new story on arsu- meeting of two-souls part 24 page 58, pr- pg 59 new - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
wow awesome updt...both parts r too gud...thanks for da late cmnt...seen ur pm bt was lil bit busy...so couldnt read...madhav kept confusing his parth...too cute when he says luk at da img in water...bechara parth thinking of bheem,nakul evn dussy...lol..brihu part is awesome...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: anshikashaheer

its beautifully written yaar😳👏like always amazing😉😃

haww😲Madhav teasing my innocent parth❤️🤣☺️parth ki kitni buri halat h..😆😆brihu ke bare me soch soch kr..🤣poor baby😆aage kya hogaa...soo much suspense..i guess parth behosh hoga tension ke maare..!!!*madhav ke upar😆loved this:=
"paarth kya soch rahi ho... ohh ab samja yahi na kahin tumein dobara brihnalla na banna padega..par muje lagta hain banna padega 😳🤣
paarth was like😲(kahi madhav ko mera ye roop kuch zyaada toh nhi pasand aa gya☺️☺️)
he ask kyaa ☺️
madhav laughs oh meri priya paarth
😆(u r such an innocent darling🤣)
"
hahahaha🤣🤣❤️LOVED IT..😳😆JUST MINBLOWING👏👏👏continue soon re*😃😉



madhav is naughty spl when he get chance to tease his fav paarth 😆😆😆 after all he is the only person who questions him and wait for answer innocently 😆😆😆😆 brihu ka re entrance chaiye kya😉 nahi hoga bheosh agr hua madhav haina😉😉😉 pakadne keliye
ofcourse madhav love brihu😉😉😉

agar mohini and brihu ka dance competition hogaya too😲

thanks for commenting 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: Pamalo

oh god parth kitna innocent hai come on now madhav brilliant hai toh har koi nahi ho sakta naa sooo sad make madhav tell parth aur uski confusion dur kar do...hehehe



madhav in brillian in making paarth all innocent😳

he will do it next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: Radhikerani

Oh ! How Sweet !! Loved How Kanha Made Arjun Look Into The Water-mirror !!



thank u

hehe thanks for liking it... kanha ka apna ek style hain😉

thanks for commenting 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
hey its awesome👏 u would have named it as Parav and Arsu OS😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: -Shani-

This is awesome!! 👏

Bechaara Parth is so innocent and confused...aur Madhav usey aur confuse kar rahe hain!! 😆

And the Brihannala part is just 🤣

Please continue!!




paarth bahut bechara hain..
madhav is naughty na😉😉

thanks for liking brihanalla part

thanks for commenting😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: santhiyaa_J

hey its awesome👏 u would have named it as Parav and Arsu OS😳



thank u for commenting

paarav to hamesaa hi hain


but usmein arsu ki love story bhi to hain..

😉 bina madhav ki arsu is incomplete😆😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: Simantini_M

wow awesome updt...both parts r too gud...thanks for da late cmnt...seen ur pm bt was lil bit busy...so couldnt read...madhav kept confusing his parth...too cute when he says luk at da img in water...bechara parth thinking of bheem,nakul evn dussy...lol..brihu part is awesome...



thanks for liking both of it 😊

its ok

he will confuse him more

paarth is innocent na😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: .CrazySobtian.

aww how sweet update!!!😳


thanku

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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
thank u all for the lovable comments and spending time to type ur words🤗 sorry for spelling and enjoy this paarav path😉

madhav says haan paarth tum hi dikrahi hoo teek se deko usko wo insaan nazaar ahi jayega.. and laughs.. paarth says teek se nazaar ayega? kahan? woo too and seeing it.. searching kahan madhav.. he laugh saying ohoh meri bole paarth wahi jisse tum paani mein dekrahe hoo ... paarth says par paani mein to sirf mein dik raha hoon... Aur koi nahi and turns seeing madhav who was smiling.. and sees water and madhav says aur koin paarth tum hi too hoo nahi samaje kyaa and paarth get shocked and lightly faint and madhav hold typical filmy style

( he insist on seeing properly, then he ask innocently who it is and madhav teases saying oh my innocent paarth it is none other than u when he almost faint but caught by madhav)

madhav was like paarth samalke(be careful) ... holding him

paarth was like madhav ye aap kya kehrahe ho?(what are u saying madhav?)

Madhav laughs saying paarth ab tak nahi samje nahi kya muje laga tum to sabse bada buddimaan hoo aur tum ko ye samjane mein muje itna waqt lag gaye ki meri priya behen subhi loves u ... Paarth sees him in shock.. to kya aap mere bare mein...

(madhav laughs saying u still have not understand it is u? i thought u were intelligent and u took so much time to understand it that my sis subhi love u? he sees him in shock asking were u talking about me?)

Madhav says haan paarth itni dheer tak I was only talking about u ...

(i was talking about u only parth)

Arjun smile all blushing and nodding his head seeing his madhav's teasing naughtiness he says madhav aap se adheek shahrarat bare insaaan is duniya mein koi ho bhi nahi sakta... And laughs..

(madhav no one will be more naughtier than u in this world)

Madhav says wo to koi nahi bansakta waise bhii and laughs..

(and no one can become)

To bolo paarth meri priya yogmaya se shaadi karogi? Paarth.. mera mathlab hain meri behen subadhre se shaadi karogi?

(tell me paarth will u marry my yogmaya i mean my sis subadhre)

Paarth all blushing madhaav...

Madhav says tho kya tumein aitraaz nahi ki subhi ka shaadi duriyodan se hoo

(don't u have any oppose of my sis marrying duri?)

Paarth says madhaav ye...

To bolo paarth says madhav

Paarth says madhav poochne ki baat hain kya... meri nirnay aap jante hain phir bhi pooch rahi hain too mein boldeta hoon muje aapki behen se shadi karne se koi aitraaz nahi par uski shaadi wo duriyodanan se shaadi karne se aitraaz jaroor hain... and laughs...

(madhav u know my answer still u ask such question?😕 still i will answer u... i have no objection in marriage of subhi but i have objection her marrying duri)😉

Madhav smiles... to chalo paarth shaadi nahi karni..

Paarth says haan madhav par aise hii.. waise ek baat poochna bhoolgaya.. why u din't recognize me when u came along with subhi?

(then lets go paarth to get u married.. paarth says ofcourse madhav... i forget to ask u one thing... why u did not recognize me when u came along with subhi?)

Madhav says uska ek karan /reason hain paarth.. wo mein abhi nahi bulki kahi aur jagah jagaar batavoonga aur jab tak mein na kahoon tab tak... u don't change ur sanyas costume.. paarth ask why madhav? He says I do have reason paarth trust me don't open ur identity to subadhre also until the marriage take place.. . paarth sees him in confuse but knows madhav have some kind of idea running in head he smile and says chaliye madhav😉

so how was paarav part? subhi ka entrance hone wali hai..be ready 😉




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