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Posted: 11 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: Godly_Affection
awesome update
loved it
the cold war between Rohail n Aahil was beautifully written!
waiting eagerly for next update
do continu soon
thankx for pm shanu di!

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#72

Originally posted by: neitka
sorry for late comment
litle busy
awesome update
omg aahil aa gya
now wat to nxt
eagerly waiting wat happen nxt
hope seher get well soon
continus soon
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Karachi, Pakistan...

Dr. Tariq look at Aahil. He is ready for his comment. Dr. Tariq even opens his mouth to say it but then thinking better of it just shut his mouth and left with the nurse while shaking his head at the present situation. Aahil's eyes follow his each and every movement. He doesn't talk much so he is normally observing others. As the door close behind Dr. Tariq, Aahil shifts his attention to Seher. She is quietly sleeping hugging her blanket as if its her's teddy bear. He smile looking at her. His real smile! The one in which his eyes sparkle. She was the reason of his smile. And still is! He realized. He had stopped smiling left alone laughing since she left. It has been a long, long winter of 8 months where he lived without her and her sunlight like smile and laugh. But today finally it seems like this cold, harsh winter is about to end, spring is around the corner with lots of warmth and happiness.

He walks up to her. Suddenly she starts kicking her legs. First he got scared and thought of calling the Doctor but then he notice that she was trying to cover her feet but the blanket was stuck on the corner of the bed. He smiles and takes a breath of relief. He walks around the bed and unstuck the blanket. Then he covers her feet with it. She stops struggling and nuzzled up more in her blanket and went back to sleep.

He walks around the bed and sits on the stool by her side. He gaze at her. His eyes capturing every feature of her face: her deep eyes, her cute nose, her long hair, her high cheek-bone; her light skin tone. Just then she snuggled in her pillow more because of which a strand of hair came on her face. His smile deepens. He leans over and brings his hand loser to her face when he notice the ring in her left hand by her face as she holding the blanket. He stopped. With a sudden realization that she is not his, he leans back and pulls his hand back also. Suddenly his smile vanishes from his face. His face is hard and his eyes are cold. With one last look at her face, he turns his back towards her.

He walks to the window. He looks outside at the sky. Dark clouds are quickly approaching. He knew it was only five or five-thirty in the evening so those dark clouds could only mean a thunderstorm. He likes thunderstorm as they remind him of well... himself. Thunderstorms are dangerous, intense, fierce, powerful, and unstoppable: just like him. They go and come as they want rather than being considerate of others. That is exactly what he is going to do. He is going to do what he wants. He will get what he wants! Aahil thought as he looked outside with a menacing look. It going to start raining very soon and very hard, Aahil forecasts as he turn around.

Now that he is going to be here for a while; he decides to make himself a little more comfortable. He takes his coat off and after straightening it he puts it on the couch by the window. Next, he unbutton his shirt's sleeves and fold it past his elbow. Then he loosen up his tie. "Man! Am I drained!" thought Aahil as he message his neck trying to relax his muscles. He looks up at her again. She was fast asleep. He looks at the couch and couldn't help wonder how good would it feel to lay there. One look at his watch told him that its only 5:30 pm and he could get a quick nap of at least two hours. And before you know it he was lying on the couch and closed his eyes. "Hopefully, today I won't get that nightmare" was Aahil's last thought as he fell into a deep slumber.

Seattle, Washington...

"toh phir.. what did your parents say?" Seher finally asked Aahil. Aahil looked up from his black coffee. She was looking at him expectantly. Her eyes big with expectation and her favorite strawberry shake left untouched.They were both in Crazy Cafe, their regular place. They come here very often and they sit at that one spot, their spot. It was by the window in the corner. They get to look outside as people walk by in hurry while nobody disturbed them as they were in the corner. Plus all the beautiful weather they witness together. Seher's favorite is light sun of spring with fresh new flowers and leaves. "But would we still see each other after today? Will we sit here again, at this spot?" thought Aahil to himself knowing what he is about to tell her would change everything.

