SwaRon SS:The feeling of being yours [FINALE CHP UP] - Page 14

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aishamathur thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Read all the updates ^_^
Loved it
Would love to read further
Update soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
Update soon please
Update soon please
Update soon please
Update soon please
Update soon please
Update soon please
Update soon please
Update soon please
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow dis ss is so damn amazing.. Do pm me as m ol thru cell getting a prob sending u a request on ur pm id
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nj_SRKholic

Wow dis ss is so damn amazing.. Do pm me as m ol thru cell getting a prob sending u a request on ur pm id

I will surely :) A reply from you was quite a pleasent surprise...i hv fell off my chirs reading ur Luv Shuv :D Iam so glad you liked the story :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
I know youguys arewaitingfor a update...But now the eagernees level is so high among all of you that whatever i m writing just doesn't seem worthyofit!Still I will try to make it Soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ..MiStLeToE..

I know youguys arewaitingfor a update...But now the eagernees level is so high among all of you that whatever i m writing just doesn't seem worthyofit!Still I will try to make it Soon!

You write so good it doesn't feel that you write bad I can bear anything you write 😊
You are a superb writer and all your work is so blissful to read
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Posted: 10 years ago
First things first.I apoplogize very sincerely for not updating this SS.Its been really long I know. . .I was stuck with the content.I really am sorry for this superlate update.Now,coming to the uodate again I am sorry because it didn't turn out to be what I thought it would.I have no idea how is it. . .Hopefully it will be likeable if not lovable.That is what I pray for right now.Next thing is this update is dedicated to Khizar_SWARON.Okay,Now off you go with the update.
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"Baby"
"Jana"
"Listen na"
"Please"
"You are my cuteheart na"
"Swayam please. . .I am sad now"
Her emotional card has worked.Her cellphone beeped and she read the message.
"Awww. . .My Sweetheart. . .Good Try!But I am not melting -_-
After almost fifty messages Swayam has replied and that too this. . .Sharon pouted in front of her cellphone.
This is not good at all'She thought to herself.Her husband cum boyfriend for now was certainly not easy to handle.She frowned trying to think to think of a way which can calm him down.
Sharon grumped at Swayam's mood.Swayam was angry.It was not her fault totally.What actually happened is Swayam knew her too well.Before marriage Sharon belonged to a joint family in Jaipur being the most lovable bacha of all.But after getting married to Swayam her lifestyle totally changed. . .She moved to Bangalore with Swayam.She was not used to living in such quiet atmosphere but gradually she adapted herself with Swayam being her support all the time.Swayam knew it will be difficult for Sharon to live alone so he requested his mom dad to visit Sharon while he was away.Sharon never knew about it and was too happy to see her in-laws in her home.She hasn't been able to spend time with them before as they lived in Delhi.She was chatting with her mom when suddenly she realized Swayam had asked her to stay online at 2p.m. and it was 3 already.She completely forgot about it and now after waiting for an whole hour he was angry with her.
IN SWEDEN
"Wow!Mom Dad mil gaye toh mujhe bhul hi gayi. . .Ek ghante se wait kar raha hun aur Sharon baton mein busy thi. . .Bilkul baat nahi karunga usse ab"Swayam was pacing across his room talking to himself.
His cellphone beeped and opened to see her message.
"Heart Shaped Sticker"
"Broken Heart Shaped Sticker" "Sad Face"
"Crying Face"
"Please Swayam. . .Sorry na. . ."
A smile broke on his lips slowly. . .His heart melted.He had been waiting all day to talk to her.He couldn't feed his anger any longer anymore.He immediately arranged the video call.
"Pheww. . .Finally"Sharon said breath.
Swayam rolled his eyes impassively.
"Gussa ho?"
"Thoda sa. . ."
"Sorry"
