SwaRon FF- KiSmAt CoNnEcTiOn #2 LastChap-57, Pg 62. (16Oct'14) updtd.

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#301

Edited

Wow so emotional heart warming update TKD! 🤗 so finally they got together! It was a very well written update sakshi just amazing! The song, favourites of many! It was relatable ofcourse as per their situation, both yearning for each other's love and finally giving in. I loved the part where swayam was not letting her go and she struggled hard, then when he freed her...she didn't wanted to go! I could easily picture that moment which made me love it more! Then their kiss was extremely good, you captured their passion very well. Keep it up!
Swayam ko cancer hai kya? Maar mat dena usse dost 😆
Update soon.
Ab toh maine bhi unres kar diya...ab kya problem hai 🤣

Edited by surbhimathur - 10 years ago

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Nikki

@HR-DMG4life

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#302

Nice update :) I loved the song choice

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Mansi

@Mansi98

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#303

Awesome update👏

swayam coming home😊

n sharon angry with swayam😔

he manofing her was superb😃

both were in pain😭

d pain u described it do reach 2 me😭

the best part was when swayam was going and sharon came from behind n hug him😃

it was damm cuet😃

bt wat is d reason behind all this??😲

update soon😊

n thanx fr d PM😊

love

Mansi😊

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Manisha Bhardwaj

@Rockingbhardwaj

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#304

this is the only song which is apt for the situation... really emotional update it was.. finally they talk... something big is gonna unfold in their Life.. update soon.. thanks 4 d pm Sakshi

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LoveHopeMagic

@LoveHopeMagic

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#305

hey sakshi 😊

i loved your this ff from long time.

but i could not able to cmt on this.

this was one of my fav ff.😉

from the start the both sharon and swayam face too much pain.

and they stand up for eachother that was i like abt the swaron in this one.

plz try to pm me nxt time...

i will surly cmt

i missed last 3 chapters to read now i just come acrose it so i read it full.

what happend to swayam? really want to know...

last 3 parts was too emotional...and you nailed it

love

keechu❤️

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#306

d song was perfect👏

wat s swayam hiding😕

continue soon😊

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Preetirox

@Preetirox

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#307

Well the update was emotional! The way you pen down the emotions are brilliant! The best part was the passionate hug and the kiss! I really loved it! Its like I can feel each and every emotions while reading the entire update! And you really had to end it there? God i was damn happy when i read that he was going to tell everything but i scroll down the update is over! 😡 anywys update soon!! 😃

Edited by Preetirox - 10 years ago