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Posted: 11 years ago
Firstly thanks for everything dii it means alot.
Coming to the update awsomely mind blowing update.
She is in so much pain yaar I just hope she get through it yaar.
You really work hard yaar to give such a great wonderful update.
This chapter is the base for this ff.
Waiting for the next maha update yaar anxiously, curiously yaar.
and the teaser too .
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved the update... first of all .. arnav saving her from humiliation and insult ... and she was ready to resign before she could do some irreparable damage to the reputation of the hotel... i didnt understand why his touch repulses her so much... there was nothing he did right... then why ... why his touch ... i know we will find out the answers in the upcoming chapters ... and the night sequence was superb... loved the way arnav first called to inform her about his impending arrival... he cares way too much for her ... and the mask of indifference is cracking ... want to know more about khushi actions ... waiting for the mahaaupdate...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Khushi is still sufferng from the after effects of what happened 3 years ago. She is even repulsive to Arnav's touch?
She is way more broken than what she is letting on.
Wonderful chapter
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Posted: 11 years ago
Unressed my comment at 28 page
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb chapter...thanks for the PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
deepti this is wat i call a simply mind blowing update! it was so beautifully written and every words and emotions seemed to be at the perfect place in this update! it was truly one of a kind!

i simply love the fact that the walls that arnav has built around his heart for the past 3 years seems to be crumbling down and its allowing khushi to seep in. arnav may be saying that khushi is his past and thats where she needs to stay but he cant deny the fact that every single thing about her affects him, whether, its her happiness and her smile or whether its her pain, tears and anguisgj. he is bonded to her and her emotions for ever. he notices little things about her and he knows when she is lying an faking it. liked the way he did not let her appologise for no fault of hers and told her if she resigned she will have to go back to india. i think he knows very well that khushi is not going to give up on them this time and thats y he was openly challenging her!

n the coffee situation was so cute, for arnav to have stopped drinking coffee who he needed every day must have been a huge step, n i guess it was because they were too many bittersweet memories connected to coffee and khushi! i was almost crying with joy when i read that he was indirectly softening towards khushi and he showed that by ordering a cab for her and showing her how its works in the stoarage room but the best part is where he rushed over seeing her sleeping on the floor and applying the oitment on her burnt palms.

as for khushi, u totally deserve all the appreciation for making appear in such a light, she is indeed a leader in the kitchen but she does it with love and understanding and not by being arrogant or disrespectful. she gives all her staff the respect they deserve from her. even arnav has started appreciating her determination and her standing up to the role of the head chef. behind the facade of a happy and bubbly khushi, there is still the hurt and lost khushi of 3 years ago who is still suffering from the consequences of that fateful night. but im so proud of her that she is not letting that pain take over her life and her dreams for the future, she knows she has to fight for herself and for arnav and more importantly she has to fight for them.

reading about her khushi kept arnav beside her with her diary is so heart breakingly beautiful, her diary is her solace in her dark times, the one to whom she can share her happiness and confess her worst fears! i bet she named the diary ASR. if anyone needs to know how she spent the years away from arnav, they just need to read her diary to know how she has died every second of her life that she was away from him.

as for sapna, i really bad for that poor innocent soul. she needs some peace and courage to be able to build her life again. seeing sapna in this state must be like looking in the mirror of the past for khushi:(

u simply rocked deepti, i dont know how u do it and after each update im in awe, with the beauty of it. u know how to evoked passion and emotions in ur every word! u are simply fantastic and i loved the fact that next part is going to be a maha update! im so eagerly waiting for it.


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Posted: 11 years ago
he observes Khushi closely and feels her pain...
Something is definitely changing!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update !!!!!!!!!!!!
Arnav started to observe Khushi the minute he come to restaurant
And he can able to see true Khushi who is trying to hide her pain behind her fake smile its made him disturbed and hurt
He admired the leader in her and the way she tried to handle situations
And then come Arnav's protective side out and he hide Khushi from that greedy costumer
When she come to apologies he once again see her reaction on his touch
Arnav saw her struggling in that wee hours of night Arnav's pain to seeing her like that and cant able to take it more calling her before going to her door all are very beautifully written

What will be Arnav's reaction when he will read Khushi's diary and meet the real Khushi which she is trying to hide from him
Cant see them in pain more They need to talk as soon as possible
Arnav is the only one who can reduce Khushi's pain and insecurities

Loved the whole update too much
Their fighting but care for each other and try to hide their pain from other were very well described
The way you convey feelings in words that is really Amazing👏
Waiting for maha update eagerly
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Posted: 11 years ago
yet another beautiful update. I am speechless
Khushi is till in trauma and Arnav has started noticing her refluxes, he is worried about her of what he saw
lovely write up
cant wait to the maha update and vm.
thanks for the pm x
sorry for late reply
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Posted: 11 years ago
With every passing update, my admiration towards khushi increases many folds. She's turned from the fragile girl to a girl of steel. Her professionalism was astounding. She realizes the importance 'deleKtable Morsel' holds in Arnav's life and was more than willing to sacrifice her self esteem for him. And I am so glad she was saved from doing that. As khushi mentioned, some things are still unchanged.

With every step khushi takes away from him, she somehow manages to make her changed demeanour more clear to him. He's learning to see through her made up facade and I believe a little patience and thinking is all that he needs to understand all that he's unravelled about the new her, atleast for the time-being.

Waiting for the next part.
Update soon. 😊

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