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Posted: 11 years ago
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Payal and Akash share quite a different relation. They both want things to work out between them but they don't act upon fixing it together. Mostly it's one of them at a time. Payal is trying her best now but Akash doesn't look like in a very generous mood. Well relationships can't work single-handedly. It takes two people to make it work. Akash has to understand that either he puts some effort himself and appreciate what Payal here is trying to do or else back off completely, though I want it to be the former.
Payal is right. Khushi needs to prioritize. Multitasking isn't easy and is not for everyone especially for people who are perfectionist. 😛 It's better if Khushi decided what she wants to do at the current moment.
Oh and those lovely texts!!! Arnav is smart and on the right track with his priorities set right.
I agree with Meera here. Have some mercy and give us an update soon. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I can empathize with the character of Khushi which seeks perfection in everything she does however much it may not have been the first choice or however small it may seem. Payal is so like our friends who seem to see things from such an objective POV it is sometimes downright irritating, but needed.
Prioritisation, or just simply saying no...but how many are so sane?

Loved the texting between Arnav & Khushi...reflects the simplicity of their comfort quotient, nothing complex!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Simply awesome update! Loved it to bits! Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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After very long time I am saying something good about Payal or first time😲, not sure but the point is she is at least taking efforts to maintain the relationship but Akash 😡. You know relationship is a two way street but Akash is so sure that because of the long distance, their relationship wouldn't work and Payal doesn't understand that. And I am like dude, she is focused about her career from the beginning and you know that, probably that's one of the qualities you liked it in her. But now instead of talking about your insecurities and work on the solution he is just being coward.
Khushi needs to choose and I know it will be difficult for her but she will do it because she is khushi and of course Arnav will help😉

Arnav is the happiest and the simplest guy in this story. 😊

So after reading that texting, when are we getting the next update 😉😳. Brilliant update Twiggy😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I don't like payal! there! I said it. I don't like her. she may have realized but I still don't like her much. akash isn't the most understanding but her mistakes are bigger. Alongside that, arnav and khushi, sigh! I love it when arnav gets naughty!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Both sisters had a good venting section, it's good to get out of your system and then you get. Different perspectives of your thoughts. Both have a lot going on, it's nice that they can connect with each, look out for one another!
Arnav's such a darling, he's the best..looking forward to the next one, hoping it's going to get sizziling...😊



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Posted: 11 years ago
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Great update! i hope everything works out between akash and payal!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh how complicated the relations are.
Payal and Akash must have the conversation with open mind and open heart to fix the mess they are in.
Nice update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hehe! The update was fun! Thanku for the happy reading moment!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This was such a treat to read! I loved that exchange between Payal and Khushi - it epitomized their personalities and their differences so well. You couldn't have portrayed it better Twiggy! Their innate differences came out in the way they sat together in the car, in Khushi's driving, and Payal's responses and instructions [she simply cannot help herself, can she? :)]..
Akash is turning out to be such a jerk - I wish I could ask him to decide - Work to keep Payal in his life or Cut his losses and move on and let Payal move on as well.

And you left it with such a bait for all your readers..Arnav's proposition! :) Writers are so sneaky and I loved it.


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