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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely FF.
Actually, I am a silent reader and love all of your work so far.
Your FF seems to have a realistic touch to it which i really love.
Hope to read more of your work in the future, especially stories on swaron.
Thank you for this lovely ff.
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Posted: 10 years ago
I didn't realize this FF is over. Thank heavens I read the Author's note :/
Contrary to what others said, I personally feel that this Fan Fic must have had something more to it. I am clueless what I want but I actually feel you shouldn't have ended it here.
But nonetheless, it always the choice of writer himself to decide how to mould & end their work.

As I have been saying, your way of depicting stories is Awesomeness. Sharon's side is penned beautifully be it Friendzoned or remember me. Sharon deciding not to say a word to make him more frustated :') she was understanding the turmoil in his heart, too. 'I want to love you again'- enough for Shekhawat to hold on tightly to her.
The best part about your works are being Realistic with a pinch of Humor.
This update was Heart melting, yes.
There doesn't exist a person like Shekhawat, I can bet that.
His love can make people fall of everyday, every hour & every moment. How much can he love her? Limitless, probably.

Okay. Enough of blabbering :D

All the best for your exams. Be back soon.
Keep writing.

-Ayushi



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Posted: 10 years ago
This was one of the best pieces of work I have ever read. It was absolutely mesmerising.
I wad glued to this FF from the very start till the end.
A very good job done by you. 👍🏼

I can't believe it has ended. Thanks a lot for the PMs.
Please do come up will some new works.
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Posted: 10 years ago
What to say Girl, where to start... I am speechless after reading it. Any word I choose to describe ur writing would be less.
The way to penned down your thoughts, amazing.

Remember you and Frienzoned FF were two very dear to me.
I still can't believe this FF is over, Shit.! I am already missing it.

Coming to this update, it was very beautifully written,
"I have struggled so much to gain a piece Ur heart, and when you give it me, Why should I say it's too late" Swayam The ultimate Loverboy, he is one of kind, so true, He deserved having thousands and thousand of sonnet written on him.. How can somebody not fall for him.

But Sharon she is also no less, the way you portrayed her character throughout this FF, brilliant. Her complexity, insecurity, everything you penned down so beautifully..

"I want to love you again" ... "That's all I want for now" ...
I am content with this end.
Again I would say the way penned down your ideas and give shape it to in terms of stories, its brilliant.
I agree with ppl above The kind of humor you bring to your stories, it gives a realistic touch to it.

Your love for writing reflects in your stories...

I can go on and on and trust me I won't be tired praising your work. Please comeback with another story of your, we all will be happily waiting to read it..

Keep writing Srishti, and do share your ideas that you planned,
Good luck for that whatever you are planning..
At last thanku soo much this FF..

Love you
-Shivani



Edited by Vani20 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Omg it's ended ..it was my fav thing after d3 ...oh god now i will miss swaron more .
About your writing it is amazing and the way you describe things are commendable ...

i will miss this ff .


Ps: if possible please continue with next season or continuation of this one ...if possible ..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful update 👏
I am going to miss this ff so much ..😭

Please do write more on Swaron..😊


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Posted: 10 years ago

Update was awesome...

Loved ur ff...both friendzoned nd this one..

Waiting fr ur new story..do write.

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Posted: 10 years ago
U ended this story so soon... 😭
Ur writing remind me of palki mam...U r really a very good writer...
And coming back to story, I always waited for update of this story...
This story is really very very very heart touching and well written...
While our every story is just superb...
Yup u r right that this is not Tom n Jerry...But we expect an epilogue...
But only when ur xams ends...
Plsss do write the epilogue...
All The Best for your xam...
And come back soon with new story...
Keep writing...
And A very big Thank you for writing stories...
Till then Bye..
Edited by ShailjaShan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
So its over 😭 ..but i shud say dis ws an amazing piece of work...nd i liked the ending...shoron dosnt remember everything..but she ws sure dat she ll fall in love with swayam..tat is unknown invisible bond of love...hats off my dear...i dnt hav words...
Do write more specially swaron works...
love you...waiting for new ones.. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
really well penned
the usp of the story was that the characters never lost their charm from first till now
i loved the ending
thnx to you that you didnt make the ending obvious by making sharon remember everything out of the blue
the way you justified the characters made me love this ff even more
though i didnt want it to end
i loved the ending

"You had said that one memory would be enough for you. That you would give us a chance,"
this one dialogue of swayam made the endin even more beautiful
with this one of favourite ff has ended
wish to read more of your write ups
keep writing
Edited by athi_vrushan - 10 years ago

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