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Posted: 11 years ago
Ohhh Freak...

What was dat...

How come Rey was lingering over her lips...

N what she did next shocked me...

She kissed him...I mean lirerary...

Rash...Are they actually Flatmates...???

Nooo Nooo Nooo...I doubt...n I really doo...!!

He was supposed to shock her by the conditions...

Buh the situation turned upside down...She shocked him...hehehehe...

Waise I am shocked tooo...To see a PM from U sooo sooon...

Do write soon...

Love Aditi...
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Posted: 11 years ago
This was freaking awesome Super update Rashi Omg they kissed hehe to gud update great going love it Thanx for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Painted_Sky

I know I'm updating super early, but that's because I'm really disappointed with the way the last chapter came out. Enjoy! :)

Chapter 4

He bit back a chuckle, looking at her reactions. Oh how she would pay! He thought. She was proud and unforgiving, but the truth was that she excited him, there was something about her, something which was different from other women. He had never known someone like her before, and even though she had beauty and she teased the sexual animal within him every single day, he knew that she had brains too, and there was something she had, which the other girls did not. She had earned herself a sense of dignity from him.

"Thank you for finally proving that you got some brains" she remarked, making herself comfortable on the plush sofa. He was shirtless and his built up torso was visible, and when he was out of her sight she finally realized that she was holding her breath.

"Never mind" he muttered then continued "Term 1: You'll do the cooking, and I'll handle laundry"

"Why will I do the cooking? Let's pick alternate days to cook" she reasoned.

"I don't know, You're a girl afterall" he shrugged

"So?" she spoke "Does that mean that I was born to sit in the kitchen all day?"

"Never mind" he muttered then continued "Mondays, Wednesdays, and Fridays. I'll be cooking"

"Cool. About TV, I'll be watching America's next top model 8-9 everyday, and on Sundays, marathons" she spoke out "are we cle-"

He interrupted "What! No! 8:30-9 Is Big Bang theory time"

"Record it then" she walked away, proceeding back to her room.

He suddenly called out "What about the girls? Can I bring them while you're here?"

"Sure" she said then continued "Just not against their will"

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It was late and dark when she felt something on herself, her first reaction was to scream, yet when she later realized what it was, she could not bring herself to speak anything. "Rey-"

His lips moved slowly on her jawline, tingling her raw skin as they did so, before she could speak anything, his lips were on hers, but there was no kiss, he just bit her lip, and licked her bottom lip, it was about time when she was asking for more, the desires slowly crawled up to the front as he licked her lip, it was about time when she started realizing that maybe something which was always taught to her as a sin' was close to being delicious and passionate.

She craved for more, but knew how stubborn he was. He bit the slight end of her upper lip and spoke, his voice seemed to come out in a bare hush "That's for calling me an asshole"

he parted away, and it was about time when she pulled him into a kiss, she was harsh but desiring, soft but passionate, and tough but gentle, when he had begun replying in the same intensity as hers, her lips moved down his neck, in the manly skin of his, she left a hickey down his neck, and smiled when she heard him let out a little moan and then quickly suppress it. She then, parted away and spoke "and that's what you get for calling me a bitch"

It wasn't late when he was pushed away from her, but the smirk on his face grew wider. God damn! This girl was definitely something.


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So. its a kind of long chapter right? considering the fact that I post terribly short updates xD

Well Well, how was this chapter?

I hope you guys like it! (:

Rashi xx

loved it..

kiss... :*

amazing
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Posted: 11 years ago
Well first of all really sorry for not reviewing last chapter though o read but to say it was interesting and awesome and now coming to this chapter well the Conditions are interesting :p ;) and the last part their Kiss Ahhh and she is craving for more bumy just the touch of his lips Ahhh I am loving it ... And yeah this is preety long than other parts :p ...Thanks for the PM do update soon :* :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG... Ohk...
Tat was a really intresting update...
The kis was totally unexpected!!!!
Wonder wats next... Continue soon !!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
I loved the story... 🤗

main toh 2 chappy's ka soch k aayi thi ... but realized ki tune 2 aur likh liye... 😳

n index bhi update nhi kiya... grrr 😵

haha... rey ki mom toh mast h... khud hi gals le kar aati h gf banane k liye... maa ho to aisi... 😆 👍🏼

lol... rey is so mean... bags pack kar k bahar rakh diye... he is an a**hole ... 😡

rofl... kriya know where to hit ... MOM ... police se kaun darta h re... 🤣

terms n conditions ... as if she wanted to follow them the same way... 😛

omg... ye rey pe kaunsa bhoot chadha h... aadhi raat ko hamla ... 😲 ☺️

kriya is no less... now there starts the Romantic entanglement ... 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
I loving d way story is going...
Kriya is so damn good.. the way she answers back. . ..
I loved how they both took revenge. .
I mean seriously he licked her lips n she kissed him...
Update soon ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
So! Finally I make it to this place. See I do keep my promises, unlike you.

Anyways. I have already read it. There's nothing like I didn't know about it. But there are certain things I wanted to point out.

Warning: No offence intended.

Well, there's one thing that's a bit weird to me. It's like, If Rey doesn't want to follow his mother's terms and conditions, he can surely go ahead and choose his path. He is a GROWN UP. He is an Adult. So for me there's a problem of his mentality. I mean he doesn't seem to be strong enough, mentally to tackle things of his life. Either he is financially weak, in case of independent individual, or he lacks that confidence. Because financial shortage can be met, if there's a will to do so. But emotional and mental shortcomings can not.

Also, with this thing you can highlight his growth. In terms of mental stability, boost of confidence, ready to face the world, struggle and make his own identity. And finally live on his own terms and conditions, without having a third party interference in his life. {{You see, I have hinted you one way, where you can lead the story to.}}

About the other one wherein they discussed the terms and conditions, I would suggest even after having these T&Cs laid down, you should make an attempt to showcase the various phases of living together, even if you are not willing to. I mean, how people forcibly get together and stay. And what are the various things they need to compromise over.

Like a small fight over the remote, Leaving some unfinished work and then being bombarded for it.. and so on. {{sab main hi bata dungi toh tu kya karegi?}}

That's all from my side, I still have a lot to write. Oops! Type ;)

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Posted: 11 years ago
Taming The Wild Lust.! SanDhir FF.
It is awesome story wise. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Give it a try if you get some time. :P
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow amazing.
what started as a fight ended up into a make out.
a typical bad boy story but here the girl is not a goody good as well.
amazing.
i had expected them to be modern but they toh redefined the meaning of the world itself.
emotions of a being young really showed perfectly.

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