Will you be my Girlfriend??? arsha TS (last part on pg 12) - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
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eagerly waiting fr next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Kab milega update
Kitna wait karwana hai

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Posted: 10 years ago
#63
Hey! Im new here but i hav read most of the TSs etc etc... this is my favourite one both the teaser and the 1st part pls pls pls pls update as soon as possible im waiting desperately for it 😳😳😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Vinnie999

Hey! Im new here but i hav read most of the TSs etc etc... this is my favourite one both the teaser and the 1st part pls pls pls pls update as soon as possible im waiting desperately for it😳😳😛


thanx...
Update may be in january...
My xams are starting from 28/11.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#65

Last part

Al- v mean r u guys over with ur talks...

Host- guys even hum log b hai...

Ra- even contestants, judges n ur fans (at this time audience hoots for them)

Shan- (to hosts) pls don't mind guys in dono ka har bar ka yahi hai...

Vr- jab b dono saath hote hai or sabko bhul jaate hai...

Pr- or ek doosre mein kho jaate hai...

Host- really...

Mac- yes... v r used to it...

(all this time our arsha were blushing n smiling at the same time n were trying to hide it by shooting daggers on the gang... )

(at this time remo intrupts them...)

Re- arey guys ye kuch naya nai hai in dono ka...

Madh- what do u mean remo...

Re- ye dono humesha ek doosre ki company mein khoye rehete hai...

Inki har performance mein ek alag type ki chemistry hoti hai... jo inhe best dancing partner bana deti hai...

Ka- really...

Re- yup...

Madh- fir tou humein inka ek romantic dance dekhna hai...

Re- haan tou karenge na...

(he winks at amar which goes un notice by shakti but not by others...)

Host- yes judges issi baat pe ek performance tou banta hai...

Come on guys...

Sha- but...

Am- Its okay sir hum perform karenge...

Ma- tou good... Tum log jaldi se apni performance k liye ready ho jao...

Arsha- okay...

After 5 minutes

Madh(to arsha)- so guys ready...???

Am- hum tou always ready hai...(winks)

Ma- so girls n boys... apni sasein tham k baith jaiye...

Ra- kyunki aab apke samne do aise insaan perform karne aa rahe hai... jo aise dance karte hai jaise...

Ma- jaise do jism or...

Ra- ek jaan ho... Inki performance itni intense or romantic hoti hai ki...

Ma- aap log sirf ek he baat kahenge...

Host n judges n contestants- kya baat...! kya baat...! kya baat...!

Host- so presenting before you the most passionate, the most romantic n the most intense performance...

Link of performance on khuda jaane

After performance

As the performance ended they both sat down on their feet, staring in each other's eyes... Lost... No care about the small world around them...

Their staring session was broken by the loud applause of each n every person present in the studio...

They instantly broke apart n came forward to bow in front of the audience n judges...

Madh- seriously guys u both are the best couple... awesome performance...

You guys killed it... It was ppperfect...

(arsha were jumping after listening to her comments)

Kjo- block buster performance... your chemistry was out of this world... I loved it... ek dum magical performance tha...

Re- aab mai kya kahun...(he stands up n say) this is it...! It was magical...

(arsha starts jumping...)

Re- okay now amar tou fir start karein tumhara most important kaam(air quoting the word most important)

Sh- kya kaam...???

Re- tumhare liye he hai... Miss shakti...

Sh- kya kaam sir...???

Ma- so kunwar jo karne aaye ho vo karoge...???

(shaks looked at manish with a anger filled)

Ma- kya hua shakti...??

Am- tumne mujhe kunwar bulaya na...

Ma- tou...???

Am- tou...

Sha- tou isse sirf mai kunwar bulati hoon... koi or nai bula sakta...

Samjhe...

Ma- ohhh...! I see... fine fine...

Tou amar aab aaj ka main kaam jo karne aaye the vo tou kar lo...

Am- haan karta hoon...

(manish gets down from the stage n now only spot light on)

Sh- kya kaam...??

Am- shhh...!!!

(Amar kneels down in front of shakti n speaks...)

Am- shakudi mujhe samajh nai aa raha ki mai kya bolun or kaise bolun lekin fir b mai bolna chahata hoon... isleye mai iss baat ko zyada confusing nai karunga or directly point pea a raha hoon...

Dekho shakudi mujhe pata hai ki tum bhi mujh se utna he pyaar karti ho jitna mai tum se karta hoon(his these words were like a thunder hitting her, she was all shock. She was like WHAT kunwar loves me...)

Isleye bina zyada nakhre dikhaye mera proposal accept kar lo...

Sh- kunwar...

Am- haan Ms. Shakti Mohan Sharma, I love you... I love you only...

Sh- kunwar...

Am- kunwar nai shakudi... I love you too bolo...

Sh- kun...(amar interrupts)

Am- suno aab jaise jaise mai bol raha hoon vaise vaise bolo... Samjhi...

Sh- hmm...

Am- I

Sh- I

Am- love

Sh- love

Am- you

Sh- you

(she speaks all this lost in his eyes)

Am- I love you too shakti...(and pulls her in a hug)

Sh- I love you kunwar...(she says all this still hugging him)

(suddenly shakti breaks the hug n says)

Sh- kunwar agar you love me... Then what about Charlie...???

Am- Charlie... usko maro goli...

(shakti smiles wide on his this statement)

Sh- I love you kunwar...

Am- I love you too meri jaan...(n picks her up in a bridal form n twirls)

********THE END********

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Unres

1st of all belated happy bday didz👏
God bless u wid many mre ideas taki hume aise stories read karne milte rahe😉

Finally ...!!!!!!😃
Apne update kar diya😲
Awww it ws a cute ts😳

perfect ending
Aisa kuch real life me hota toh...

Meko saare dialogues acche lage👏

we r used to nw😉😆
bichari gang

Dat kya baat kya baat kya baat😛
DID ki yaad aa gai😳

Amar ko sirf me hi kunwar bulati hu😳❤️

Ab zaada nakhre mat kar n mera proposal accept kar😃

n nt to forget
usko maaro goli🤣

n last bt nt d least
I love u😳
I love u too😳
N I love u meri jaan😳

I jst want ki ab arsha ek dusre ko yeh bole

Amazinggg ts
Loved it

Ab jaldi jaldi apne saare stories ke update do

N pm me plzz
Love u🤗



-Radz
Edited by foramradhika - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#67
It was superb
Really perfect ending

U write fab

Loved it to the core

Luv u
Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
#68
beautiful ts👏
lovedd itt very much😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#69
I loved the story
It was really beautiful and outstanding
Great work megs
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Posted: 10 years ago
#70
Awesome story megs...
Loved it...
Kaash jhalak me aisa actually hota...
But never mind...I just wish kabhi toh ArSha ek dusre ye kahe ki I love you...
N voh charlie KO maro goli... 🤣I loved it..
Hope this becomes the reality someday...
Great job...👏
N thanks for pm..

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