chalo

Nukal was riding high on his popularity on girls. The way girls were coming ahead to dance with the handsome, surely showed his popularity amongst them. Meanwhile, he decided to set on revenge. He turned his gaze towards Shubhi and continued.

Kaisa sharmaana aaja nachke dikha de
Don't be shy girl, show me your moves
Aa meri hole aaja parda gira de
Get close to me, let yourself go
Aa meri akhiyon se akhiyaan mila de
Lock eyes with me
Aa tu na nakhre dikha aa
C'mon, don't show me attitude

Shubhi who was irritated enough, not to take that, too responded by slapping him. The hall slept into silence. Girls were shocked. "How can she slap him! God was a stupid girl she is!", was a common thought running in every girl's mind, leaving Panchi, who was standing in a side and was pulled to a corner by Paarth.

Wanna be my chammak challo? - 4

And the music began again. The roar of girls too was heard clearly. "Now that is ridiculous!", Shubhi thought.

Meanwhile Paarth who had pulled Panchi in a corner started with his confrontation, "You cannot do that!". "Do what?", Panchi asked in reply. "Dance with someone else!", he replied. "Why?", she questioned in return. "Because...", he pinned her to the wall and whispered in her ear, "You cannot win with me!".

Kaisa sharmaana tujhe nachke dikha doon
Let my dance show you how shy I am
Mera ho jaaye jo main parda gira doon
If I let my guard down, you'll be mine
Aa tujhe akhiyon mein apne basa loon
Let me hold you in my gaze
Aa tu na nakhre dikha
C'mon now, don't show me attitude

"He so needs an answer to this!", Shubhi planned.

Irritated with Paarth's stupid action Panchi tried to leave from a side but Paarth used both his arms to catch his prey, "Finding it tough to defeat me. Are you?", he asked. Now Panchi was annoyed she slowly slid her hand upto his collar and pulled him closed enough till their lips was just an inch apart, "Look mister! I can take you here and now! So better leave me or pay!", she said with a smirk. Impressed enough to be mesmerized again, Paarth unpinned the lady. "That was smart!", Panchi said so and left from there.

Wanna be my Chammak Challo (4)

And Nakul's turn ended. Vasusen had to decide now. And it was soon that he announced, "Two points!"

"Congrats! Now at least you won't lose with a zero!",Shubhi commented. "We will see that!",Paarth replied.

"Now good great ladies and gentlemen, we would like to bring upon stage a performance from the girls. Others better watch out!", Panchi announced.

Hey... Dhin Tadaak, Dhin Tadaak
(Indian Beats)
Aaja Ud Ke Saraat Pairon Se Bedi Zara Khol
Come flying at a rapid speed and unlock the shackles off my feet
Nagada Sang Dhol Baaje, Dhol Baaje
Along with the kettle-drums, the drums are beating
Dhaanye, Dhaanye, Dham, Dham Dhaanye
(This is used to express the sound made by these drums)
Nagada Sang Dhol Baaje, Dhol Baaje
Along with the kettle-drums, the drums are beating
Dhaanye, Dhaanye, Dhaanye Dham Dhaanye

The Gujarati beats were surely convincing to all and the beautiful entry Panchi and Shubhi took on that made everyone to accept that the girls were indeed great dancers.

The lyrics surely were showing the wait of the ladies for their partner. The beautiful ghagras they were wearing surely enhanced the beauty of their spins. The formations which were formed by the dancers were even mesmerizing.

Originally posted by: Angela_Grokes

Was that Paarth line really that good!!!😲 Again loved you for your beautiful feedback!😳

Kya Mast update tha yaar!!! Pinning and all!!! Arya better confess, I might forgive!!! Awesome!!!