ArHi SS Collab: Temptation of A DARK Lover - Thd 6 EPILOGUE Pg.1

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Meena Subramaniam

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Posted: 11 years ago

#141

its a beautiful epilogue and a beautiful ending...

Arush hav become the beautiful gift of their love...he's their priceless treasure...

luv the way he says "No Kal-Kate" and "No mushy mushy Pappa" 🤣

looks like all the baby boy in yur story is the protector of their mummy and dushman of their daddy 🤣 even Aryan also don like Arnav to be close to Khushi in "Betrayal in your Love 1&2"...but these are the character whch make the kids cute...wen they fight wth their daddy...

Its a wonderful journey with Temptation of A Dark Lover ... starting frm Khushi stop Arnav's wedding n he forcefully married her...forcibly stayed wth her...make her realised tat she too hav fallen in love wth him ...their life as a couple...the lack of trust frm Khushi's side whch hav been used by her brother n dad... but later knowing the truth ...Arnav saving her frm the marriage ...the little giving back moments by Arnav n they back together...n finally having Arush ...its a very beautiful journey of life where u show the reality of lives whr there is not only fairy-tale romance but also ups and downs in every marriage...

this is an awesome story Pavin...hats of to u...for once again to giv an story...

Edited by meena_raveena - 11 years ago

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Tina

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Posted: 11 years ago

#142

The End !!!
Superb Ending ..Awesum ff

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crazyforu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#143

awsm ss loved it very much
amazing update

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Siva

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Posted: 11 years ago

#144

read the story in one go

omg awesome story

loved it

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purnima209

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Posted: 11 years ago

#145

just suprb story i loved it... no wrds to explain...

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yoga123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#146

Beautiful ending...thanks for the PM

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jisha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#147

amazing end it was hot i am fanning myself

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ammullu1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#148

It's such a beautiful work,I loved it...felt like real.i feel jealous of the love khushi get from everyone...

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ammullu1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#149

U r a very very gifted writer.keep up the good work.

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shonagudia

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Posted: 10 years ago

#150

Read it in one go.. Loved how you started it with Khusi's attempt to save her friend , then Arnav's revenge on Khusi so he got mrd to her and finally they fall in love . Beautiful journey and Arush completed it ...