Here I am finally as promised to u... 😃
I have not commented on ur past so many updates dt m confused now where should I start from... 😛 😆
Now Coming bk to ur FF...entire holiday trip ws just beautifully penned down... 😳 romantic night at shimla...shopping at mall...swimming pool romance...der talk after dat...sharon getting injured...swayam taking care of her...playing with d snow...to Maggie romance everything was simply perfect...the entire trip was too filled with romantic and cute moments..i loved d way u have taken care every minute things...making d story more interesting... 😃
Coming to next part...der fights...swayam was indeed rude to Sharon...and poor girl was trying her best to understand him...dat part of d story was really describe well... 👏 👏emotions perfectly defined...and ya loved d song selection too...tho I heard it fr d fst tym but I think it was just perfect for d situation... 👍🏼
And next was "samjhawa part" and Swayam revealing d real truth behind his anger...again here emotions were described perfectly...i must say dat as writer u very well know to handle d emotional part... 👏 👍🏼 and ya I must mention loved d way u ended 53rd update... keeping d readers all exited to wait fr next one.. 😆 gud job... but fortunately I was lucky enuf as I read bth d updates together...😆😆
Phir Sharon pregnancy news.. swayam excitement after hearing d news...dat part was cute... 😳 as reader even I was so happy to hear dat... 😃 nandini and Sharon convo nicely describe... And ya was really happy to know dat swayam is not going anywhere... 😃
And now coming to ur lst update...it was too romantic and cute... 😳 swayam was totally in romantic mood...and his most caring husband one could ever have... 😳 while d sharon was adorable as always...again here loved d song selection...itz one of my fav songs... Overall just loved d update.. 😃
Phewww finally m done... 😆 and Sorry again for delay... 😔 Will try to b regular next tym...
As I hv told u before ur awesome writer...so keep writing and do PM me...
Love ur Divya di.. 😳