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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update
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AWESOME UPDATE PART 6. LOVED IT. LOVED THE WAY U PORTRAY VIRAT FEELINGS VERY BEAUTIFULLY. MANVI LIFE IS IN DANGER NOW . I AM SURE VIRAT WILL SAVE HER .REALLY NYC UPDATE IT IS. NOW WAITING 4 THE NEXT. PLZ UPDATE NEXT PART SOON AND ALSO UPDATE UR OTHER STORIES TOO. TAKE CARE.😊😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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virman: do dil jo milke dhadke hai😊

part 7



8 months...


she

was with him although in a wheel chair but her smile wud welcum his

day, her laughter gave him da energy to start a new day with a

newpromise to fulfill nd her non stop chatters wud provide him da best

entertainment in da world.. she wud roam abt da whole house in her wheel

chair nd try to carry on with her habbits of gardening or cooking;virat

never stopped her but she wud be accompanied with two helpers who wud

do all da work for her or sumtimes virat himself wud do dis but dis was

done in a way dat she wud never feel dat she was being helped nd wud b

happy dat now she cud do her works by herself.. but 8 months before da

scene was totally different as she was completely bedridden after da

wrong treatment, it was true she was saved from being dying but she was

paralysed nd it took complete care nd attention from virat dat now she

is 90% fit only wit her legs still not gaining conciousness but her

progress in dis matters was visible in her recent reports nd drs were

accepting a maximum of 2 months for her to run..



everything

seemed to be fit nd fine for dem, although dey were far away from da

family but dey hav successfully built dere own world which had lots of

suffering nd distress but was filled with dere friendship nd growing

closeness which was still not love from manvi's side but she enjoyed his

company , his care, nd at some point his unconditional love which wud

always amaze her...



dis frightening episode

brought fir virat lots of taunts nd mistrust from his family nd hers but

she never complained nd her trust never dissappeared nd dats wat gave

virat da strength to fight back all her disabalities.. she sees in him

an angel who came to save her , his care, love nd every other thing left

her speechless nd its now a nearly a month dat she is suffering from

some different sort of sideeffects --- as she wud smile without reason,

wud wait every hour for his call wenever he was out, wud blush

unconditionally during dere proximity,, sumtime she wud check herself

100 times in da mirror before leaving da room nd try to wear dresses of

color blue or white or yellow as dis were his favourite color, she

cudn't understand da reason behind all dis stupidity but sumwhere she

was enjoying all dis...



TING TONG UPDATE..



Sajde kiye hai lakho

Lakho duayien mangi

Paya hai maine phir tujhe

Chahat ki teri maine

HAq mein hawaien mangi

Paya hai maine phir tujhe


virat

sat in da bucket chairrs right at da centre of da small circular stage

with his guiter singing in da occasion of naitik akshara's 2nd marriage

anniversary... it was basically an youth party with all dere collegue

doctors nd frnds from other fields. Viren nd jeevika were also present,

desefour some along with manvi were occupying a table for six nd virat

was asked to lead da party with his magical voice..

Tujhse hi dil yeh behla

Tu jaise Kalma phela

Chaahoon na phir kyun main tujhe



v--

ladies nd gentlemen.. aj ki ye shyam aur mera ye gana all dedicated to

da beautiful couple nd my most inspiring naitik bhai nd akshara bhabi.. a

big round of applause for dem...


Jis pal na chaha tujhko

Us pal sajayein mangi

Paya hai maine phir tujhe

everyone

just lost in da beautiful lyrics nd da rhythm of his magical voice nd

swaying along with it in a world of dere dream which consists of only

love nd dere partners...


Ooo

Sajde kiye hai lakho

Lakho duyaien mangi

Paya hai maine phir tujhe

manvi

who heard virat singing for da first time was just lost in his voice nd

with each line was falling hard for him.. she drowned on her own dreamy

land with virat.. virat dressed in all white just like da prince of

sleeping beauty, her favourite fairy tale nd she beautifully dressed in

all white saree with diamond jewelleries nd she found demself in a

shikara decorated with light pink curtains nd white roses just like any

dream.. it was as if jst dere world, she free from her present physical

dissabilities nd he free from all da burdens of a doctor... (imagine

dem with da song with my arrangements)


manvi goes near him nd holds his arms..

Jane tu sara woh

Dil mein jo mere ho

PAdh le tu aankein har dafa

hoo hoo

she

den revolves round him nd he just smiles nd pulls her towards him.. she

hides her face on his chest nd he makes her look at him by pulling her

chin using his index... dey look at each other with all da love dey hav

for each other...