"Aahil?!" called Seher breaking his chain of thoughts. "Huh!" said Aahil a little lost. "Aahil can you please tell me what happened with your parents? I need an answer today." said Seher irritated as he would always avoid this question. She need an answer for herself and so for her parents. "I did talk to my parents..," started Aahil as he looked and stirred his black coffee for the nth time. Seher looked at him motioning from her eyes for him to keep on.

Aahil looked up in her eye, "They... they refused," he said in small voice. He looks away as he continues, "They won't listen. They simply don't want me to marry you at any cost." Aahil stopped. Nobody said anything. Seher was looking at him with tears in her eyes. He knew it even before he looked at her. He hated them. More than anything, the fact that this time he was the reason for her pain. He had promised her that he will make them understand and he did try his 200% but they won't budge, Aahil reasoned to himself. "Magar... magar kyun?" Seher finally asked when she got her voice though she knew the answer very well. "Tumhe pata hai Seher.. wohi purani baat.. tum humari class ki nahi ho.. status different and blah blah blah..." Aahil replied annoyed as she always ask the same question. He angrily took a sip of his black coffee and burned his tongue. But he was so mad that he didn't even make a sound.

She looks away and quickly starts packing her things to leave. Aahil noticed. "Tum kaha ja rahi ho?" he asked. "Mujhe kuch kaam hai," she replied without looking at him as she put her ipad in her bag. Aahil reach over and grab her left hand on the table. She stopped. She looks at him. "Aahil..." she only took his name but then she didn't have to say anything else. He knew and he understood also but he can't... He just can't... He knew he was in a sinking boat and nothing can stop it from sinking. As a last straw, he impulsively said, "I will leave my dad's business." "No!" Seher exclaimed. "You can't do that! And you won't do that," Seher said with authority as she put her right hand above his hand on her left. "Lekin yehi sirf aek tareeka bacha hai Seher," Aahil said softly explaining it to her.

"Aahil haqeeqat yeh hai ka koi rasta hai nahi. Tum apna parents aur unka business ko nahi chor nahi sakta. Tumne pichle dus saal se kitni mehnat ki hai yeh mujhe pata hai aur pichle do saal sa tu mein khud tumhe dhek rahi ho. Aur tum yeh sab mera lia chor doga. No! You are not going to do that! Not even for me," she said with compassion. "Agar tum nahi ho to yeh sab ka kya karoga mein?" he asked looking like a little child who is about to lose his favorite toy. "Kya karoge ka kya matlab hai. You will live like you did before you met me. Zindagi kisse ka liye nahi rokti," Seher said putting a stone on her heart to encourage him. "Jhoot! Meri rok gayege!" Aahil said a little to loudly in anger. People sitting beside their table turn to look at him. Seher looked around at them. She gave them a apologetic smile and nodded.

"Aahista!," she hushed him. "Dheko Seher agar tum mera pass nahi ho to mujhe kuch nahi chahiye yeh billions of dollars ki business bhi nahi. Mera pass meri degrees hai. I will work for us both. Hum apni duniya banalaga. I promise. Bharosa rakho mera upar," Aahil said with love as he hold took her hand in his. Seher sighed. She kept her hand on his. "Mujhe bharosa hai. I know you can do do it. I trust you," she said equally with love. "Lekin tum batao. Koi bhi company tumhe kyun job dege? Tumhare company har bara company ki rival hai US mein. Tum apni company ka COO ho. Just right under your Dad. Why would somebody hire you and take risk. Sab tumhe janta hai," Seher explained.

He gritted his teeth listening to her because he knew she was telling the truth. Arghhh... He so hated that she was right. He can't even deny her claim. He rudely took his hand out of her's. He sit back and look out. It was pouring hard. Though only five in the evening, it was really dark outside. He put his head back on the chair. His head touched the wall as their was a wall in behind him. He closed his eyes and rubbed his hand over his eyebrows. Pulling them close and then apart, shaking the headache that was starting to form. Suddenly, he heard somebody put something on the table and pushed it towards him.

