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Posted: 10 years ago
nice meet... the was happiness...

but khushi mask it...

arnav knows she is lying...

khushi is still suffering from depression...

arnav just cant seem to hold his emotions...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Arnav keep seeing different khushi...

with akash . with arnav father... and with gautam

almost kiss...

both crazy about each other...

interesting update



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: kondhili

I think its about time that Arnav comes to know the real identity of khushi...its not fair that he is the only one from the raizada clan who doesn't know about the problems that his beloved shashi uncle faced.

Looking forward to that day. Thanks for the pm


Totally agree with this... i want Arnav to know her truth real soon now ! Having him around is going soothe her much more than doctors , medicines and even family ! Though i also feel that there must be some reason why you have kept him in the dark for so long ..you must have planned some thing explosive for that revelation !
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loving this story dear. Finally read all chapters. Initially felt a bit confusing with villains on all sides. But I like the story and each of the characters. All of them feel to us in flesh and blood :)

But one suggestion though, so many villains have a chance of killing the story. The mystery of Raheja not being the murderer but someone else is a good suspense and I can already connect the dots.


But more villains esp from Raizada's side too makes me a little wary. Also the informer, Sam so many mysteries seems a bit too much.


Do try to balance the story and maintain its lusture amidst all this. I do love the story :)


The only two characters I did not like is Kushi and Garima because of their nature to be God themselves and decide that they are doomed and 'protect' their loved ones thereby punishing those very loved ones. What she deprived Shashi and Kushi and Pari of is unforgivable. Raheja seems to be a cowardly fellow, yet Garima succumbed to his threats and spoiled not just her life but 3 other lives. What has it reaped at the end? Was her family safe? NO. Pari lost her life, Kushi became such a lifeless soul and Shashi who yearned for many things still remains unfulfilled. Kushi has the same traits of Garima now. I wish she becomes the strong girl who decided to live life to the fullest rather than commit her mother's same mistake.


I know Arnav won't be Shashank at any cost. I have trust in him. But it would be even better if Kushi on her own take this decision because she deserves respect unlike Garima. Please do make her do that at the end.
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Posted: 10 years ago
A thrilling story . It has everything,suspence romance ,prank
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update . Read the past 3 updates together. Arnav understood Kushi's fears at once. And looks like Laad Governor started dreaming already.
Looks like there are more than one villain. Hope they don't damage more.
And all in Arnav's family knows abt Kushi & not Arnav :( Please make Shashank come soon & tell the truth to him .Waiting for next update.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Dear Readers,

Before proceeding to the teaser for the next chapter, do go through this note.

Many of you readers had questioned me as to why Arnav was being kept in dark about Khushi's reality. These were the few points that I considered (in no particular order) while drafting past few chapters:

  • It is just 3 days (though it covers from chapters 5-12) since Arnav and Khushi have met each other and the interaction between them is minimal to talk about anything substantial other than official stuff.
  • No one anticipates such bad situation to arise and since it was more than 6 months they had any news with regard to the murders. Hence members of both the families have let the matter in Shashank's hand.
  • I wanted to establish a good if not at least a moderate level of comfort between Arnav, Khushi & the children, before he could know that Khushi is his long lost friend and her difficulties. If this level of comfort arises after their identities are disclosed, then this wonderful budding relationship can be mis-interpreted (especially by Khushi) as the one arising due to pity or just in the name of their parent's friendship. I certainly don't want that to happen.
  • Besides, we as readers can know that Arnav is the only one who could soothe Khushi and not anyone else. So we can't expect the family to know about them so early.
  • Another crucial thing is Arnav is not completely aloof to Khushi's distressed state, if anything he can feel her pain and surely wants to help her, despite their very limited interactions. The Mc Donald's incident is an example for that.
  • My intention was certainly not to make Khushi suffer alone, while Arnav is totally ignorant to her pain. I apologize for this lack of peripheral vision for giving out such notions in the chapter.
  • And yes Arnav will be livid when the truth comes out. But I think we can wait for his response.
  • Some characters in this FF will have their entry & exit points after their work is done. I will certainly not keep them, unnecessarily dragging this FF with pointless updates.

Hope these have clarified many of the doubts. I really like when my wonderful readers point out the loops, and I do enjoy replying them as well. Well here is the teaser for the next chapter, which will be up by tomorrow night.

Cheers

Radhvi :)

Teaser

Chapter -13 Shocks & Surpries

Monday Morning Gupta Nivas

"So packed your lunch box? And breakfast? Are you skipping it?" asked Payal

"Oh ho jiji, I've packed my lunch box and for breakfast, I'll have it in office canteen," said Khushi.

Payal nodded at that and Khushi after getting ready kissed her nieces and jiji good bye and started for office at around 6:45 am.

Shanthivan (around 6:30 am)

"Chote, then your breakfast?" asked a concerned Ratna.

"No worries Ma, I'll have something in the canteen. Just inform dad about it. He was in shower when I went to inform him," replied Arnav and drove off to his office, totally unaware what this day would present to him.

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Posted: 10 years ago
loved your note
canteen mein pyaarr..la la la la la la
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Posted: 10 years ago
waiting for them to have breakfast together..

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