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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Krishna_Sourav

Awesome superb parts

loved them
thanks for superb long updates
Loved it
how Pandav brother's bonding n there how Arjun is trying hard to make Subhadra understand
loved this full..
loved Subhadra n Draupadi moments
finally Draupadi welcome Arjun n Subhadra but there also all tease Arjun
enjoyed it
continue soon



welcome... thanks a lots

brothers are always brother when it comes to helping in one brother's love story😆😆

arjun ka teasing is not going to end so soon

thanks for commenting 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Radhikerani

Loved The Total Hullabaloo !!!!


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shalon

Wow amazing yaar waiting for ur next update



thank u

thanks for commenting
next update hopefully by tonight 😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: PARVATHY44

Great update.Totally enjoyed reading it especially arjun-subhadra scenes



thank u
more arjun subadhra scene are going to come

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Pamalo

Sorry for the late reply superb update loved bhim he is so cute and all the pandavas too paanchali sending sweet aww and subhi is getting adjusted wow waiting for the next update





its ok

bheem will surely help is anuj😆
now subhi will make sweets

keep tuned

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetlife

waiting for d nxt part.
update soon.



thanks for commenting
next update hopefully by tonight 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
here is the next part without more of my words here is the next part enjoy

sorry for spellings and mistakes...

guys this story may sound little weird and also off logic but it is only arsu magic so enjoy it

can any one help me to find an suitable name for this story(i know it is late but still) 😊

enjoy the next part


16.All were sitting down for dinner... bheem says seekr lavo muje bhook lagi hain(he says bring the food soon I am starving)... sahdev says wo to aapko har waqt lagi rehti hain(sahdev says u always starve for food and laughs).. and all laugh he says moun raho varna(be quite otherwise)... yudi says sabke sab ab moun rehna aur bhojan karna(yudi finally be quite all of u and better look to eat food )... he says panchali jaldi bhojan parsdo varna aise na hoo yahan pralay ajajey (he says panchali serve the food quickly otherwise an earthquake may come here )all other brothers look innocently angry towards each other... then panchali says arya bus subadhra apni hathon se bani mistan larahi hain(panchali says hubby I am waiting for subhi who had made sweet dish with her own hands) nakul says tab to wo mistan hamein nahi milega(then the sweet dish won't be reach to us)... arjun ask kyun sab brata bheem kalenge?(arjun ask why because bheem brother will eat all?) Sahdev says nahi brata arjun brata bheem tak wo pounchega tabhi wok a payenge na(sahdev says no brother he will be able to touch it when it reaches him)... arjun sees him he says kyunki wo sab aapke pedh mein pravesh karchuke honge aur brata bheem kya kisko bhi nahi milega(he says because it would have entered you stomach by then, not only brother bheem no one will get) and laughs... bheem laughs hugely ye satya kaha tune sahdev... Tu hi mera priya anuj hian (u said the fact sahdev, u ar also my fav brother and hugs him)and hugs him.. Tightly... arjun was like omg... sab ke sab(he think everybody) as even yudi and panchali was laughing... Panchali says bus kijiye arya putroon.(be calm my hubbies). . in time subi come with kheer(sweet dish made with milk and rice mainly) in big vessel.. .


she senses arjun little bit angry face and other smiling face and think for sure they must have teased him she then serves all along with dp and all were happy eating ... in turn of arjun eating he eats kheer and remember he had taste it before.. and sees subhi who had face of worries but arjun soon realizes she was the one who made the same kheer in dwarika when he visited back and on asking madhav was about to say but someone interfered and he did not say and sees subhi and smiles... but doesn't praises just to tease her and also that he will get topic to talk in night and make her gussa/anger to melt... All praises and dp says subhi made awesome kheer she herself tasted it while she made... but subhi says brata bheem made awesome ladoo.. and his food smelled so good when she enters the kitchen... when bheem saying thanks says... tuje pata hain subadhra arjun bhi achha kana banaleta hain(bheem tells subhi that arjun to can cook well)... kyun arjun(isn't it arjun?) and laughs.. she sees him.. he says brata bheem aapko neend nahi araha hain kya... (he ask don't u feel sleepy bheem brother?)he says nahi aaj muje neend hi nahi ayega and laughs(no , today I won't get sleepy so soon)all laughs teasing arjun with eyes... and then one by one starts to move out after eating.. . in time... an dasi comes and inform some problem arrived and dp goes.. already 3 brothers were gone and bheem also get up and goes but stop on the way thinking always I will be last one to eat but today arjun was eating slowly than usual ? he turns to sees arjun and subhi there alone and he asking subhi to serve kheer more