He open his eyes and running his hand through his hair for the 5 millionth time since morning, making it look like an ant's nest; he sat up. The first thing he saw was her. She was crying. Down right crying! She suddenly had all his attention. "Seher tum pleas..." he was about to continue when he saw her motioning him to look down at the table. What he saw made his blood turn cold and heart stop beating. "What?... Why?... No.. Why?..." he asked stammering to her pointing at the table. She looked at the table also with a lot sorrow. It was her engagement ring that Aahil gave her ring finger when he proposed to her.

"Yeh sachai hai Aahil aur tumhe isse mana hoga," Seher said with a lot of courage. Aahil shakes his head vigorously refusing to accept it. He even pushes the ring to her. "No Aahil.. please mera pas itni himmat nahi hai..." she said pushing the ring towards him. He put his hand on her's. He had also had tears in his eyes. "Dheko meri baat sono.. please mujhe jana do... this is not easy for me either but ab yahi sach hai," She said as she forcefully took her hand out of his hand and got up. "I'm sorry and Good Bye. I'll pray to God that you remain happy and may have much more success," she ran out saying that.

Aahil for a minute couldn't even understand what just happened. He just sat their looking at the door from where she exited. Then his moved to the table where she left her ring. As if a sudden realization of what he just lost, he picked the ring and sprint after her. He walked into the heavy rain. He looked both ways. "She didn't have her car with her so..." Aahil thought as he ran his hand through his wet bangs removing them from his forehead. In a second, his expensive light gray color suit with checks patterns was soaked and so was his crisp white shirt and navy and white strip tie.The visibility was nearly zero. He couldn't see anything but then he heard a bus's door open and saw its blinking red light from the back.

He knew she would have climbed on the bus. He ran towards the bus but by that time she had climbed up. He looked up at the window. There she was sitting on the left side of the bus. He was about to call out to her but just then the bus started moving. He ran back to the cafe because right outside the cafe his car was parked. Taking a very big risk of driving in this weather, he got inside his car and followed the bus. Though he could only see the bus's red light, he followed. Finally as the bus moved passed the signal it drove on the right lane giving Aahil a chance to go by the left side. He brought his car right by the bus. He even match his speed limit with the bus's. Taking a risk of moving his eyes from the road, he looked at the bus searching for her face. Finally he found her looking out the window. "She is still crying..." Aahil thought and then added, "though now in anger wipes away her tears also."

He brought his eyes back on the road. He smiled even in this situation; her antics always make him laugh. Shaking his head for getting distracted, he roll down the window of passenger seat. Slightly groaning because water was coming in and his brand new white 2015 Mercedes-Benz GL-Class was really dear to him but right now the most important person was Seher for whom he could even let favorite car's passenger seat get wet. They passed one more signal and then he took the risk and turned his attention from to the bus. He looked up and saw Seher looking at him with wide-eye. She already saw him. She motions him to drive away. He shakes his hand in 'no' sign. Next he motions her to come out. This time she shakes her vigorously. She mouth a "no". All this Aahil managed to drive taking turns looking ahead and then at her at the same time making sure that the car is right by the bus.

Thankfully there was no other car coming on the lane beside him going opposite way as his car kept skidding. He looked up again after getting his car under control. He notice that her back was facing him. He yelled her name but it got lost in the wind or maybe it wasn't too loud though he never found out. As he turned his attention back on the road, he saw a car coming from the opposite direction and it was dangerously skidding. Aahil tried to save his car but he could either save the bus and the other car. In an attempt of saving the bus, his car crashed into the other car. His last thought was Seher as everything blacked-out.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#74

Karachi, Pakistan...

Aahil opened his eyes as he whispered the word, "Seher". His breathing was erratic. He blinked quiet a few times to get use to the darkness. He recalls that he is in the hospital with Seher. Her thought made him sit up. He looked around. It was really dark. He could barely see anything. "Is she up?" Aahil thought. He puts his hand in his pants pocket for his I-phone. Then he remembers that he left it on the table in front of the couch, where he was sitting. Slowly he moved his hand and felt for the table, and finally his hand felt his I-phone. Finally, in his hand he brought it closer to him and check the time. It said 7:13 pm on the screen. Just then he heard lightening struck and even light flashed inside the room.

