DDBEDS- KRIYAANSH FF updated part 10 - Page 23

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
demand gonna get over of d writer
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Posted: 10 years ago
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luv u guyz tiger & cutipie
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Posted: 10 years ago
oh jaani... M so**y vo mai late ho gayi...
But good work... Congo
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Posted: 10 years ago

Part 10

Rey: hello

Ran: rey beta how are you. How is kriya and the rest?

Rey: everyone is fine dad. And this place is awesome.

Ran:haha m glad you guys liked it. Well you guys enjoy I'm not going to disturb you any further. Take care bye.

Rey: bye dad.

Swa: rey I think we should get going the girls will be up soon.

Rey: yah let's go.

They returned to the room. Sharon was already up and was now eating the left over breakfast. Swayam went to her and they did their uhm lovey dovey things while rey took some meds and glass of water with a sandwich and went to his room.

Once in the room he put down the stuff he brought on the table. Kriya was slowly waking up. Stretching herself. She sat up straight coughed a few times and held her head. Rey came to sit infront of her and to make her state even worse he messed up her hair with his hand.

Rey: good morning oops afternoon miss sleepyhead.

Kr: ugh reeyy my head hurts what happened last night?

Rey: I will tell you that later first you go and fresh up then eat your breakfast and then take those meds you will feel better.

Kri: fine. With that kriya got up and walked to the washroom when.

Rey: hey you want me to help? Rey said smirking. When kriya turned around he winked at her. While she glared at him then turn back around and went into the bathroom.

Rey: sorry for asking.

After an hour kriya came out of the bathroom wearing shorts with a white loose tee and saw rey sitting on the bed watching tv,

she took the sandwich meds and water from the table then sat next to rey and started to eat.

Kr: so tell me what happened yesterday

Rey: well actually I should ask you that. Why did you drink so much. Leave that why did u even decided to go clubbing.

Kr: uhm I dunno I just was in the mood for that. But pleaseee tell me I didn't do anything stupid pleaseee

Rey: naah you didn't.

Kr: thank god.

Rey: you only called me a pig when I picked you up and carried you to the room and youo sang with a really awful voice.

Kr: I DID WHAT? Please tell me that is all I did.

Rey: oh and when I came to the club to get you, you were saying something like good friends don't hug like that. That's it.. soo what was that about.

Kr:ooh uhmm I don't remember she said not looking in his eyes. Then rey made her take the meds.

Rey: ab bolo kriya kya baat hai.

Kriya:who.. rey last night .. I uhm saw you and taani.. at the poolside hugging.. and pata nahi kya hua mujhe . For a moment I just felt insecure. But it's not that I don't trust you cause I do I trust you a lot more than myself..

Rey: shhh kriya there's nothing to worry about it was just a friendly hug nothing more.

Kriya: yeahh I know m sorry for being the stupid over possessive girlfriend.

Rey: hey dare you say anything against my possessive wife ok! kriya smiled and hugged rey.

Kri: I love you rey

Rey: I love you too sweetheart. Chal m going to make some coffee you want some?

Kri: hmm yah sure.

Rey; k I'll be back with that rey kissed her shoulder and left. When he came back he found the room empty. After a lot of looking around he spotted her on the terrace. He made his way too her and handed her, her coffee and then hugged her from behind.

Kri: where's your coffee.

Rey: I didn't want.

Kri: ooh.. swayam and Sharon kahan pe hai?

Rey: I dunno I think they went out.

Kri:hhmmm they we're just silent enjoying their view when an idea popped up in kriya's mind. She took a sip from her coffee and then spit it out.

Rey: kriya kriya kya hua.

Kri: reyy this coffee is bitter.

Rey: what? U sure then rey took a sip from it but everything seems gud to him.

Rey: kriya this coffe isn't bitter it's sweet.

Kri: really? She took back the mug and took a sip from exactly the same place where rey did.

Kri: ooh yah you're right now it is.

Rey: kya baat hai somebody is in a romantic mood today.

Kri: today only??

Rey: tu bhi na... ok batao what do you wanna do today?

Kri: uhmmm is there a dance studio here kya?

Rey: yah there is why?

Kri: I wanna go there and dance with u pleaaseee

Rey :ofcourse let's go.

They left to the studio. ( imagine them as rey and kriya ) link

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End s***y md that's all I could do for now.

Hell tired and lappy battery low.

Doo like and comment guys.

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Posted: 10 years ago
ress

ye res kabi unres nai hoga shan...

Huhuhuhahaha...😛 🤣 😆
Edited by --megs_arsha-- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Res
Unres

Cute update
Rey taking care of kria
Edited by don girls - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
res
wdh*
itna chottu
mra demand
now i will not going 2 do unres
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update...continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome part ❤️ Loved it taani Kill her hubby 😲 Kria drunk 😛 update asap

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