Arjun:subadhra muje aur kheer dedo.. tumne bahut ache banayi hain.(he says subadhra give me some more kheer u have made it fine). she serve him more sitting down and was getting up as kheer vessel was empty she was going to refill it but she fell down tripping directly landing on arjun's lap and bheem smiling turns to witness it.. he thinks achha isliye kaane ke bahane baito ho meri priya anuj(bheem realize why arjun sat back soo long who happen to eat fast than others) and smiles but goes leaving the love birds alone.. subhi was seeing arjun's eyes.. pata nahi kahan se hua (don't know but from somewhere )but air started to pass making arjun hair fly as his mukut was not there they were having eye lock section he smiles... she moves away he says kheer bahut swadish banati hoo.. dwarika mein bhi aur yahan bhi(he says u make delivious sweet dish, in dwarika so as over here) and smiles and goes of getting up slowly in mute voice mein tumhari intezaar karoongi hamare katch mein aur tuje mana bi loongi... (in slowly mute voice he says I will be waiting for u in our room and I will get rid of ur anger very soon) he turns and says bhojan karne mein jyada samay mat lagadena(he says don't take too much of time in having your food)... and goes smiling.. she turns wondering why he said but realized why he said soo . dasi informs coming that dp asked has asked subhi to start have her dinner and she will join her shortly as she is on the way subhi says teek hain(fine) and ask daasi to fill the vessel more with kheer..

Subhi enters the room after her dinner along with dp she was little shock so as surprised as the room was decorated (obv suhaag raat ta na ) arjun coolly close the door entering(thank god he didn't leave door open )before she could turn to see he just comes and lift her in arms.. shocking her she sees him shocked arjun smiles saying aise dekrahi hoo jaise pehle baar muje dekrahi hoo(he ask why u r seeing me like this as if u r seeing me for first time)... shayd teek se apni arya ko pehli baar dekrahi ho kya?(Is that u r seeing ur hubby properly ?) She realizes what he meant... after all she saw him before some time but not she cdnt see him properly but later when they had eye lock she was busy lost in his eyes but now, it was different as he was cleanly shaved and looked fresh totally making her get weak spl now when nothing was between them and she was in his arms, held by him ... she was lost in him at moment... because h looked more fresh and it was her hubby now. she was getting lost but soon she realizes how he married her .. Her facial expression changes she says muje neeche uthardijiye(let me down).. he says nahi jab tak tum hamein maf karke apna nahi logi mein neeche nahi utharoonga(he says I won't let u down until u don't forgive me and accept me as ur hubby)... She says agar nahi niche utharenge mei chillavoonga aur yudhister brata se nyaay maangoongi kisis ladki ko uske marzi ke kilaaf paane ki koshish karna kya dharm hain?(she says if u don't let me down I will shout and call all spl ur elder brother and will ask him whether it was right to force and girl against her will?) He says avaish maanglena... parantu ye bhi satya hain tum meri patni hoo(he says u can ask him for sure but u r forgetting u r also my wife) she says parantu brata balram nahi jaante agar jaante ab tak aapki ki huyi Is annay hethu aapko yudh ka awaran dedete (she says but u r forgetting brata balram doesn't know the truth , if he comes to know he would have got into an war with u by now) he says parantu(but)... she says aap baar baar meri brata krishna ka naam mat lijiye.(she says don't try to escape by putting blame on my brother Krishna). aur wo swayan agar muje yahan se seegra hi lekar jayenge(he would come soon and take me away for sure)... he says wo nahi lekar jayenge tuje.. wo to swayan chate hamra viavah samparn hoo.. isliye(he says he won't take u for sure because he himself wanted this wedding to happen )... she stop him in between saying isliye aapne muje sparda ke tofe ke roop mein maangliya... (that is the reason u asked me as an gift for winning an competition? Was it right?)agar yadi aap yudh karke muje jeet lete to shayd mein aapko apna leti lekin jo aapne kiya bahut adharm ta( if u have fought an war and won me, maybe I would have accept u, but what u did was wrong).. vesh badhalkar muje peeda dekkar mujse vivah karna kya dharm ta kya ucheet karya ta...(disguising urself as an saint, marrying me with giving me lots of pain and hurts, was it right?) he leave her down carefully he says parantu meri irada tumein peeda ya kasht dene ka nahi ta.(but my intention was not to hurt u nor give u pain). meine bahut baar sach kehne ki koshish ki par kehnahi paya.. mein uljan mein ta.(I tried to tell u truth so many times, but, I couldn't , I was in confusion too). aur madhav ka adhesh bhi ta... jab tak hum indraprast nahi pounchte mein sach na batavoon aur jab mein batane wala ta braata bheem ke pukaar ne ki wajese(madhav ordered me not to tell the truth until we reached indraprastav , when I was about to tell u actual truth , but brata bheem spoiled by calling out my name)... she says mein kuch nahi jaanti... aapni mujse satya chupakar meri saat bahut bada adharm kiya hain(she says I don't know. I just know u hided ur identity and u did a huge crime).. and walks away... meine pehle bhi kaha meri paas ane ki koshish mat kijiye... duniya keliye hum vivahit hain parantu is kamre mein ke andaar do anjaan log hain(I told u before also, don't try to come near me , may be for outer world we are married but inside this room, we are stranger to each other )... he was shocked.. wo bhi isliye kyunki brata balraam ko abhi tak nahi pata hain satya kya hain agar pata hote to ab tak yudh ladne keliye narayani sena ke saath ip ke dwaar par achuke honge... Isliye ab tak hum chup hain.. hum nahi chate hamare wajese sab ke saath adharm hoo(I am quite because brata balram doesn't know the truth, if he come to know he would come with the huge army in door of indraprastav, that is the reason I am quite. I don't want be the reason for others to get destroyed in name of war) he was like wondering where the matter was dragging?