Swayam smiled widely and sent her a flying kiss infecting her with an equally wide smile on her lips.
"Tumne kitna wait karwaya Sharon. . .Abhi yeh haal hai shadi ke baad toh tum meri taraf dekhogi bhi nahi"Swayam said slipping in his boyfriend mode.
"Acha?AApko...Err..I mean tumhe aisa lagta hai?"Sharon said correcting herself.Swayam had asked her not to call her "Aap" as he was his boyfiend for the time being.
"Acha?Aisa nahi hai kya?"Swayam said
"Bilkul nahi. . .
"Acha toh phir kaisa hai?"Swayam asked with a glint of excitement in his voice.
"Tum is laptop ke is taraf aayenge toh main btaun ki kaisa hai"
Swayam's eyes widened in disbelief.NAUGHTY SHARON.Now this was something new.He has never seen this side of hers.Either it was the Girlfriend' talking or the distance between them was making her brave he didn't know but he was enjoying this.
"Acha agar main vahan hota toh tum kya karti?"Swayam asked in full mood to take the convo forward.
"Agar aap. . ."
"Sharon. . ."Swayam stopped her sternly.
"Tum. . .Tum. . .Agar tum yahan hote toh main kya karti ye janne ke liye toh tumhe yahan hona padega"Sharon winked at him and Swayam's jaws dropped on the floor.
"Mujhe lagta hai mujhe vahin hona chahiye. . .Shit Yaar!"Swayam banged his fist in his other hand totally disappointed.
Sharon couldn't hold herself back and broke into fits of laughter.Swayam just stared at her laughing face. . .So beautiful,so carefree,so lovable.
"Sharon. . ."
Sharon stopped laughing hearing the edge in his voice and looked at his staring intense eyes which made her shiver as if he was here just standing close to her.
"Main tumse kuch kehna chahta hun. . ."Swayam said slowly.
Sharon read his eyes and said trying to control her racing heartbeats
"Abhi nahi Swayam. . .Ek pal bhi aur intezaar mahi kar paungi aur aap mujhse abhi kaafi mile dur hain. . .Bus do din aur. . .phir main aapko kahin jaane nahi dungi. . .Bahut besabri se aapka intezaar kar rahi hun Swayam. . ."
"Main bhi Sharon. . .Main bhi"Swayam said looking at her intently through his laptop.
Sharon smiled and said "MR.Boyfriend Sleep. . .I am waiting for your in your dreams.Baki baatein vahan karein?"
"What?Sapno mein bhi baatein?Bilkul nahi. . .Tumhe koi idea nahi hai Sharon mere sapno mein hum kya kya karte hain"Swayam winked.
"Swayammm. . ."Sharon turned red with embarrasent not able to hide her blush.
"Goodnight. . .Mujhe aapse baat nahi karni"Sharon said AND Swayam immediately replied "Mujhe bhi"
Sharon's eyes widened and blood rose to her cheeks just thinking about his double meaning lines and she shut the lappy.She looked at mirror. . .her reflection all red. . .That is the effect her husband sorry her boyfriend has on her she thought and hid her face in the pillow.
"Two more days Sharon"Swayam said standing on the window gazing the stars.
"Two more days Swayam"Sharon caressed his pic and hugged it.
Please leave your reviews.Thank You.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Yay!u updated.
This one was
such a cute update
.iam so liking the 'girlfriend' sharon.
Waiting to read wat happens next.
Thnx for the pm.
N update next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
RES
UNRES
Wowiee👏

Finally u updated😃

If u havent updated in 2-3 days😡

I was gonna kill u😡

We have waited already 2 much😭

N this was worth waiting👏

😃Totally😃

Amazing👏

Loved it 2 d core😃

It was a vert sweet n cuet part😳

Swayam angry on her😆

Sharon manofing him😃

Awww😃

So cuet😃

Swayam easily maan gaya😆

He cant control himself😃

He is d sweetest bf ever 😃

He cares so much about sharon😃

He tell his parents 2 be der with sharon😃

So tat she doesnt feel lonely😊

At last sharon manofy him😃

The video chat i loved d most😳

N OMG sharon has become so naughty😆

Even i wonder its distance or sharon😆

Very well penned👏

Always love dis sharon😃

He was going 2 say😃

Bt she stopped him😭

This 2 day😊

Hope jaldi khatam ho jaye ye 2 din😃

N they meet😃

N they confess😃

Kab hoga ye sab???😃

Dii I wana know😳

Update d next part supersoon😊

Mind u dis time supersoon😡

Varna i can do anything😡

N thankx fr d PM😊

Lots of Love❤️

Mansi😊
Edited by Mansi98 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awww this part is so cute ^_^ waiting for next update... Please update soon..

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