ArShi FF: Tending The Scorched #2 : Thread 3 added (14.04.15) - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
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Threat works, eh? The update is finally here.
Edited.

Yeah...he decided to embrace it, and what an intimate embrace. *dancing like a fool*.
But yeah that embrace spoke volumes, the moment he decided and before he uttered his subconscious knew it and the way he played the song out loud not carrying for any propriety shows what a child he himself is. What all had been snatched from him at such tender age! when he should have been living care free! and growing making mistakes and learning! he assumed the responsibility as the head of the family.

He moment he heard the laughter of his sister, her carefree tinkling laughter, he himself felt carefree that let the slip of tough mask and that's what Khushi saw in his eyes and on his face, his vulnerability without any barrier. And Khushi did the best she could, giving. Her strength to him through that embrace. Letting him know that she is with him every step of the way and everything will be alright.

I agree with her reasons of not telling Arnav yet. And giving him time to heel and be himself before he accepts a new relation in his life. But at the same time Arnav is leaving everything on the time and going with the flow. Loved the scene between Payal and Khushi, the caught thief. Yeah Khushi I the child and Payal is her mother when they are not doctors and CEO and CCO of AAGH.

Arnav's care free laughter, smiles, chortle, chuckles, smiling eyes and all those things while Payal's nd Khushi's argument was being played brought the relaxation to Anjali that what all she has been doing to her family. She wasn't just killing herself, punishing herself, but her first son Arnav, was taking away the happiness and peace of her family along with hers.

Finally with the shedding of all the tears and talking there heart out Anjali and Arnav were able to remove most of the burden from there wounded hearts, those a tears help them cleansing the wounds. Now with new determination by both brother and sister of not losing themselves anymore to the pain and hurt, they will be able to heal. And there partners will help them him, with or without there knowing.

P.S. You changed my stalking day from Tuesday to Wednesday. No problem, I'm a good stalker. Off to LNB, for stalking. *my stalking hat and glasses on*.
Edited by rk2127 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
As always amazing...loved the light moments...glad the raizada duo coming back to life...khushi and payal are truly angels <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
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That was a transformation caused by Khushi with the help of Payal! Tending the scorched indeed!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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super awesome update..happy update..!!!!
so arnav has finally decided to embrace his life with his khushi..!!!
and from that moment he is coming back to his old self... playing music loud not caring about his surroundings..!!!
after seeing his sister's laughter on her face his happiness has no boundary..!!!!!!
finally his sister is coming out of her shelf..!!!
khushi saw this vulnerability and embrace him with all things she have..!!!1
what an intimate embrace...lovely..!!!!1 and he too lean on her shoulder taking strenght from her..!!!!
the scene between araul.. khushi and payal was too cute..!!!!1
arnav laughs like this after ages..!!!!
these all things bring lost happiness in RM...!!!
these two angles are in their life.. i m wondering where is ria right now..!!!
what will be her reaction..!!!
the reunion between bro and sis is so heart warming..!!!!
anjali realized her mistake and is all set to correct it..!!!!11
WELCOME BACK anjali raizada mehra..!!!!!
and she also realized khushi's importance in arnv life..!!!!

ps. u write my name's spelling wrong.. its not that i m complaing... u can call me shelley..and don't u dare say sorry for this..!!!!


Edited by khareshelley - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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too good... such a heart warming update..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update. loved it

Edited by sfghfj - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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finally Arnav is embracing life... it was such a superb update... loved seeing the wonderful family...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Congrats on the new thread..That was an interesting update...
Hmm I really liked some light moments between them...
Embarrassed Khushi and Laughing arnav were treated to read..
Thanks for pm :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
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Oh man! I missed the first place yaar, this time. Damn my college. The first thing I did after I came back from college was to 'Res' my position and the bad of me, it already went to 3rd page. And now when I wrote a whole lot of comment, everything went in drain and got deleted. 😭 Grr...now my irritation know no bound by the way. But still, I will try making up for the last deleted comment!

And yup! I wanted to make a correction. In my name actually. It's that ki, there's no 'h' in my name. It's just 'Sravs'. Not that I'm complaining, just saying it. Please don't mind ok? 😳

Now up to the update...
You know? You're update is like a healing balm. My all stress, my sulkiness, my foul mood vanished just by reading your update. I really cannot stop the smile that would be plastered on my face when I will be reading your update. That's just like two things going parallel. Your story and the smile. 😃

How many things happened in this update? And all the incidents and changes are to be noted for and are the new beginnings of the fresh lives ahead for all the Raizada's. This update was just so happy update, that it's hard to wipe a smile from my face reading it, now too. 👍🏼

So finally Arnav decided to embrace it. Oh yeah, that makes me happy buddy, so so so happy. And the joyous Arnav the very next minute from his decision we got to read was a treat. Getting back to his old self. Enjoying doing silly things, being carefree and all. Finally Arnav removing his mask and daring to come out, at least to his family. 😳

Khushi and Payal are two, real, angels descended from above to bring back the happiness and lost warmth back in the family making all the members in the family smile at it. Again live their live with determination and love and happiness not with the same old pain, hurt and burden of mistakes. They both are here tending the scorched family. 😊

Raizada family is one in a family yaar, that I adore too much. Their whole happiness, sadness depends on a person, not the whole. They are like this, if it's even a single person is happy, they feel contend, even if it's a single person laughing among them, they all feel happy, when one is sad they are shed tears and be the support for the person. They are the family who does everything together even if its sad or pain or hurdle or happiness. They are just are an amazing bunch to be a family I say (I totally ignored the chicken and the b**** 😡)

I really loved your humor sense yaar. And the little devil (My new nickname for you😆) you are, you will be the reason of my scoldings from my mom girl. I was like laughing and smiling always that my mom would be like 'Have you gone crazy or something?' She will someday surely be scolding me for this yaar. It goes along phrase that says 'Die of laughter' you're someday going to be the reason for the same. But what does she know that I'm reading an amazing writer's amazing story that couldn't do anything but make me smile and laugh? 😃

Anjali and Arnav's reunion as mother and son is simply touching. I really had my eyes moist reading that part. That was so beautifully written Vera! Too beautiful. 👏

So finally Anjali is back to her normal self. And boy, does Arnav have to be scared for bringing back his sister? LOL!! He's going to really feel the ban of his sister coming back to normal, though for joking. She's going to play the cupid now, is it? I'm waiting for the fun to begin. 😆

This story is getting me more and more anxious to know what's going to happen the next. And buddy, we will do warn and threaten you if you don't make it to the schedule. 😛 You know right, we love the story. So we are tend to do this to get our treat, you see. 😉

Loads of love Vera, hugs & kisses for you! 🤗
Edited by Lucky_arshi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice part
khushi is so jovial that she will spread happiness in the raizada family
happy that anjali wants to rejoin AR

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