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He sit down on the bed and see her and smile remembering the journey how innocently she answered so as brave fully stood on other hand subhi was having her eyes closed but still she was awake... he wished her anger get vanished but it was not easy, he wished he finds an way to convince her.. he kept seeing her and the night was passing with blown off fire creating an unwanted darkness in the room
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17.Arjun was smiling seeing her.. he was like kab tak naraaz rahogi mein bhi haar nahi manoonga(until when u will be angry I will surely console u ) ... he says muje bahut neend araha hain(I am very sleepy) and stretch his hand making the cloth get raise almost moving off from her shoulder she holds it and she walk and she was forced to walk she says ye kya kar rahe hain aap(what r u doing?) he says tuje to nedra nahi araha hain parantu muje to araha hain and smiles(he smiles saying u r not sleepy but I am).. she was not able to see him as he faced other side... she then notices his uthariya(stole) was fallen down from one side and other side he was just holding it with hand she goes and take away his uthariya (girls come down to earth aise kuch bhi nahi hain) and cover herself and remove her uthariya and put it over his face and walks of shocking him she says kal jab aap meri vastr ko lautadenge mein aapko vastr ko dedoongi(she has covered herself fully with that uthariya opening it ) ab muje needn arahi hain (she says when u return my stole tomorrow I will returns urs too, saying I am sleepy)and goes and sleep over the sofa there mean diwan kind of and turns away other side... he removes the chuni from his face and smiles thinking she is pakka (surely)madhav's sister... he sees her chunnari (her uppar stole)and smiles... he think meine na sahi meri vastr hi tumhari paas hain(I may be not with u but atleast my stole is with u )... madhav ye kaise vipata hain , mein swayam uske samne kadi hoon parantu meri vastr ko lapetkar sorahi hain(he thinks madhav what kind of situation Is this, I , myself fully in front of her but she is sleeping holding my stole as her protection cover)... he sees her chunni then he removes it from gloves removing the hand accessory and then take the blanket and goes and covers her

He sit down on the bed and see her and smile remembering the journey how innocently she answered so as brave fully stood on other hand subhi was having her eyes closed but still she was awake... he wished her anger get vanished but it was not easy, he wished he finds an way to convince her.. he kept seeing her and the night was passing with blown off fire creating an unwanted darkness in the room but it was needed to for them to fall asleep... subadhra open her eyes only to realize she was sleeping over bed all covered and sees her arya(hubby) sleeping on the diwaan in awkward position due to his length she smiles... but next moment she was angry as inspite of her warning he shifted her in bed... she wondered was she that easy that he carry her away? She then sees her chunri placed next to her and sees the golden gloves along with his other accessories in the dressing table, he was just in his dhoti and sleeping... she blushes and wearing her chunri she places his chunnari next to him and goes but she did not know arjun was not asleep but was seeing her all awake pretending to sleep. The whole day was busy for him too so as her with their respective responsibility... he was busy in the work of planning rajya sabha and she was busy with dp and learning of her new place... and in night... he comes into the room placing his gandheev goes off to sleep in bed thinking if he sleeps fast she will not mind and sleep there silently but he did not know that subhi was subhi sleep down in floor over carpet not disturbing him.. next day morning he notices it... and realizes he forgetting placed his gandheev in the diwaan where she cdnt sleep... he feel disappointed... so next day after busy day when subhi comes seeing the bed was not occupied by him and moves little to notice him lying down she feels sorry and she lies on other side of bed on floor...(bed bechara was alone and empty)

Subhi awake and sees his chest she then lift her head to see him seeing her she gets up and shouts at him asking why he came next to her when she told him strictly not to come near her ... Meine aapse kaha to tha meri paas mat ayiye... phir bhi aapne(I warned u not to come near me, still u came?).. he smiles getting up saying mein aapke paas nahi ache se dekliye mein jahan kal raat soya hoon wahi par hoon parantu aap meri is orr agayi hain(he smiles getting up and says I have not come next to u, but u r the one who has come next to me, just check I am still sleeping at same place where I slept yesterday) .. wok kal raat neend mein karwatein badalte huye meri orr prasthan karliya(he continues saying yesterday night while rolling in sleep u came to my side rolling under the bed)... she realizes it and sees that she must have rolled below the bed and end up nearing her as she has not habit of sleeping down... he smiles saying... neend mein bhi tumne apni brata ko itni yaad karti hoo raat baar tumne madhav ke naam lekar unhein smaran kar rahi thi... aur madhav ka samachar aaj ayi jayega ki kab wo ayahan prasthan kar rahe hain(even in sleep u kept remembering ur brother and kept calling his name or murmuring his name all night , don't worry by today for sure the message will arrive on when madhav is arriving here)... she sees him... he says waise meri haath ki takiye tuje itna pasand aya kya kehrahi thi tuje ache se neend araha hain is takiye mein(he says I did not know u loved my hand pillow and u end up saying that u loved this pillow as u are getting proper sleep) and shows his hand which had become little red due to her constant pressing with her head.. she feels bad.. she says mein dawayi bejdethi hoon aap ki haaath teek haojyega aur garam paani bhi(she says I will send medicines and also hot water, ur hands will be fine) he says uski avashkata nahi hain mein kud ka dyaan raksakta hoon(no need, I can take care of myself subhi) and smiles she sees him and tries to get up but falls back and he hold her and both fall back on floor (if this had happen in movie for sure an romantic number would have been developed but sadly it is dwaparyug and Krishna also not there to play flute so ) she get up pushing him little and runs off he laying back thinks kab tak tum meri pyaar se door baagti rahogi subadhra... (until when u will be running away from my love subadhra?)