At the same time, Seher shrieked. Aahil immediately ran to her because of which he hit his knee on the table forgetting it's existing. Regardless he went to her, turning light on his phone he spoke, "Seher...Seher.. Don't worry. Look. See, Im here, Aahil" He shone the light on himself and her. She slowly opened her eyes when she heard his voice. In pure relief of finding him beside her, she was about to hug him but then stopped in mid-way. "Sorry.. thora over-excited hogaye thi.." Seher said sheepishly. Aahil smiled. He actually was actually taken aback as she was about to hug him not that he wouldn't like it but more so that she wouldn't find it right.

"Aek second." Aahil said as he gave his I-phone to her and walked in the corner of the room to find the light switch. Finally after a lot of unsuccessful tries, he found the switch and turned it on. "Great!" Seher cried as she clapped her hand together in delight. He smiled back and shakes his head. Just then the Nurse came for her vitals. She was fine other than her injuries which were healing. The Nurse announced that her food would be arriving shortly. Next she asked Aahil if he would like to stay here tonight or is he going to leave because the weather seems to be getting worse to much more worse right now.

"What do you think? Should I stay? Do you stay here alone normally?" he asked Seher with his eye-brow raised. "Hmm... Majority of the time toh Rohail ajatha hai. Lekin aek ya do bar akela bhi rahi ho mein," Seher told him. "But he won't be coming today," the Nurse told them. "But why? Is he ok? Is it because of the rain? Why didn't he inform me himself?" Seher asked all these question all together. Aahil couldn't help but noticed her concern for him not coming tonight and her anger for not getting informed by himself. His right hand tighten into a fist in anger. "Agar tumhe woh yaad nahi to uski itni fikar kyun hai tumhe," Aahil thought to himself as gritted his teeth in annoyance.

"Woh kya haina. Aaj muasam bohaut kharab hai. Unka inti barish meina ana bohaut dangerous hoga specially as unka ghar bohaut dur hai so Dr. Tariq nai khud hi kaha ka aaj ana ki zarwat nahi hai. Aur uno nai apko call ki thi but aap soh rahi thi aur phone nahi uthaya." Nurse told Seher. Seher looks down and nods. "So its decided. I'm not doing anywhere. I'll stay here tonight," Aahil declared making his sudden decison. Seher and the Nurse both looked up at him. "Kya?" Seher asked incredulous. "yahi ka aaj raat mein yahi hospital mein ruk raha ho," he said smiling unsure as he was almost about to rethink his decision as it seems Seher doesn't seem very happy.

"Sachi! Yes!" Seher nearly scream and fist pumped in happiness but instantly regretted and whined as she forgot her right hand is injured. Thankfully the nurse was there so she took of it. After fixing her bandage on her hand, she left shaking her head. Aahil's smiled deepened knowing that she was happy that he will stay. "Mujhe aek second ka laga ka tumhe acha nahi laga mera faisala," Aahil confessed as he settled down on the bed opposite to her. "Pagal ho kya tum," Seher said as she lightly punched him on his arm(with her left hand), "mujhe kyun nahi acha lagega," she asked. "Because.. well.. you gave expressions like that.. hmmm." Aahil answered with not a specific answer. He couldn't tell her about him being scared of her still liking Rohail.

Just then dinner came which they both shared playfully. They both were having a lot of fun like old days even Aahil was laughing wholeheartedly. They fed each other a little also and recall old days. After they were done eating, they just chitchatted for a while but very soon Seher had to sleep. As Aahil tucked Seher in, Seher asked him with concern, "Koi baat hai kya Aahil? I dont what but something is different about you." "Nahi asi to koi baat nahi hai bas kaafi din baad mil raha hai na iss lia lag raha hai tumhe," Aahil said with a smile as he brushed her question away. "Sachi na? You know you can tell me anything," Seher asked still not completely sure.

