Arhi TS : Bas Ek Kahani [ Completed ]

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

amazing part

feeling bad for khushi

plz continue soon

thanks for the pm

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pixiegirl

@pixiegirl

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Wow Mints that was a heartbreaking story. Poor Khushi. She suffered so much at her in-laws' hands. She was married to Shyam, what else can we expect. But I am so glad that she is now free. Good riddance to bad rubbish. Waiting to see the next phase in her life. Hope it involves a certain Arnav Singh Raizada... 😉 Update soon.

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pinkly

@pinkly

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

OMG... poor Khushi. She had to endure so much. That was horrible. Finally she is free. wow.. I am amazed that a song inspired you write such an intense story. Nice start. I will wait for part 2.

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koisk

@koisk

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

OOh loved it, cant wait for her to become Mrs. Arnav Sigh Raizada now.

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Amiarisme

@Amiarisme

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

wow,
really like your concept and looking forward to how you will relate the next update to another song.
this one was tremendous

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sakhter90

@sakhter90

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Great update! Waiting to read more

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A_BA

@A_BA

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Bookmarking...

Looking forward to this short story!!!

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Hetal

@Divyahet

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Mitthadi...
Loved this first part of this TS.
Beautiful concept...
Loved the way you wrote this part.
Thanks for the pm.
Love n hugs.
Take care dear.

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madhu1210

@madhu1210

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Interesting. ..

but u should plan for ss or ff nit ts

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.ButterCup.

@.ButterCup.

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

He who is abandoned by relatives is dear to the strangers. -Imam Ali..

Great start...You've made me emotional with this amazing story... Yep, this is the harsh reality of the society. Where women treated so badly and physically abused by their husbands every day... I love Khushi's courage; she took a step by opposing her oppressor husband and emerged as a strong person... I wish to see this sort sorts of confidence in every woman...you've brilliantly written the introduction... Would love to read more... I truly appreciate the topic you've chosen for this amazing story... Haqeeqat per mabni aur society ka asli chehra dekhate hui khani... Superb story..