Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS OS 5 Link to #2 in Pg 1(21/8)

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

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+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Congrats on the new story Smita and Rashmi.. 🤗

Coming to the start, its so wonderful.. Perfect example of soulmates meeting.. He was against but still he met Khushi in a different environment and had this pull towards her.. So so sweet..😳

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rulama

@rulama

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: toeditor
Beautiful. But it's an OS??????!!!! 😲

Yep Viji...😉

Next is another type of encounter...😆

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just4this

@just4this

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#53

fabulous dear . all ready i have said this i am in love with ur writting simple yet classy and pure.

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inamajar

@inamajar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Such a Beautiful piece. Simply Loved it 😊

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Anu.nd.Me

@Anu.nd.Me

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Khushi doesn't stop talking atall 🤣 loved ASR.. and his akad.. 😆 Cute Story.. 😃

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pmohan89

@pmohan89

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#56

Awesome part 1 and 2.

Hehehe...he just can't stay away from her .She is a mad mad mad girl but always brings a smile on his face.

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Seeta

@LadyR

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#57

This was truly a delight to read and visualize, thank you !

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stg1

@stg1

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#58

yay, new series of os's from u loved this one, u always get the essence of arnav and khushi and the family perfectly but i really love the humour and sweetness and inevitability of this one - falling in love at first sight, it was written in their stars

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#59

Awwee... Such a sweet nd adorable OS... Khushi toh bilkul sanki hain... But she's cute... No wonder Arnav fell for her immediately... Lovely shot Smita Di...thanks fr the mail Rashmi...