SwaRon SS:The feeling of being yours [FINALE CHP UP]

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Amy

@Amy21

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Posted: 10 years ago

#181

Amazing update:)
The wait fr this chapter was worth it :)
Hope to see many more ss ff from u
This one was mind blowing & nicely penned

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rosy kohli

@rosyrkohli

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#182

Finally yu updated tis n it happens to be the pm i opened from my pm dabba 😆

Very happy to read ur pm n sad too

Since i will be reading tis for the last tym

The jorney in itself was so sweet

I read sharon n swayam in a new mode

N the best part was swaron were happily married

They were enjoying themselves n to top

It all ur creativity n imagination was the strength n heart

Of tis ff it made the characters of swaron

Alive n spring wit such vibrant energy

Cuming to the last chapter i hav to say tis

It was subtle n very nyc

U broke it into sections

The first part was the proposal

It was the much awaited portion

Soft tender background the dress

Candle lit dinner it had it all

Swayam was teasing her

Playing games wit her

N then came the emotional confession

It was magical n more than perfect

The leap was sumthing tat came as

A surprise to me it was very well

Written finally they are parents n the transition

Was very well written n they hav a boy

Naughty swayam ka naughty choro

All in all a very well formed chapter

Expecting new works from u till then

Enjoy ur daal bathi ki sau 🤗

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#183

Pehle toh I'm really sorry that I couldn't read this SS before.
Quite busy with my studies.
But I read it right now all together in one go and it was fantastic.
This story has everything. Jokes, romance , fun, a little bit of drama, love.
It was hilarious as well as romantic at the same time.

The best was Swayam's favourite song- 'Bheege both tere'. 🤣
Poor Sharon.
Truly loved the chemistry between SwaRon. Well done.
Keep writing such stories. Looking forward to read them.
But only jab time milega. [:/]

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ujwal

@ujwal_v

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#184

Awww..this is soo cute...loved it..nice ending..

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sanchiswaron

@sanchiswaron

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#185

Why good things end so early :(

I'll miss this SS

Coming to update what a confession so deep ^_^

And Sharon's eagerness to hear the words from him awww

Keep writing 😃

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Nishi

@.nerfherder

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#186

And so the SS ends..
Beautiful one Chitra.. :)

Res for now :P

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Fatima

@HSFA

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#187

Beautiful...just Khoobsurat.

Everything in this chapter was just emitting love but the best thing was the confession<3

Loved their dialogues to bits. They were substantial and craftily penned.

Enjoyed it a lot. It was indeed a very special SS :)

Thanks a lot for writing it and giving us so much pleasure.

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Sakshi Shah

@sakshibshah

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#188

This was such a beautiful piece of work ya.😊

Loved it to the core.

Married Swaron. ❤️

Their bond, their teasing, light lovey dovey moments

Their confession! 👏

N epilogue ka climax was best.

Sho cutteee.

Keep writing dear!!😳

Love

Sakshi.

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Samaira

@cherry_vrushan

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#189

awesome update :-* Loved the confession :-) It was one of the most beautiful SS I have ever read :-* I m gonna miss it veryyy muchhh ^_^ Thanxxx for the PM