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Arsha4eva99

@Arsha4eva99

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#201

Amazing update..n plz update fast..

N PLZ PM ME...:)

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Aarushi Gupta

@cool_star14

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#202

I loved it ..
nice one!!!
I loved this drunk kriya..
Rey apne aap ka kaise control raha hoga when kriya was playing with d hem of her skirt.. lol..
so finally kriya realised that she love him...
last words were a lil confusing. .
update soon..
want to know how kriya will react in morning when she will wake.. 😉

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arsha_simran

@arsha_simran

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#203

omg this is just simply awesome!!!

the way everything started!!

awesome!!!

i am loving it sooo very much!!!

the way rey cares for kria!!

the care vicky and swayam gives to kria!!!

i sooo love it!!!

and finally the beer effect...

but kria will she trust rey now..

i guess she will misunderstand him...

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GARIMA

@grungta11

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#204

nnyycc update..:)

but y no pm..:(

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Yogini

@yogini64

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#205

wow... u r really updating so fast... 😊

n it is moving fast ... good ... 😃

finally rey convinced her for breakup with arav ... 👏

oh god... achhe se bhurta bana dena tha na arav ka... 😵

lol... rey ki feelings bahot tezi se badh rhi h vaise ... 😎

omg... this alcohal took a toll on her... 😛

she was drunk ... then why did he took it as her approval ... 🤔

there's gonna be a big quarrel on it... 😔

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Riya Kapoor

@RiyaArShaKapoor

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#206

Originally posted by: Rajeshwari_KR
Nice update...
Drunk Kriya was good...
wat she thinks Rey as adopted brother...Really😲
It was hot...and her last words definitely confusing...
Hope everything goes well with KR
Update soon

ty alot fr cmntng

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Riya Kapoor

@RiyaArShaKapoor

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#207

Originally posted by: shelly_Arsha
Bari ayi discontinue karne waali, were all as lazy as you -_- 😛
Chal i'll review it and not be like you
I liked how you showed the beers affect on kriya
Shouting 'use protection' to sharon and all
Wanting to see how kriya'll react when she wakes up
and I Wonder what made rey the harsh rey in the present
I want to know all that so don't you dare discontinue! -__-

shattap :p

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Riya Kapoor

@RiyaArShaKapoor

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#208

Originally posted by: Sanchita_ArSha
Awesome part Riyu 👏
Dont stop writing this

Finally Kria ka break up ho hi gaya
ND kriya was drunk
hehehe awesome parts
loved

tnx

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Aditi M.

@reyaditi

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#209

Hey Riya...

M sorry for not commentig on ur works for a while...

I was not even online on IF...

Just bugged up with some reason I dont wanna mention...

I m really liking how this story is going...slow n steady...

Reys concern n all that...ausome...

Write soon...

Sorry for a short comment tough...

Still reading ur updates...

Keep writing...

Love Aditi...

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Riya Kapoor

@RiyaArShaKapoor

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#210

Originally posted by: reyaditi
Hey Riya...

M sorry for not commentig on ur works for a while...

I was not even online on IF...

Just bugged up with some reason I dont wanna mention...

I m really liking how this story is going...slow n steady...

Reys concern n all that...ausome...

Write soon...

Sorry for a short comment tough...

Still reading ur updates...

Keep writing...

Love Aditi...

thanx alot n take ur time

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