He then to kya hum tumein jeet keliye tumhari saath yudh karna hoga? (he then ask do I need to fight with u to win u?) She turns and says yudh (war)? yudh ke baath mat kijiye.. yudh too meri andar horaha ta(don't talk about war, it is happening inside me).. aapse vivah karne samay...(intime of marrying u) aur har pal meri andar ek yudh hi chal raha tha aapki wajse...(and every moment an war is happening inside me) he was like meine kya kiya(what did I do)... paratntu subadhra.. ab..(but subadhra now) she says muje smaran hain agar mein aapke saath yudh karoongi ye satya hain aap jeet jayenge aur hamaein harana aapkeliye kast nahi hain... (I know if I fight war with u, for sure I would be defeated after all it is not an big deal for u to defeat me) to mein kya karoon subadhra tumhare naraazki door kaise karoon?(he then ask then what should I do to get rid of ur anger?) She sees him and says dyut(game of dice) he sees her ... she says dyut keliye aur agar aap jeet gaye to hum wahi karenge jo aap chahenge..(play game of dice with me, if u win I will do what u want) he was looking her in horror (oh no hope he s not thinking if he loses uska vastr haran na hojay(disrobing)... ) aur jeet jayenge too aapko swayan hamein dwarika chodkar ana hoga(and if I win u,urself will take me back to dwarika and leave me there) ... he was like where the hell matter was diverting? He says nahi subadhra mein dyut nahi keloonga...(i won't play game of dice) kyun bhaya lag raha hain(why, r u afraid?)... he laughs saying jab kalivan se hii bhaya nahi laga to isse kya,(he laughs saying when I was not scad of kaliyavan why would I get afraid of this?) parantu mein dyut nahi khelta... ye meri dharm ke kilaaf hain... na hi muje khelna pasand hain(but I don't play this game of dice because it is against my truth/dignity)... to teek hain aap meri paas ane ki koshish mat kijiye(then fine don't try to come near me)... and goes of... shocking him.. he thinks what is happening.. why is she so much angry with me? My intention was not to hurt her... why she did not understand me? Ab sirf madhav hi hain jo meri madat karsakte hain is duvida se wahi nikalsakte hain aur apni behen ko samja sakte hain satya kya hain... muje intezaar karna hi hoga ab(now only person who can make her understand, what is actual truth is madhav and also help me from coming out of this situation which is not good at present).. he goes and sees subadhra who was in tears standing and watching the moon sky and star... he says tum mujse naaraaz ho par nedhra se nahi na.. tum vishraam karoo mein(he says u r angry on me not on ur slumber right? Go and sleep i..) she says muje neend nahi araha hain mein kud ki kyal rakth sakti hoon aapko meri dyan rakne ki jaroorat nahi hain.(I am not sleepy, I can take care of myself and u don't need to take care of me). . he says parantu(but).. She walks of crossing him... and her chunni(her upper stole/pallu) get caught in his golden hand gloves she stops and says meri vastr ko chodiye... (leave my cloth) he sees and then smiling goes in front of her and shows the cloth stuck in his jewel piece she tries to remove but it was not happening.. then she tries to pull but it doesn't happen she sees him she says aap apna sone ki ye vastr uthar kar muje dijiye mein kal lauuthadoongi.. he says mein nahi utharoonga kyunki ye muje adheek priya hain.. (she says remove and give me that golden accessory I will return u tomorrow, he says I won't remove I love it very much and smiles showing his naughty intention)

Now what will happen? How will subhi's chunri get removed from his glove or she will find some other way as it was her uthriya(stole) chunni which got stuck in his gloves ?


Edited by shavii - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow Great update!Totally enjoyed reading it,especially arjun-subadra scenes.Eagerly waiting 4 the next part.Update asap.Thanks 4 the pm
Edited by PARVATHY44 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved it waitin for our madhav's arrival and thanx for the pm :-)
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice.
waiting for d nxt part.

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