Subhi was waiting for the sandhesh(message) to arrive send by madhav in time... arjun gets sandhesh and reading he gets to know madhav has said he was not going to come... he was discussing it with yudishter when subhi who happen to reach the room to find out hears something ... arjun says brata(brother) madhav ka sandhesh hain unki kal ana ashambav hain(brother it says arrival of madhav tomorrow is not possible)... he was like ye kya kehrahi hoo arjun(he was like what are u saying arjun?).. subhi hears it... he says brata abhi-abhi nakul ne ye sandhesh diya hain dekiye usne kaha ye usse aaj subh hi mila(he says brother, nakul just gave me this messaging saying he got today morning)... aaj subh (today morning?)yudi was like aise kaise hua?(how can it happen?) He says brata ye sandhesh ke bare mein kisiko ko mat batayiye khaas kar subadhra koo (brother don't tell about this message to any one spl subadhra)... he ask kyun arjun(why arjun?).. he says subhadhra is baat ki kuch aur mathlab nikal dein... isliye ab ye sandhesh ke bare mein samaloonga(don't tell anything about this to subadhra, she may take it in other way, and I will handle the message issue)... agar subadhra ko pata chalega wo dwarika jaane ki zid karsakti hain, aur is samay dwarika oor jana surakshit nahi hain... jab tak madhav ki...(if subadhra comes to know about it, she will get adamant on visiting to dwarika and it is not secure to visit dwarika at this time, until madhav's) before he could complete she had left , sanshesh nahi ata hum ye kabar par zikar na karein to achha hain(until his message doesn't given properly, we better not talk on it)... mein madhav ko sandhesh bejoonga gupt charan se... aur us ke baad hi koi bhi nirnay par pounchoonga.. (I will send message to madhav by an secret person and get clear view on this issue to take any decision)yudi says sahi kehrahi hoo kyunki nakul to subh meri saath ta, to sandhesh kab aya...(yudi says u r right after all nakul was with me in the morning time, then how come he got the message?) Arjun was like kya(what)? He doubts was nakul was saying lie? And it was as sahdev brink the gupt charan(secret person) who had come from dwarika and he deliver that message saying he was supposed to deliver the message yesterday but he lost his way... so he ask sorry.. they says it ok and yudi and arjun sees each other and they read the message and arjun says brata is mein sandhesh hain ki madhav aaj shyaam tak ip pounchjayenge,... to wo sandhesh kya ta jo muje nakul ne diya?(arjun says brother this message state that madhav will reach ip by today evening, then what was the message which nakul gave me?) On other hand nakul and bheem were busy as nakul busy dressing himself and bheem eating fruits.. ye tumne teek kiya hain nakull bina koi sandhesh ayein tumne arjun se kehdiya kii sandhesh aya hain(u did an wonderful thing nakul by saying to arjun that u received an message when such message never reached us )... and laughs... ab wo toda pareshaan hoga.. ye sochkar apni patni ko kaise manayein(now he will be dilemma thinking how to pacify his wife?).. aur haan nakul tum subadhra se kehdena aise koi sandhesh nahi aya hain.. wo to sirf mazaak hain(and nakul don't forget to inform subadhra that no message have come , it is only for to have fun).. aur muje pura yakeein hain wo hamari hi saath degi... wo abhi bhi naraaz haina(I am sure she will be with us in this plan after all she is also angry over subadhra).. aur uske baad jab madhav ayega to to arjun ka chera dekna layak hoga(and when madhav comes for sure arjun face will be worth to be seen and laughs)... haha. bahut dinon ke baad arjun ko todi keechayi karne ka mauka mila hain us mauke ko kaise gawadoon laughs bheem saying it...(bheem was laughing and tells how can I miss the chance of teasing my lovable arjun that too after so many years, when I have got an chance?) nakul says parantu brata agar bhabhi shree ne saath nahi diya too(nakul says what if bhabhi shree doesn't accompany us in this plan?)... bheem says jaroor saath degi.. tum uski fikar mat karo.. hum milkar kahenge to wo maan jayegi... aur isi bhane uski narazki todi kam hoajyegi.. aur meri priya anuj ke upar pirse latoo hojayegi.(why she will not accompany us in this plan? Ofcourse she will when we both will inform her about it, and in that way her anger will get lessen and for sure she will again fall for my lovable brother all again). and laughs... makul says ye to bikul teek kaha aapne(u said this right brother) and laughs.. in time arjun yudi and sahdev happen to reach there... arjun seeing yudi goes to nakul and ask nakul sach sach batavo ye sandhesh kab aya.(yudi ask tell me truth when this message come?) nakul was caught who sees bheem... he says aaj hi anuj arjun... kya hua? (bheem says today only brother arjun)Yudi and arjun seeing each other... kyunki agar ye sandhesh hain to ye kya hain showing another sandhesh which had arrived from dwarika(if that is the real message then what about this showing the real message, which has come from dwarika that to today).. nakul was like omg I am caught he put whole blame on bheem saying meine kuch nahi kiya wo to brata bheem.. ( I didn't do anything it was all brother bheem's idea)he says nakul moun raho(he says nakul be quite).. yudi sees both of the brother... he says satya kahoo sandhesh madhav ka aya ta yaa(he ask tell me did madhav actually send the message?)... he says wo too meine aur brata bheem milkar(actually it was me and brother bheem both together ) ... Arjun sees both of them and sees yudi.. wo ask tum logon ne aise kyun kiya?(yudi ask why did u people do this ?) Arjun says aur kiske liye sirf muje pareshaan dekne hethu.(for what else brother just to trouble me). aap donon ko sharm nahi athi muje is tarah pareshaan karte huye... itna saalon baad lautha hoon aur aap log(he says u people are not ashamed of doing such things with me? I have returned after soo many years and u people are interested in troubling me?).. they says isliye to pareshaan karne ka mann kiya(that is the reason we wanted to have fun with u)... then they confess they wanted to involve subadhra too arjun was like pehle se hii wo mujse krodh mein hain yadi aap aise karte to mein kitna pareshaan hojata ... aur uski krodh atheek hojata too(he was like what? He says already she is in super angry with me and if u had people did it with me and what if her anger had got increased?what would have happen with me?) they says are adheek kahan hota wo to hamari tarah kush hojati tuje toda pareshaan karke(they says anger would have not increased but for sure she would have enjoy with us troubling u ).. and laughs... nakul says aur brata bheem ladoo kathe aur aapke dil mein bhabhi shree ko dekkar latto phoolte and giggles(nakul says brother bheem would be eating laddo and bhabhi shree would have getting laddo flows inside her heart )... yudi says tum logon ko to har waqt sirf mazaak hi soojta hain kya? Yadi ye baad koi aur sunlete aur madhav ajate to kitna gadbad hojata...(u people can only think of having fun?what if some had hear it and what if madhav had arrived? How much insulting would it be?) arjun says wahi brata... agar ye baat subadhra sunlethi too mujse adheek naraz hojati hain.. achha hua meine usse ye baat nahi bataya ki madhav yahan nahi ayenge aur chupane ka faisla karliya... (u r right brother what if subadhra had hear it and thought in other way and got more angry on me? Thinking it is my one more plan? Thank god I decided not to inform her and decided to hide it from her) aur in time subhi who happen to come to talk to nakul regarding sandhesh hears it and thinks arjun was hiding... and get angry and goes off..