"Haan baba. Sacha bol raha ho. Ab ankha band karo aur sona ki koshish karo," he said smiling as he brought his hand to her forehand and he was about to caress her hair but he couldn't make himself to do it. He turned around in frustation. He just closed his eyes and took a deep breath calming himself down. Next, he walked over to turn off the lights. After one glance at Seher, who was sleeping quietly he walked over to the window. It was still pouring hard. He put his left hand on the window. "It's cold," Aahil thought and immediately pressed hot forehead to the window. It felt nice and he closed his head. Suddenly he remembered the day he got the phone call and his life took a 180 turn.

3 Days ago...

Lahore, Pakistan...

Aahil was in his hotel room. It was 3 in the morning but he couldn't fell asleep. Sometimes he really starts to consider if he has insomnia or some other disease or issues. He has tried everything but he just can't go to sleep. Finally after playing PS4, watching movie, eating midnight snack, and trying to read a book, he decided maybe a fresh shower would work. He went took a cold cold shower. He came outside feeling really relaxed in his black shorts drying his hair. Just then his phone ring, wondering who could possibly be calling him at 3:30 am, he answered the call. "Aahil... Im sorry.. meina tumhe jaga to nahi diya," it was a girl's voice talking very softly and quietly. This girl meant the world to him. Still does. He can never forget her voice. He closed his eyes hearing her voice after full 8 months. "Seher..." he whispered her name. Suddenly his eyes snapped open.

"Why is she calling him so late at night and why is she whispering? She got married, right? Did something went wrong? Her husband?!?" Aahil frantically thought to himself. "Kya howa Seher itni raat ko call? Sab theek to haina?" he asked cautiously. "Haan haan... sab theek hai.. asa kyun pooch raha ho. Its not like I never called you late like this before..." Seher said almost complaining. "Haan woh to hai lekin ab sab badal gaya hai you don't call me like this anymore..." Aahil said honestly still not getting the situation as he sat down on his bed. "Well yeh to mujhe tumse poochna chahiye ka tum mujhe phone ab kyun nahi karta ho. Meina yaha pichla one and a half haafta sa hoon aur tumhara aek call nahi... milna ana to dor ki baat hai," Seher said complaining.

Aahil was seriously confused. She refused to pick his call even changed her number now she is complaining that he doesn't call her. "Hold on a second Seher. Accident? Kaisa accident? I don't know about any accident." he told her. "Woh mein aaj kal Karachi mein hoon. Kuch do haafta phela mera accident hogaya tha Rohail ka saaath, Rohail Dad ka dost ka beta hai, uska baad..." before Seher can finish Aahil interjected, "Aek second. Tum kitna Rohail ko janti ho?" Aahil asked because as far as he knew she got married to a guy name Rohail so who is this new Rohail. "Nahi nahi mein to sirf aek hi Rohail ko hi janti ho. Woh mera Dad ka dost ka beta hai jinka ghar pay mein abhi theri hoi hoon," Seher explained. Aahil couldn't believe his ears.

Before he could say anything she continue, "Haan to aap bataya koi apna mangatar ko asa chorta hai kya... mujhe yaad nahi ka humara beech kya howa tha but i can pretty much guess that we fought. Lekin phir bhi yar. How can you do this to me? Koi Phone nahi koi kuch bhi nahi," Seher asked almost closed to crying. "Seher... Seher... chup ho jao. Ro mat. Woh mein thora kaam mein busy hogaya tha isse lia call nahi kar paya," said Aahil lying as he couldn't understand the situation but she clearly thought that they were engage. He had to ask somebody else. He need to find out what is actually happening.

"Seher tum mujhe bata sakti ho ka tum kaunsa hospital mein ho. Mein tumhe jaldi hi milne aoge lekin abhi mein Karachi mein nahi ho," Aahil reasoned. Seher happily gave him the address. After talking to her a little more, Aahil hanged up. The next morning he called the hospital and got all the information about Seher by bribing a Nurse. That's how he found out about her memory loss and how she doesn't remember her marriage but remember's their engagement and still thinks it exists. Her husband is there with her all the time but as a friend. After knowing all this information, he finished all his work in Lahore ASAP and came to Karachi today only. Because of finishing a week long work in two days, he is completely exhausted.

