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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Nonie12345

This is an interesting chapter 👍🏼

Sahadeva's knowledge is really helpful😊
The diamond is a person !!😲
Let me guess is it panchi?
The precap hint is very interesting 😳
Waiting for next chapter😃

Thanks Bella.
Well whether the diamond is a person or a stone.. You'll come to know very soon. Keep reading.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Sonatia

Hi,angie di i know i am superb late!read the both updts.
Ameazing updts.
Cnt wait 4 the nxt.
Updt soon!

No problem. You can always take your time.
Thanks.😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Maverick_me

Beautifully written Angela! That diamond is Panchi 😊

Teaser is quite interesting ..

Thanks a lot. 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Radhikerani

NakShah were too adorable for words! Eagerly waiting for the adventure!! Is the inscription hinting at Panchi, that only she can retrieve the Diamond of Zeus?

thank you. 😊 NakShah 😆 Well it is good that you are liking them, you'll get more of them in the upcoming updates.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Hemangi

Wow that was an thrilling chappy Angie 😛

Oh...Nakul... so tender & caring for his jacket 😆 & Vasusen's lost his poor shirt while making breakfast surprise for Vrushu... 😆
Finally they found the amber room... but instead of diamond got an inscription in Latin...well I thought they will get the diamond or will meet the villains with the diamond in their hands 😆
Hhmm... again translation is another puzzle...but the gang will solve & there are some gr8 puzzle solver's in the gang 😉

Continue Soon

Thank you Hemangi.
As I said you don't get what you expect. I'll suggest you to read ahead to find out. 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: LiveYourDream

Very tightly written chapter and quite gripping

So Nakul is worried about his jacket😆
Panchi is the diamond? Or at least she will lead them to it?
Nice job😊

Thank you Mamta. Happy that you liked it.😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Chapter 48 : Stuck

Shubhi carefully looked at the lake. She was confused. Instead of her own reflection, she could see a gemstone in the lake waters. She was confused and moreover shocked.

Panchi came to her and said, "This is the Lake of Desires!".

Shubhi thought for and second and quickly reached upon the conclusion that at this moment all she wanted was the Diamond of Zeus.

Nakul was still feeling that his jacket was in great danger while Dhrishtradyumna was working on his device. Both of them did not take great part in what was happening around them at the moment.

While Govind and Paarth were worried.

"Govind, what should we do? Their phones are switched off. Shubhi's application cannot trace them. They might have reached the Castle. We should also get there." Paarth asked Govind. He was worried for all, for his brother Vasusen, Vrushali and Sahdev.

"Paarth is right! We should leave." Yudhishtir said. He was smart and always took the right decision. Often his brothers approached him if they found any difficulty in making choices.

Bheem too agreed with the two. His stomach was rumbling while his mind denied to make any decision on its own because it had not been fed since morning. He checked his backpack, alas! Nothing but five good cheese sandwiches.

Govind thought for a second. He was sure that things were not good or why would all their cells be switched off at the same time. Also, he entrusted Vasusen's ability and Sahdev's wisdom along with Vrushali's intelligence. They would come out of any problem safely. Thus, he said, "Paarth, we should wait for a while. That will be better for all".

Paarth never gave a second thought once Govind suggested something. He knew that Govind would never make a wrong choice nor his decisions would be without logic. So he agreed to the suggestion at once.

While here all of them were worried, others met with a different problem in Benetton's Castle.

Sahdev then picked up the tablet which rested on the level which raised from the ground. But the second he did that, cracks developed in that solid crystal floor which quickly travelled and reached the pillars one by one each pillar fell and shattered into pieces.

Shocked and alerted by the scene Vasusen, Vrushali and Sahdev quickly ran out but before they could leave the hall but a ring of fire formed a fatal boundary round the hall.

Stuck that they were, none of them could find a way to get out. The pillars had already shattered and without any support, the dome would soon fail to balance its own weight and hence would come down breaking, thus putting an end to the lives of the three.

Sahdev looked around for some way get out but he got nothing but disappointment. The walls had already developed cracks and it was a matter of second for the big dome structure to fall down. If a solution was not found soon it would result in nothing but the end of their lives.

Vrushali could not find any means to get out. She had lost all hope and turned to Vasusen who was equally worried and helpless.

The two lovers silently looked into each others eyes for a second and without any sound three words exchanged between the two : I love you.


TBC...


Precap hint :You get what you want!

Edited by Angela_Grokes - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Res !
Not going unres it . U updated after long . Your punishment di 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
I am extremely sorry, I forgot about this completely! My bad!
A wonderful and intriguing chapter, really!
This story and the quest has always interested me and the quest seems so mysterious and adventurous that it captures one's whole attention and the person becomes engrossed in reading!
Although, a short chapter but I wonder what will the Lake of Desires bring with it?😉
Also, I know Govind is doing everything carefully but I just hope that Vrushali, Vasusen and Sehadev are sound and I am sure that their intelligence will help them get through it!
Waiting for more...continue soon!👏
Edited by 8520NK - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
This chapter is amazing Angela👏
I hope that vasusen, vrushali and sahadev come out of this hall safely🤔
Edited by Nonie12345 - 10 years ago

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