Ye satya hain ki madhav ka sandhesh aya hain ki wo aaj shaym tak yahan ajayenge jismein waqt jayda nahi hain...(truth is that the actual message of madhav arrival by today evening has come and very less time is left for the evening ) brata bheem kahin aap mujse badla to nahi lerahe hain.(arjun says brother bheem u r not doing all this to take revenge on me ?). he comes and hugs him saying tumse mein badla kaise loon anuj.. mein to sirf mazaak karna chata ta(he hugs saying how can u think I would take revenge on u? I was just trying to have fun)... mein tuje peeda kaise doon jisne itne saalon tak itna peeda bukata hain...(how can I give u pain which I know u had suffered a lot in all those years) and arjun realizes his brother were just in mind of playing prank where they wanted to involve subhi too not to hurt him ... in time brata bheem was in tears aise mat kaho mere anuj mein to sirf mazaak karna chata ta. Aur sab dosh us nakul ka hain usi ne kaha(bheem was in tears he says I just wanted to have fun and reason for all that happened is nakul who gave me such bad idea) he says nahi brata.. ye to brata bheem chate te..(nakul says no brother it was that bheem brother wanted all that to happen not me) he says moun raho nakul(bheem says be quite nakul)... sahdev says... parantu muje aapne bataya hi nahi... agar batadete mein to ye asli wala sandhesh brata arjun tak pounchane hi nahi deta(sahdev says brother why people did not inform me before, if u have did that I would have not let the real message reach brother arjun).. arjun sees him and all laughs... arjun says sahdev tum bhi(u also sahdev?)... he says kya karoon brata itna saal hogaya (he says what to do brother it has been years since we had such fun)and all brother hugs together.. Consoling each other... then nakul and bheem was like hamein maaf kardo(forgive us arjun) arjun says nahi (no, it's ok)and hugs them one again... yudi tells ab rulavogi.(will u people make me cry ?). aur kya taiyari nahi karne madhav ka sandhesh achuka hain aur surya asth pehle madhav bhi ajenge(don't we need to start preparation for madhav's arrival after all before the sunset madhav will be landing here)... arjun tum jagar subadhra ko sandhesh doo (arjun you go and inform subadhra )bheem tum aur nakul madhav ki katch ki intezaam draupadi se kehkar kardena... aur madhav ki swagat hethu mein aur sahdev kud jagar taiayriyaan dekenge.(bheem and nakul u people go an inform draupadi and make sure madhav's room is ready before his arrival, ma and sahdev will go and see the welcoming arrangements) . in time arjun says nahi brata.. subhadhra ko sandhesh ab mein nahi doonga... jab madhav ayenge mein madhav ko lekar kud uske samne javoonga... (arjun says brother I won't inform subadhra now but when madhav arrives I will take him to her and surprise her ) yudi says but arjun... he says brother just for few more time until then pls don't go infront of her as I know for sure she will come to meet u so pls.. after all u can't stop urself from saying the truth ... he says arjun again some fun? He says no brother time to pacify my wife what to do she is very adamant like her brothers at time and laughs