Back to Present...

Aahil opened his eyes. His headache was still as bad if not worse and so was his anger. He was furious at this present situation. His hazel eyes turn darker shade when he is mad. He turns around and looks at Seher. She was sleeping peacefully after putting him through this misery. "Tum toh aga bar gaye bari asaani sa... lekin meri kya... mein to wahi khara ho jaha tum chhor kar gaye thi," Aahil whispered. With a sudden decision, he picked up his coat and walked out of the room. He walked down to the parking lot. He sat in his car and turn on the heat. "Mein yaha raat nahi guzar sakta chaha kitna hi mausam kharab ho," he said as past events of the day ran through his mind and he put the gear on drive and drove away.

Rohail's House...

On the other hand, Rohail was at his house in karachi. He was in his room. Wearing a simple navy blue half sleeve t-shirt and a his gray pants, he was working on his laptop as he had to extend his stay in Karachi so he is working from home. He couldn't take anymore days off. However he can't pay any attention to work, his minds keeps on diverting on what "they" must be doing right now. "Arghhh..." Rohail got up saying that. He is not able to do anything. He is really starting to regret not going to the hospital. "Shayad mujhe wahi rukna chahiye tha.. shayad ghar ana hi nahi chahiye tha..." he said messing his hair up in frustation. "Lekin isse ka kya matlab hai ka mujhe apni Seher pay bikul bharosa nahi??!!" he questioned himself. "Lekin woh abhi meri Seher bhi nahi hai," he counter thought. "Haan lekin Aahil kuch asa nahi karaga... Seher nai kaha tha ka woh sacha pyar karta hai usse," Rohail reasoned. But no matter what he think, he couldn't make himself feel better. Probably he won't even get any sleep tonight, he thought as he look out his window seeing the raging storm make a ruckus outside.

Yaariyaan ve.. Yaariyan...

[Aahil is driving in the Storm]
Yaariyaan ve.. Yaariya ve...

[Rohail is looking out the window]
Yaariyan..

[Seher is peacefully sleeping]

Dil mera hai nasamajh kitna

[Aahil remembers that he came back on just one phone call]
Besabr yeh bevakoof bada..

[Though he clearly knew she is married now]

Chahta hai kitna tujhe

[Remembering how he turned into a workaholic without her...]

Khud magar nahi jaan saka..

[He remembers every time he tried to touch her... he couldn't]

Is dard-e-dil ki sifarish ab kar de koi yahaan

[He gets home and gets out the car and looks up at the sky getting wet in the rain]
Ke mil jaye ise wo barish jo bhiga de poori tarah..(x2)

[He closes his eyes and opens his arms out and cried out loud "I love you Seher!!" as he fell on the ground on his knees.]

Yaariyaan ve..

[Rohail slides his glass window open]

Yaariyan...

[A fresh breath of wet soil engulfs him as he closes his eyes]

Kya hua asar tere sath rahkar na jane

[He remembers the first time he saw her]
Ki hosh mujhe na raha..

[How he fell in love with her unknowingly]
Lafz mere zubaan pe aake ruke

[He remembers the last two weeks where Seher thought of him as a friend]
Par ho na sakke wo bayaan..

[He so wanted to hug her, kiss her, telling her "I love you" day and night like he used to in the past but alas...]

Dhadkan tera hi naam jo le

[How she is always in his mind... like he can't focus on his work...]
Aankhein bhi paigaam yeh de

[One can only find her in his deep, intense eyes]
Teri nazar kali yeh asar hai mujhpe jo hua..

[How she looks up to him and blushes at his intense gazes]

Is dard-e-dil ki sifarish ab kar de koi yahaan

[He sighs as he opens his eyes and steps into the rain]
Ke mil jaye ise wo barish jo bhiga de poori tarah..(x2)

[He just stands in the rain as he silently prays to God for her.]

