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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful update
Loved it
The dance is nice
Continue soon
Thanks for the pm
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Nice update both are getting attract each other
Update soon and u r other story also
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely and awesome story...
Update it quick plzz...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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AWESOME AND BEAUTIFUL UPDATE IT IS DEAR. LOVED IT.SORRY FOR LATE COMMENTING. LOVED VIRAT AND MANVI SCENES VERY MUCH. FLASHBACK PART WAS TOO GUD. I THINK VIRAT HAS FALLEN IN LOVE WITH MANVI BOTH DONT ACCEPT IT. LOVED THEIR CUTE CONVO. THE LINE LADKI BANNA MUSKIL HI NAHI NAMUNKIN HAI IS AWESOME. WHOLE PART IS BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN BY U. LOVES THE SONG AND DANCE OF VIRMAN AT PARTY.WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT. SO PLZ UPDATE SOON DEAR. TAKE CARE.😊😛😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hi i comntd on fb abt d parts loved d flashbck scens i thnk they are in love wid eachothr without ther knowledge loved d 2 prts espesialy tat grls makup dialogs hehehe nw nly i heard many of thes names omg hw did u found ths long list updat soon plz
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sorrryy i am so busy wirth college stuff i am sorry i am extremly late forgive me.
Chapter 3 :
So it's a date?

Manvis POV!

I open my eyes when I hear virat's voice call my name. He was looking right at me and was slightly shaking my shoulder. I look around and find that the aIirplanes lights were back on. "Hey wake up! We are landing". He says. I sit upright and rub my eyelids. "How long was I asleep?" I ask as I wear my seatbelt. Virat looks at his wrist watch. "About 30 minutes and 50 seconds" he says. I look at him oddly and can't help but laugh. He gives me a confused look. "You counted the seconds?" I asked while still giggling. But before he could reply I felt a sudden shake and I let out a scream. The plane was acting up. "What the hell?" virat said as he gripped his seat with his hands. It wasn't a normal landing shake, it was more like we almost crashed into a mountain shake.

Attention passengers we are experiencing bad weather conditions. Please stay in your seats. Thank you'. I looked at virat as soon as the announcement ended and he was a bit scared and to be honest so was I. He held my hand and griped it hard. "All is well, all is well!" he says with his eyes closed. "haha 3 idiots fan much?" I ask. He opens his eyes and places his index finger on my lips "shh please I am tensed" he says. I giggled "chill virat. It happens why you are so scared?" I ask. Virat doesn't reply back and keeps his eyes shut. The plane shook a few more times but it wasn't as intense as the first time.

"manvi?" he asks as his eyes were still shut. "hmm?" i ask looking at him. "Can we meet again in Chicago? I will go there in a month again." he asks again with his eyes still closed. I look at him and notice the details of his face. His face was almost perfect, a face any girl could fall for and on top his muscular body and 6 pack. Virat has always had a six pack. He swore to go to the gym daily and keep six pack for the rest of his life when we were 17. Oh I want to see his six packs now! Haha. "manvi?" he asks with his eyes still shut. I snap out of my crazy thoughts and realized he had asked me a question. "aa umm sure why not? I'll be back home in a week anyways." I say and shrug at the thought of the seminar I have to attend in New York. The seminar is tomorrow after that I'm all alone bored in a crazy city. Well Chicago is no less crazy but nothing can beat New York City! "Oh so you will be in New York for a week?" I nod a yes to him with a smile "you how long will you be in New York?" I ask a little hesitantly.

"Thank you for your cooperation passengers. Everything is in control now. We are preparing to land. Thank you" the captain says in the announcements. Virat tightens his seat belt as if it wasn't already tight enough. "aa two weeks. We should even meet in New York if possible. Will you be too busy?" he finally says. I smile "not really one day seminar and then I am a free bird. Mini vicay!" I say with excitement. Virat giggles "how fun. Then it's done tonight we are going to per se, my treat for old time's sakes" he says with an adorable smile. I can't help but open my mouth in shock? Did he say per se? that is one of the most expensive restaurants in new York city. I read about in a magazine but I would never go to a place so expensive I believe in savings and finance haha. "Are you crazy that place is so expensive? Let's just go to a pizza parlor!" I almost yell and then my tummy turns. We are landing!! Oh god this f*cking air pressure. I want to puke! "oh come on I have been there before it's worth it and it's my treat so why are you worrying? Just shut up!" he scolds me. I am a little offended but all I can think about right now is a barf bag. I straighten my face and act like I am okay. "Fine let's do it but you sure maya won't murder me?" I say and stick my tongue out. He giggles. "What she doesn't know doesn't hurt! She is in California anyways not like she would find out! Or vesa bhi tut oh meri sexy ha na?" he says and Iet out a loud laugh. He used to call me sexy and flirt with me in college just to mess with me and maya. He is doing it again. " acha girlfriend ko chor ke best friend ka sath ayashi?" I say and laugh. We both can't stop laughing. "Well its good at least you consider me your best friend again" he says and I freeze in time. I remember everything all over again. For a moment I got lost in this conversation that it seemed like nothing ever happened and we were the old virat and manvi. My face goes blank and virat notices that and his face goes blank too. He realizes what just happened. A lone tear falls from my eyes and I turn my head the other way avoiding virats gaze.

