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MysticMuse

@Mystic_Muse

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1

God what was that

Love the concept

Thanks for pm

Update part 1 soon

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Akanksha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#2

its "El Oscuro" babe...

and what abeo...tell me also :P

concept looks fab...thou toucherous for me... lol

men are sheer bas***ds...no doubt...

lets see what happens

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dancersqueen

@dancersqueen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#3

confused hun?????waiting 4 next part...

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David

@arshafan94

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Posted: 11 years ago

#4

What the hell.
what is it a love story, or a hate story or a revenge tale.
i really don't get it.
the concept is really harsh but i love it in spite of that.
continue soon.

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Rajeshwari

@-Raj-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#5

amazing concept!!!

this sounds highly interesting!!!

great prologue!
looking forward to this one!

title ka matlab bhi bata dena:P

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kriapatel

@kriapatel

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Posted: 11 years ago

#6

OMG!!!!!!!!!!

YE KYA THA,

REY N THAT ARNV

How can they do this to kria

Itna pain kese koi de sakta he kisiko

Koi emotions hi nai he dono me

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Ramya sree

@ramya.reddy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#7

riyaa tittle ka meaning kya haii meko samaj nhn ayaa😕

explainn the meaning plsss😆 😛

concept was fab

prologue what was thattt😲 😲

ye love stry haii ya revenge stryyy

and rey tortchuring kriya😡

these mens are dogssshuhh😡

and ha intresting and and a very totchurous prologue

jldi update dena waitinggg

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Shukti_19

@Shukti_19

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Posted: 11 years ago

#8

it should be 'Aveo', right?? El Oscuro Aveo! .

Interesting concept

1st part was awesome

looking forward to next chapters..

continue soon

Edited by --Shukti-- - 11 years ago

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moumita

@sumimita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#9

WTH...

i am really confused riya...

pls update it soon

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ameena671

@ameena671

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Posted: 11 years ago

wow wonderful start loved it thank you for pm.

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