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Posted: 11 years ago
rashiii🤢
this update wass freaking awsmmm
damnn yaar i loved ittt
and their terms and conditions were fab
and then the kisss hayeee
the way u described that kiss thingg
holy shittt me mar gaye deaddd🤢
the way u wrote u were fab rashiii
i love the wayy u writeee👏
lekin ek doubt rey tho hate kria righttt then how he kissed herrr😆
kria ko dekh ke control nhn hua hoga lolll😆
update next part super soon
waitinggg
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Posted: 11 years ago
Okay, I'm so sorry for the delay! I have these tests going on, and I just can't find time to write! Please understand people, its not that I don't want to, its just that I can't! I hope you guys understand.

Chapter 5


Several days later :

The colours were talking to him.. again. He sat on the stool, colouring the portrait in front of him, he had a little vision, a vivid memory of his childhood, when he used to sit in his classroom, listening to all the different voices that went around in the room, noises had never bothered him, they still didn't.

Joeys voice was deep red,
Alexandra's voice was ocean blue,
His teachers voice was dark green,
his mothers voice was pale beige,
his fathers voice was shallow black

A smile touched his lips as he thought about his childhood. Kriya's voice is a blunt shade of velvet. He thought. He was engrossed in colours, loving the way his life was extremely similar to them, he needed to give his life composure, a settlement and then he would outline his perfectly painted life with some romance. He smiled.

It had been three days since he had last seen her, she didn't even talk to him anymore. he wondered whether it was because what had happened between them, that night, and when he did ask her, she said she was just busy.

He couldn't even get a chance to look at her anymore, and although he did tell himself that it was completely senseless to think about someone he had met a numbered days ago, he could not deny the fact, that he did miss her. Unknowingly he started picturing her in his mind, and his brush seemed to move in right how he intended to, the curve of her eyes, with an enormous pale colour of globe glowing.

And before he could realize, his brush was already painting her.

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It had been a havoc for her, the previous days have been a havoc for her, either she had paperwork, or files, or presentations, or all of them. She had no time for America's Next Top Model, or Rey, and although she had told herself that it was utterly useless and completely insane, she still found herself missing him.

She switched on the lights of the hall, and loosened her tie. She had enough to think about, and still one little tiny corner of her mind was conquered by him. The headache was terrible, all she needed was some tablets of disprins and bed. She did not even wish to have supper.

And yet, it did not fail to catch her eye, it was right there, placed in front of the Sofa, it seemed so real, that you could just expect it to start talking any moment now. She was studying the painting, when it was about time that her attention was caught by something else.

He stepped into the kitchen, making himself some coffee, he wanted to ask her, but his adamant pride did not allow him.

"Why did you draw my picture?" she asked

He did not bother to reply.

"I asked something" she again said "Why did you paint my picture?"

She was getting to his nerves, "It's my will, my wish, why do you care?"

Edited by Painted_Sky - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
ego i tell u...
is best nd worst friend at the same tym...
he is missing her...this is enough to make me dance ..lyk seriously he is missing her...whom he is planning to throw out!!!!...😆
he painted her . like HER...ab to i will sing too...
bechara thinking she is nt talking coz of that night...bt she herself was equally involved...wasnt she???
poor girl...she is missing him too...
i hv danced nd sang already...now what...okay i will do them together...😆
so she saw it...o..oo...
problem...i loved it where u showed rey's insight...nt exactly bt still..jo bi tha...it was beautiful...
reading the story till now...i realised its mainly abt rey's beasty thoughts...bt give 1 or 2 parts which can reflect abt kriya...
overall i loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
b.d.w atleast edit the title...logo ko pata kese chalega that their highness has updated??
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Posted: 11 years ago
Aww they're missing one another!
but their ego is in between
I like how he automatically started painting her whilst thinking about her!
Rey saw her looking at the painting ^_^ but again their ego!!
Loving this story though, Update soon!
Edited by shelly_Arsha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Reserved.

Promise to unreserve tmr.Exhausted today.

Unreserved.

You are a pure genius you know that?

Like an artist who spins tales out of precisely thin air.

I absolutely loved the interpretations of the colours in Rey's paintings.

Kriya's voice was like velvet.Ugh,you make a tremble with that line.Its just truly intense.

Once your mind is preoccupued with something,you have to vent it out in some way or the other to actually start thinking straight again.Same was the case with Rey.

Its a drabble.Its meant to be short.Yet you manage to invoke so many emotions in me with such few words.

Just so amazing.Keep writing!

Love,
K
Edited by So_Naley - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow amazing.
it seems to get better and better.
love the way you write.
the ego it is always that comes in between.
but the chapter was perfect.
if the ego would not be in this kind of story then it won't be any fun
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ahhh Rashii I love you for this Update like he seriously painted her *-* Missing her and thinks that she is ignoring him because of tat night but she herself was so busy & then she saw it Ahhh I loved it and Update soon:*
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Posted: 11 years ago
What a story it is 👍🏼...
N Rishu u stood up to 'My Beasty Thoughts' 😉 😆...

Rey ki Mom is so good at making selections , apne Bete ki GFs ka , tabhi toh Kria ko choose kiya 😉...

I think , just think k agar shuru mein Rey ne thori politeness dikhai hoti toh abhi yeh story kuch aur hoti 😆...
But these two & their 'Egos' with a Capital 'E' , Aram se toh kuch hota he nai inse...
Verbal abusing tak pohanch gaye , Hai koi haal inka...

Then Rey ka badla lene ka style toh bohat he interesting tha 😉 But bechare pe ulta par gaya 😆...
How hazir dimag (Alert) she is ...

3 din se jhagra nai kiya toh picture paint kar dali , Wow!!!

I seriously am loving this story ❤️...
Your doing good at this writing thing 😉...

-Love
Ur's Miss. Boy-Hater ❤️

P.S : I think u should read the 'Book' , u will get more of these sort of ideas , If u know what i mean 😉 🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thnk God U updated...

Its been long since last update...

Waise main yaha pe tuje yaad dilane ke liye aayi thi ki update kar de...

Buh yaha aayi toh dekha toh tune update kiya tha...

Jaa maaf kiya...coz U said U had tests...cant say anything against it...

Comming to the update...

Dis was a lovely chappy...

U made my day seriously...

KriYaansh missing each others presence...

Dats the most ausome thing...

Ego...wanna talk but this ego doesnt let U...

Painted her picture...OMG...Dats nice...

Batayega nai kis liye paint kiya...??

Chalo dekhte hai kaise convo hota hai inka...

Write soon...

Love Aditi...

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