Flashback:

"VIRAT I F*CKING HATE YOU! YOU GET THAT?" manvi yelled with all her voice and threw a vase at virats face. Virat dodged the vase that was thrown with force aiming at his face. "ARE YOU F*CKING CRAZY. I COULD HAVE GOTTEN KILLED BY THAT!" he yells back in anger. "LIKE I GIVE A CRAP ABOUT YOU! YOU ARE ALREADY DEAD TO ME!" manvi yelled and bursted in tears. Virat just stood there hearing her words echo in his head. He was shattered. "You know what to hell with you and to hell with your life. I would be better off if I never got to see you ever again manvi! I hope I never have to see your ugly fat ass face ever again because I am done with this bullshit!" he says in a low tone but with anger. He rushes towards the door and slams it on the way out.

*Flashback ends*

That was the last time me and virat had been together after that day today we are meeting on this stupid plane. I left college right after that fight. I couldn't take being near virat or even being in the same city as him. We were friends since 9th grade. After 8 years of knowing him I could not be in the same city and not talk to him. He was my best friend! I had decided to move to Chicago where I moved in with my cousin and eventually I never went back to India. It has been 6 years since I left college, I missed my senior year because of everything that happened!

"We have arrived at jfk international airport. Hope your experience with us was excellent. Hope to see you fly with American airlines again in the future. Have a nice evening" the announcements turn on. I look back at virat and he was holding his forehead and was lost in his own thoughts. I didn't know what to say to him. "um virat my purse" I finally say pointing towards my purse that was on the floor in between his legs. Virat snaps out of his thoughts and finally hands it to me. "listen manvi" he says and grips my purse as I tried to take it from him, he was not letting go of it. I raise my eyes questioning what happened. "We are still on for tonight right?" He asks and let's go of my purse. I gulp. " ya why not?" I say. He gives me a small, probably fake smile. "here is my number and meet me at per se at 8 pm sharp" he says and hands me his business card. Oh crap! I forgot my business cards! I needed them for the seminar! I am so stupid! I face palm myself in disappointment. Virat raises his eyebrows. "Did I say something wrong?" he asks but before I could reply everyone got up from their seats and started getting their luggage out of the compartments. I stood up as well and got my bag. "No just forgot my business cards" I say as I place my bag on the aisle floor. Virat giggles "business seminar without business cards? Woo I sure don't want to be you!" he laughs and hands me his card again. I lightly tap my head and take his card.

We were heading towards the exit of the airport. Me and virat were walking next to each other. Seemed different because we were sitting for the past 3 hours. "Ok I guess this is it. My ride is here got to go. You do have a ride right? Otherwise I would love to drop you oh and if you need me to pick you up tonight I could do that. Oh where are my manners!" he says as he walks toward a driver holding a board saying virat vadhera'. i smile "no thanks my company is sending a cab, I'll be fine and I have a ride for tonight too. Meet you tonight kay?" I say and he nods. We shake hands and part away. He heads inside his car and I wait in the waiting room. My company cars are never on time. They are a shame truly. But what's bothering me the most is dinner with virat tonight. Maya would so kill me if she found out. And I don't even care how she would react anymore. Back then I was a loyal friend to her now it's all gone.
Edited by mebigirl - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I really loved this update...
It was really good...
The flashback was nice but sad...
Awww Virman are meeting tonight...
Its really a good story...
Thanks for the PM..
Edited by chandiniebinda - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome update.
luved it & update soon pls.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome update!!!!
VirMan is stuck were dey left n looks like wants to mend it...hope dey r bk to normal...thnks 4 d PM!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hi u updatd after a long time bt studis r vry imp to everyone na so no prblm v ll wait fr d updats nw cme to d updat d updat was really nice n d landing seq all s well seq were nice.bt d flashbck scens were quite confusing n updad d nxt pt n other storis too, tankz fr d pm

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