Jane tu sara woh

Dil mein jo mere ho

PAdh le tu aankein har dafa

Haan

Nakhre se na jee bhi

Hoti bhi razi bhi

Tujhse hi hoti hai khafa


she

den again moves away from him and sits in da shikara nd pulling a

curtain between dem.. virat smiles nd sits down too nd folds da curtain

nd leaning towards her...


Jane tu baatein sari

KAtte hain raatein sari

Jalti diye se unbujhe

uth uth kar raaton ko bhi

Teri wafaien mangi

Paya hai maine phir tujhe


virat

slowly opens her earrings, den necklace nd bangles, manvi blushes hard,

nd pulls closer to kiss nd huge clappings starts... nd manvi suddenly

comes back to the world of reality with a jerk nd starts looking

everywhere nd stops at virat who was singing still nd was observing her

very keenly.. while singing he questions her with eye gestures to ask

wat happened nd she just nods nd mouths I m fine.. he smiles nd stands n

starts swaying with others nd singing..



Ooo

Sajde kiye hai lakho

Lakho duyaien mangi

Paya hai maine phir tujhe

nd akshara starts singing while dancing with naitik..

Chahat ke kajal se

Kismat ke kagaj pe

Apni wafaein likh zara


Haannnan

Chahat ke kajal se

Kismat ke kagaj pe

Apni wafaein likh zara


virat

moves down from da stage nd starts singing revolving round manvi's

chair.. manvi swayed with him sitting in her wheel chair..




Bole zamana yun

Mein tere jaise hoon

Tu bhi to mujhsa dikh zara

Mera hi saya tu hai

Mujh mein samaya tu hai

HAr pal yeh lagta hai mujhe


he

sits near her in knees to match dere heights , holds her hend nd places

a kiss nd moves away winking making her blush in all shades of red nd

pink.. manvi tries to hide her blush nd tries to look everywhere to

confirm dat no one hav seen dis nd gets shocked seeing akshara nd

jeevika smiling teasingly nd winking at her..

Khud ko mitaya mene

Teri balayein mangi

Paya hai phir mene tujhe

Chaha tu chahe mujhko

Aise adayein mangi

Paya hai mene phir tujhe


the

song ends nd every one returns back from dere lovey dovey land nd claps

nd cheers for virat.. everyone moves to have dere dinner nd da sixsome

too move in dere table where da waiters were serving da dinner..


n--

virat .. aj to maja aa gaya mere bhai.. abe tujhe mere shadi mei hi

apni seminar k liye jana tha.. kya rukhi sukhi shadi thi.. kahaka koi

fatela singer aya tha gane k liye.. kyun viren yaad hai na??


a--

kya?? kya kaha?? singer kya tha?? mere papa ne tumhare sangit prem ko

dekhte huye pure 2 lakh dekar singer bulaya tha aur tum keh rahe ho

fetelaa ya kuch.. watever...(angry)


n-- are thk hai na ,

papa tumhare crorepati hai to aise fizul kharch kar sakte hai.. agar

unhe meri shouk ka itna khyal hota to sonu nigam, shaan ya fir babul

supriyo ko hi bulalete..


a-- dko tum aab mere papa ki insult kar rahe hoo.


v--

kya bhai.. maine dkhi video acha khasa gata hai bechara nd maine to

yeha tak suna hai use ajkal bohot sare offers v aa rahe hai ..


a-- dkha.. suno.. kan kholkar suno kya keh raha hai virat...


n-- ha oo to kehe ga hi na akhir chamcha thehra tumhara... par ye baat to manogi apne virat se ache nai gata..


a-- oo to hai humara virat to hai hi har field mei abal.kyun manvi???


m-- ha bhabi ga leta hai thik thak..

v-- oye kya thik thak??? main sangit mei bisharat kar rakhi hai.. aur tumhe thk thak lag rai hai... khud to 5 bi fail ho..


m--

kya??? main koi 5 bi fail nai hu.. 10th mei to mujhe 90% marks aaye the

aur 12th mei 91% yeha tak ki clg mei v dono year mujhe 1st class marks

aaye the, o to tumse shadi kya ki meri kismat fut gayi.. huh..


v--

o madam kisi se mat kehna ki virat vadera se shadi karke kismat fut

gayi warna log hasenge tum par, pagal kehenge tumko.. samjhi..