Tu jo mila to zindagi hai badli

[Aahil sits in the rain and recalls how his life changed because of her]
Main poora naya ho gaya

[How he changed for a workaholic to a normal, loving human being]
Hain beasar yeh duniya ki baatein badi

[Rohail remembers how his mom showed him pictures of so many girls before]
Ab teri sunoon main sada..

[But out of all those.. he picked her to spend rest of his life]

Hmm milne ko tujhse bahane karoon

[Aahil used to call her out to meet... Rohail used to text her all day]
Tu muskuraaye vajah main banoon..

[Aahil used to give her roses everyday... Rohail used to whisper "I love you" in her ear]
Roz bitana sath mein tere sara din mera..

[Aahil used to call when he used to leave for work and then coming back home and then before going to bed and of course during the day... Rohail used to wake up seeing her and go sleep with her by his side while sending texts and calling during the day]

Is dard-e-dil ki sifarish ab kar de koi yahaan

[They both close their eyes... Aahil sitting on the ground with his hands on his knee... Rohail standing with arms open]
Ke mil jaye ise wo barish jo bhiga de poori tarah..(x4)[They both silently pray to get her back getting wet in the rain]

Yaariyaan ve..

[Aahil opens his eyes and stands up. He runs his hands through his hair and goes inside the house.]
Yaariyan...(2x)

[Rohail opens his eyes and runs his left hand through his hair. With a last glance outside, he turns around and goes inside.]
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Anuradha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#75

Iam first and u surprise me with ur update and love aahil jealousy and song sequence is great
thank u for pms

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Sanjana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#76

wow it was really a great suprise . Feeling bad fr both d men. Ur writing is beautiful, it seemd like every word was piturised, every emotns were felt directlf frm d heart. Loved it. Ur dng a great job.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#77

Awsumm Partner!!!! Aww..Seher is the reason of Aahil's smile!! Well.. Seher hai hi aisi..😉 Koi Shaq?? So This is what happened!! Aahil's nightmare is Seher leaving him? He had proposed to her but his parents wont agree to this alliance.. Ek Toh yeh Upper Class Aur Lower Class ka lecture khoon jalate hai mera..😡😡 Seher is sweet! She is even ready to sacrifice her love for Aahil's sake..!! This is true love..❤️❤️ She even gave their engagement ring back to him.. The whole fb was very emotional! Spcly the part where he chases her after the bus..😭 But he cudnt get her.. Seher bhi na bilkul bacchi hai..😆😆 It felt really good to know that they spent sum good tym together.. The phonecall fb was fab as well!! Aahil is Aahil.. Wo pata laga hi lega jaise taise karke!! Seher is soo worried about Rohail.. Well!! This is what we call a Bond For Eternity.. Marriage! Maybe she doesnt remembers him but still the fact remains Ki Seher Begh Is Now Seher Rohail Ibrahim...!!! ❤️ Hayee!! ❤️❤️

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Posted: 11 years ago

#78

And Aahil is jealous.. Well! Its a fact.. Dont be jealous boy..!! Tumhare liye bhi intezaam hai..😉😉 But still I must say he loves her.. Uske ek phonecall pe bhaag ke aa gya! And issi jealousy ke chalte he stormed out of the Hospital!!!!! I was missing my Ro abhi and Here he is..❤️❤️ What does he mean by "They?" Usse apne pyaar aur Seher pe bharosa nhi???? 😲😲😲 Agree ki uski yaddasht nhi hai par phir bhi?? Im soo feeling bad for both men!! 😔😔 And What to say about the song sequence!?? U nailed it yaar! 👏👏 Beautifully depicted the emotions of both men..!! Lovely..👏 Each and every lyn was beautifully embedded!!! Precap Seems Dhamkedaar..😉😉😉 Thanxx fr pm! Continue Soonz!!

Edited by Bubbly_Shanaya - 11 years ago