In time subhi was in deep thoughts.. She thinks arjun planned all this and framed her and her brothers. she wanted to find truth... she thinks if she doesn't know she will suffer lifelong... what if something else happen... weird thoughts were going around... she was like muje sheegra hi dwarika javoongi aur satya jaankar rahoongi aur kahin baat kuch aur to nahi... mein kud chali javoongi...(I will soon go and visit dwarika to know the truth, hope the matter is not something else , I will go by myself) muje apni brata se milne se koi nahi roksakte (no one can stop me from meeting my brother and know the whole truth) and takes an not and starts to write message saying she can't be in peace until she know truth and for that she will need to meet her brother at any cost... she says he may have tried to hide all matter from her but she will not let it happen by any mean she will reach her brother and find the truth... she doesn't trust him at all and says she was leaving by herself... not to follow her.. she then take an small cloth bundle which had her necessary things and she goes.. prepare by Covering herself.. she knew an way which dp told her as it was way of staffs she decide to take it.. as if she passes by main entrance she will be caught and brought back... and she was in much anger on arjun now...but, she thinks he is stopping her from meeting her brother... but she did not know knew the truth. She was thinking why is my hubby stopping me from getting any news from dwarika or meeting my brother? He told clearly not to mention about the sandhesh(message) infront of me.. what it means? He want to keep me in dark and make me get convinced and also giving me false hope of my brother's arrival and manage to get me into his wife way? Is that reason? How could he ever think like that? No I may be thinking wrong I will find out, I will talk to him, after all I shd not come in any conclusion in any hurry spl before leaving this kingdom seeing her things ready along with letter left for him... I will find it and again goes out before leaving the place as she cannot take any decision in hurry without talking. She reaches the room but finds the room was empty as brother left it. she goes in search of arjun... who had happen to go her room in time and searchers her and thinks may be she must be with draupadi and turns when he stops seeing the flute in the table and smiles... remembering his madhav... his naughtiness and thinks let me play with subadhra little more and give her surprise... my brother wanted to play prank on me but now I can use it of my own and make subhi get surprise with madhav arrival.. When I will bring her to meet her she will be shocked and in that her anger may vanish... he smiles. in time subadhra asking an dasi comes back to her room and sees arjun and she says arya.. and stops herself and says arya putr arjun... he turns to see her she was sweating and breathing heavily and he loved her sight and just fell in love once again... he knew if he gives shock treatment definitely it will work.. so he decide to hide the fact of madhav's arrival from subadhra... after all just few hours left for his arrival.. He can give her little bit of trouble to surprise her... he thinks intezaar ka fal meeta hi hota hain(waiting can result to an fruit)... (kya pata arjun kantaa bhi basakta hain(who know it may be even an thorn)haina)

Will subhi leave the palace or will arjun stop her? Arjun has decide to play prank and subhi as already misunderstood the situation now what will happen stay tuned

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