m"achaaa... to aise bolo nd ki the great virat vadera... (giggles)


v-- ha to great hu to great hi bolna chahiye, tumhare jaisa 5 bi fail nai hu.. doctor hu doctor...


m-- arghhh.. virattt..


v-- maaanviii..


m-- chep kahi ke...


v-- 5 bi fail kahiki...


m-- viii... ( nd she is stopped by da other four as jeeevika inserts a laddoo in her mouth)


v-- hahahahahahahahha( viraen puts another laddoo in his moth)


vi,j,a,n"(together)- SSSTTTOOOPPP...


vi-- kya yaar tum dono kahi v suru ho jate ho..


j-- or nai to kya... chalo ab jaldi se khana complete karo..


everyone completes dere food nd bids everyone gudbye nd for da night virika n virman stays back at naksh house...



virman room...


virat

massaging manvi's foot like everynight as its part of her treatment nd

its just virat nd his care dat is helping her to recover soon nd she is

ecpected to stand on her legs soon...


manvi was lost in

her thoughts nd virat was huming da song dat he sung in da party nd was

occasionally stealing glances at manvi, he got worried to find her

lost.. nd so moved near her nd sat beside her, he moved his hands up nd

down to bring her back from her trail of thoughts...


v-- manvi... manvi..

m-- huh.. kya?? kya hua??

v-- tumhe kya hua? Kaha khoi hui ho?? kiske khyalo mei..


to dis manvi gives himm an angry look..


v-- ok ok.. ab batao.. paresan ho???

m-- nai.. virat mai kya soch rai thi..

v"kya soch rai thi??

m-- yehi ki kyun na mei clg join karlu aur apna final year complete karlu.. kaisa rehega?

v--

soch to kafi nek hai.. par (he holds her hand) agar tum mer baato se

hurt hokar aisa soch rai ho den m really sorry, mai sirf tumse mazak kar

raha tha,, pls manvi uska ye... (gets stopped by manvi)

m-- nai

na pagal .. bilkul buddhu ho tum.. main to aise hi bas ghar baithe bore

ho jati hu to socha studies complete kar leti hu.. tumna bilkul ullu ho

kya kya sochte ho..( slaps lightly in his head)

v-- acha to main pagal hu, buddhu hu, or ha ullu v hu ,, ha??? ruko avi batata hu tumhe..


he starts tickling her nd both starts laughing..

m-- virat pls (betweem laughing) mat karo na, pet dukh raha hai ..


m,v--- ha hahahaha hahaha hahaha...


nd

dey fall both fall in da bed from sitting position to sleeping position

, virat on top of manvi.. he continues tickling her nd suddenly dere

eyes meet nd dey stop, both breathing heavily, virat puts her hair

strand behind her ear nd manvi blushes nd all of a sudden she starts

tickling him..

both starts laughing again loudly..


a (from outside)-- are holi ko avi 2 din baki hai tum dono ne kya avi se bhang pi rakhi hai..


m,v-- ssshhh.. hahahaahah...







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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
Awesome update...
Loved it..
Awww Manvi is in a wheelchair...
But love how Virat take care of her...
Love how they fight about little little things...
Love the song...
Pleaseee update soon...
Loveee this ff...
Edited by chandiniebinda - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75
AWESOME UPDATE DEAR. VERY TOUCHING STORY IT IS. LOVED IT. FEEL BAD 4 MANVI WHO IS NOW IN WHEELCHAIR BECOZ OF WRONG TREATMENT . BUT LOVED HER SPIRIT VERY MUCH AND VIRAT CARE 4 HER. NOW MAANVI IS FALLING FOR VIRAT . LOVED THE SONG SUNG BY VIRAT. LAST SCENE WAS AWESOME WHERE VIRAT MASSAGE MAANVI AND TICKLED HER AND THEIR EYELOCK . UPDATE NEXT PART SOON AND PLZ SEND A PM AFTER UPDATING UR STORIES . TAKE CARE.😊😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
Wow... Wonderful
Very touchy story... And very emotional
Loved it
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
Outstanding dear
Loved it
Update d nxt part soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
Awesome update dii.
It was really nyc and heart touching story.
Maanvi is in chair now but i know soon she will be f9.
Virat care for manvi is awesome.
Loves virman moments very much.
Loved it .
Update next part soon dii.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79
Part 6
Loved the update
Hope manvi gets well soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80
Nice story all part is nice he love her so much
Update soon wanted to know how both of them
Confess there feeling each other update
Soon

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